Lifes A Bitch

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September 9th, 2005, 03:14 PM
aSap iLL

Lifes A Bitch

BoneCollector
Lifes a bitch...things happen that you dont want to..
People tell you things but..you just hope its untrue...
Ina split second your life can change at a blink of an eye
When people wish bad on u & leave u hung out to dry
I remember my cousin drew...wish he was here till this day
I remember all the things we did but now it just fades away
My little cousin Jon was only 10 when his life was taken from me
Crip'n aint easy thats what he said,i just tell myself his soul was set free
Jarrett my nucca from way bacc,Why'd you have to rob that house
Then.....steal that car.....And merk that spouse..
As for me...i was jumped when i was 13 ,lost my chain and ring..
I told my nucca's to squad up..and leave not one living thing..
Loading our rachets we fired at the opposing crew like goin to war
I saw the guy's who had jumped....me layin on the floor..
I loaded my gun and fired letting all my anger out on them..
As the concret squares.........turned into blood red gems...
I ask my self was it all worth it ? As i sit behind bars...?
All this just leaves deep imaginary scars..

Hook
Lifes a bitch what can i say?...
Just to take it day by day...
Everyone knows life is hard..
But never be taken off guard...

Spray-Paint
I should…be taking all the revenge and retribution,
Devise a plan to exterminate all the mental pollution,
There’s no time for disillusion, only a lifespan worth of exploring,
Rather be finding the secrets than opening chests and leave blood pouring,
Continue enduring, till I find the answer and start curing,
Myself and everything, fix destiny, and answer death’s luring,
Where would I be? Provoking thoughts might put me in the cemetery,
Maybe I’m supposed to be there, easy to get shot by an adversary,
Random deaths, unnamed bodies in the mortuary,
Girls getting pregnant more times than they can carry,
Babies growing up not knowing the face of their daddy,
Asking themselves the same damn questions, growing up to getting fucked up like Stanley,
So I’m writing a letter to god asking him these questions,
Its time I pulled up my boots and stopped this questing, please I’m requesting.

Hook x2
Lifes a bitch what can i say?...
Just to take it day by day...
Everyone knows life is hard..
But never be taken off guard...
September 9th, 2005, 03:18 PM
Eye`

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...07#post3125507
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=230326
September 9th, 2005, 06:15 PM
Dman7467

chorus was kinda eh......verses where nice tho....liked your verse just a bit more it just seemed cleaner......straight type shit here....

Quote:

Jarrett my nucca from way bacc,Why'd you have to rob that house
Then.....steal that car.....And merk that spouse..

lol^^^^
September 9th, 2005, 06:28 PM
~ladie_streetz~

i liked this drop...
very emotiuonal... interestin as well... the flow was tight and i was feelin this all the way.... it was serious also... shows real feelings, and i love the real thing not fake... had a good structure and eveything was hot kepp up the good work ya'll
September 9th, 2005, 06:44 PM
aSap iLL

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dman7467

Jarrett my nucca from way bacc,Why'd you have to rob that house
Then.....steal that car.....And merk that spouse..

lol^^^^

Is that funny to you ! :mad:
September 9th, 2005, 06:59 PM
Eye`

word thanx for the feedback peeps, we appreciate it.....uppin
September 9th, 2005, 07:04 PM
BAM BAM

good show by both
u compliment eachother
gd flow
ok structure
gd wordplay
work on the hook and the shits cool
September 9th, 2005, 07:53 PM
Eye`

thanx bam bam......any more feedback?
September 9th, 2005, 07:56 PM
~ladie_streetz~

oh hit my piece up taht i just dropped yamean... thanks...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=230970
September 9th, 2005, 10:16 PM
aSap iLL

Bump this for some more feedback please
September 9th, 2005, 10:24 PM
Frostbite

I like it Bone really feelin it
Structure nice flow nice and wordplay
All I can say is Keep doin ur thing
Spray that verse waz ill son u got madd potential
9/10 overall
End battle me cuz
September 9th, 2005, 10:59 PM
.Vendetta.

Nice drop man......you brought good emothion in there.......but the only bad thing was the poor vocab improve that and you will be very good
September 10th, 2005, 01:52 PM
Eye`

word thanx for the feed peeps........Bump!
September 11th, 2005, 02:37 AM
aSap iLL

Bump this.....uppin for some more feedback
September 11th, 2005, 06:37 PM
Daz

as an audio peice it was ok.
the chorus was alright
I guess it would be better if i heard it since its a song

I cant say much just by reading it.
September 11th, 2005, 09:13 PM
aSap iLL

Word ima see if i can make this isnt an audio..

Upping for some more feedback
September 17th, 2005, 01:05 PM
aSap iLL

Bump...................
September 22nd, 2005, 03:19 PM
aSap iLL

All Rise.
September 22nd, 2005, 05:11 PM
MainEvent249

nice drop guys. good emotion for bone's verse and good vocab from spray's verse. the chorus needs work on it but thats pretty minor. flow was also good overall. good job guys.
October 1st, 2005, 05:31 AM
DATBOIP

shit was deep.
need a music video fo dat. fa real
dunt know about tha hook tho...
really... short...
but you made it, be proud of it.
ya kno?
October 1st, 2005, 06:04 AM
This Aint Beef

"I loaded my gun and fired letting all my anger out on them..
As the concret squares.........turned into blood red gems..."

^ My favourite bar from the drop. Very emotional for sure. Flowed well throughout. I felt Bone was slightly better than spray, but propz to both of you. Oh.... fuck 'Dman7467' for laughing.