Dreams: Da mindz world

[~ladie_streetz~]

Dreams: Da mindz world...... true

Looking in the mirror at night neatly combing my hair
Then I get to my bed hoping I don’t have a bad nightmare
It’s cold as fuck in my room so I lay down dressed in layers
Don’t know if I’ll wake up the next day so I say my prayers
The dream is blurry suddenly I find my self helplessly drowning
Then I see many red demons with walls of fire for my surrounding

In one of my dreams I went to hell now screaming in my sleep
Next to me was a familiar girl from a fairytale bloody little Bo peep
Sorry to say but the worst came when in my dream I got raped
The mothafucka had me tied up and had me video taped
Then a volcano hit got burned up because my friends left me behind
Wonder what will happen next, is these dreams a warning or sign?

Wake up for school with memories of my horrible dreams in my mind
I killed a nigga bloodless got put in jail for life with this crime
cant have the happiness in my dreams everything is black
thought this shit was untrue but its all now unfolding as a fact
wakes up in sweats nervous glimpsin around my dark room
tryna bear the fact that i just might be leavin the earth soon
dreams are filled with deformed angels with their insides discombinin
these dreams show that my life aint goin forward its only rewindin
they always indicated that i would someday drop and die
next day broad daylight i got shot now lookin dead up at the sky

[~ladie_streetz~]

uppin for feed back on this... get at it yamean.....

[ExPlOsIvE]

This was a nice drop i liked the topic and flow to it. The rhymes were nice and the multis were pretty nice aswell. Wrdplay was aight, u stayed on topic well. nice wrk.
Overall id giv it 8.5/10

Keep it up
Peace

[G-Money]

this was nice... a deep emotional piece... not much wordplay or mutlis, metas were nice.... the topic was dark n deep, this piece of been better if u would of put a lil sick twist on it but it was still very decent... havent read much of work but i plan to do so in the future keep droppin ....

return the favor : http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=229158

[~ladie_streetz~]

thanks for that... glad you liked it yamean..... and i'll check it out

[Trigon]

everything was nice... (multies vocab, flow Ect.) but not wicked ill.... but pretty nice

8.5
stay up

[~ladie_streetz~]

thanks glad oyu liked it... it coulda had more work to it as well... but i was jus tellin it lik it is that how my dreams really are... don dream of shit but weird scary shit for some reason...

[Fresh to death]

shit was like 6 da wordplay was that good dats wat threw it off
u neeed some work but its all good
ight 1

[Antonio Banderas]

This piece is about is good as your record, but do you really want to rap about being raped in a dream? That part really caught my attention.... Kind of a shocker... however, this drop was pretty good... of course you remained on topic

[~ladie_streetz~]

thnaks..... i have alot of om's you can check them out if you want.. and glad you enjoyed it