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...Preach good Fights...
My thoughts on Preaching for Friends, Families, and Crews...The end of this is sort of based on Betrayal...I wrote this because It just sort of popped into my head around 2-3 in the morning after I woke up from a Nightmare...Preaching? Nightmares? Damn...Kinda goes back to back against eachother In a way :huh: ?
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Preaching Lyrics, smashing all the 'conspirics',
Religiously over-turned, Being burned by sinics,
You don't always win like in the Chronicles of Riddicks,
.........Ridiculed by somebody other than yall Crew,
All you do is go to your leader and say "What do I do?"
Then he preaches and says you'll make it through,
The Proud and the few, Pride mixed with good Love,
Knock your enemies out...when they push you shove,
Make 'em look worse than maggots, Un-Earthly Grubs,
Talking bout Osamas fake ass Drugs, Preach for mothers,
Your crews, friends, and brothers, don't hate the fathers,
Blame the fighting and divorced parent without bothers,
Not thinking about they're kids, Love Indeed.............
Broke parents bustin ferternal lids, They're all in need,
Shouldn't have kids that you cannot even feed,
Kinda like Tara Reed, She must've had 22 abortions,
Not even upset or blue about not Suportin',
No excuses...Nothing you can say, Like Randy Ortan,
Keep it real in your hood, flash homies big smiles,
Not being miss-understood lets you ride for miles,
Rep. With all styles, No guns means fair Trials,
You Realize that your crew don't give goodnights,
Start backin' up before they read they're rights,
Use Lyrics not punches and preach the good fights...
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Leave good comments and advice if needed...Peace
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Nice shit nigga u Got mad Skillz to me nice mutils Wordplay flow overall u stick to yo subject of tha matter i wanna see u battle.lol Overall Rating.
9.9/10-GOod shit
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Check my OM(OpenMic) Young,Impaired,Scarced, its good shit yo :yes:
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yea man nice...don't really see anything wrong with it...good vocab, flow, structure, wordplay good drop........
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Thanks niggas....Especially from you Young_block :) I'm Nashville Terror...You've seen me battle I gurentee it lol...Thanks for comments uppin...
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Uppin for more feed..............Peace
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Uppin more feed please....
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Uppin 4 feed..................
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this was a good piece from you homie.It had a really good storyline in it.Also it had good Imagry and emotion in it too.When I read it I could get a picture in my head of what it was about.Also your structure was ok and you had really good wordplay too.But overall I think this is one of the best pieces I seen from you homie.Keep up the good work.And if your tryin to get in a topical forum crew try out for Divine Diction we are looking for more heads to join that crew.
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I liked Tara Reid in American Pie.
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yo i wanna post my lyrics on open mic how do i do it im new to dis site
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man that shit was crazy ur flow rhymes it was alll there
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loved this peice the story behind it was strong and the rhymes 10/10
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Upping for some real harsh down to earth comments and critics...UPP!
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wtf, the feed on this piece wouldnt have helped you to improve on anything!
well first off, leave feed...make it worth while so the artist can learn and improve on this piece...and i thought that seeing as this was inspired from a nightmare (so you said).... you must have been dreamin or thinkin bout some deep shit....
the structure wasnt bad, but i had to re-read some parts so i didnt get confused about what was hapnnin.... i did get the rest of the story tho, and the abortions part was made very clear, and u placed strong statments on how you were feeling... the multi's were ok, but at times... i noticed the flow a lil off... rhymes was good tho, and vocab was pretty well thought out, keep droppin man...elevate on this piece..good drop
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ah tight shit good flow, structure all 9.5/10 it was an awakening for you dogg keep da om's comin
