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no crew votes
no d/r votes
blind spit
due by 10
no written verse
good luck
Czech 1-2
Dead'll shake the funny and rattle this clown down in a scrimmage
Here's a pair of concrete boots...to go wit that Watered down image
Look here, this kid's not even decent, he came wit no flow
The type to win ROOKIE OF THE YEAR...5 years in a row
U soft dawg...ya bitch ass the type the type to call the cops
Drop me? U should stay focused on tryin make ya balls drop
I'll whore this kid, and punch infinitely til just a Corpse is left
Then make you call me Oxygen......when u finish Short of Breath
But enough with the small talk, just spit and shut up herb
You can't come hard, not even your SIG's looking UP to your verse
Your rhymes are garbage, watch me stuff em and can it
It's like he wrote his verse on a Stone Tablet...
...Cuz people always take his wordz for Granite!
Matter of fact, that's it...a waste of time & another empty moment
VOTERS: DONT SLEEP ON THIS......
But Im'a take a nap, wake me up if you see my opponent
I went 16 g'luck
of da head
[/B]small punchlines not hurting me lil nigga honestly don't get big...
cause you couldn't beat me even if you had help from da niggaz in ya sig...
my hits,structure and wording hitting hard plus my crone is rite...
mutha fucka you couldn't get 2 votes even if you own dis site...
mental problems so when you die ya family goin bury you in a phsyco-grave..
i don't think you could spit hot even if you put ya saliver in a micro-wave ...
make cash dead serious dats why evil king payday-known...
you dominucan stop rapping go make some regga-ton...
my hits going hard threw ya flesh i know it feels like you gettin shank b...
ya quala ass belong in concerts making songs wit tego and daddy yankee...
goin feel like a taco customer when i'm done giving you all these shells...
madafact you goin feel like bob marley after i hand you all these L's....
neva say strong words in ya verse's all you be doing is poping shit...
best chance you got in gettin a vote is if dey switch da poll question opposite...[B]
eazy
didn't go hard couldn't really think i'm on da phone man neva mind fuck excuses
nice drop, yea I was talkin wit my ex when I dropped, but no excuses here either. 1st up, let's get some vote peoples
uppin 1
Dead Serious- when u started your verse it was wack, then u came with some punches then drop 2 wack again, u gotta stay focus, give good punches throw out if u wanna win battles. use better vocabs and be creative. also i don't like ur structure, fix that up man. Evil- u had a better verse. u was more direct with ur punches, and ur flow was good. u had better wordin and structure.
v/evil
on dat microwave line i meant couldn't
It's coo, cuz I dind't mean to write "the type the type" on my 5th line :laugh:
Shoulda made the post count higher for the votes.
uppin 2
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my vote is for evil king.....because he had slightly better punches.......dead u had good every thing just like evil....all u had to do was step up ur punches alittle and u had the win....
punches:evil king
strucure:tie
wordplay:neither
personals:tie
creativity:tie
v/evil king
evil king won this basically... he had better flow and had nice punches came stri=ong and i liked the verse..
dead had a nice verse but needed to work harder on the punches.. evil king hit the hardest at punches
vote/evil K
thanks uppin 5.............................................
this was a good battle. . .both came real good,
but I gotta give to evil for comin wit harder punches and good flow..
v/evil
Dead'll shake the funny and rattle this clown down in a scrimmage
Here's a pair of concrete boots...to go wit that Watered down image
But enough with the small talk, just spit and shut up herb
You can't come hard, not even your SIG's looking UP to your verse
vs
small punchlines not hurting me lil nigga honestly don't get big...
cause you couldn't beat me even if you had help from da niggaz in ya sig...
v/Dead Serious. Evil had the Dominican lines, but none of them were strong personals. Dead Serious was more creative, the sig punch was nice.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=228783
Dead Serious:
Dead'll shake the funny and rattle this clown down in a scrimmage
Here's a pair of concrete boots...to go wit that Watered down image
^^OK OPENER
Look here, this kid's not even decent, he came wit no flow
The type to win ROOKIE OF THE YEAR...5 years in a row
^^MEH NOT THAT GOOD OF PUNCH
U soft dawg...ya bitch ass the type the type to call the cops
Drop me? U should stay focused on tryin make ya balls drop
^^NOPE THIS WAS A WEAK BAR PLUS YOU REPEATED YA SELF IN
THE 1ST LINE
I'll whore this kid, and punch infinitely til just a Corpse is left
Then make you call me Oxygen......when u finish Short of Breath
^^WHOLE BAR SELF GLORY
But enough with the small talk, just spit and shut up herb
You can't come hard, not even your SIG's looking UP to your verse
^^OK BUT COULD OF BEEN WORDED BETTER
Your rhymes are garbage, watch me stuff em and can it
It's like he wrote his verse on a Stone Tablet...
...Cuz people always take his wordz for Granite!
^^COOL
Matter of fact, that's it...a waste of time & another empty moment
VOTERS: DONT SLEEP ON THIS......
But Im'a take a nap, wake me up if you see my opponent
^^NICE ENDING
Evil King:
[/B]small punchlines not hurting me lil nigga honestly don't get big...
cause you couldn't beat me even if you had help from da niggaz in ya sig...
^^MEH OPENER CAUSE IT SOUNDS IS IF YOU FED FROM HIS VERSE
ABOUT THE WHOLE SIG PUNCH
my hits,structure and wording hitting hard plus my crone is rite...
mutha fucka you couldn't get 2 votes even if you own dis site...
^^PLAYED OUT
mental problems so when you die ya family goin bury you in a phsyco-grave..
i don't think you could spit hot even if you put ya saliver in a micro-wave ...
^^NO
make cash dead serious dats why evil king payday-known...
you dominucan stop rapping go make some regga-ton...
^^YOUR JUST THROWING RHYMING WORDS TOGETHER
my hits going hard threw ya flesh i know it feels like you gettin shank b...
ya quala ass belong in concerts making songs wit tego and daddy yankee...
^^NOPE
goin feel like a taco customer when i'm done giving you all these shells...
madafact you goin feel like bob marley after i hand you all these L's....
^^BETTER BAR OUT OF ALL THE ABOVE
neva say strong words in ya verse's all you be doing is poping shit...
best chance you got in gettin a vote is if dey switch da poll question opposite...[B]
^^NOT BETTER CLOSER THEN OPPONENT
V/Dead Serious
for comin with a better verse wit creativity and punches
Dead Serious when u started your verse was wack, and ur punches were wack to use some better vocab and be a lil more creative. ur structure, needs to elevate some more man. Evil u had a better verse overall, ur punches were straight, and flow was good...structure was good as well so.
v/evil
all Evil's votes DQ. not explained.
3rd up
ayo ayo.the vote breakdown is very simple Dead Serious took this in ever case!!
Punchlines-Dead Serious.....thats what caught my attention...and the other dude just didn't come wit' it....good battle thy serious one....keep elevatin'!!
V/ Dead Serious
4th up
recycled lines by evil king.
small punchlines not hurting me lil nigga honestly don't get big...
cause you couldn't beat me even if you had help from da niggaz in ya sig...
my hits,structure and wording hitting hard plus my crone is rite...
mutha fucka you couldn't get 2 votes even if you own dis site...
uppin since my votes were dqed
Battle was hot and it also was close
Dead-shit was alight but seams like 1st grade kinda ish good flow
Evil-it was good flow structures and punches
v/evil
overal good battle *two thumbs up*
im feelin eveil king smae like alot it came down to punches
v/ evil king
Dead Serious would get my vote if i hade 100posts--
.....decent battle on both parties....
breakdown
punches-close but id say king
flow-even
multis-niether
metas-tie
evil ya stand out line to me was when
make cash dead serious dats why evil king payday-known...
you dominucan stop rapping go make some regga-ton...
thats fucked up but funny cause im dominican....
dead ya big fonts aint really help ya punches so tone that down just a lil....ya stand out line
[i]Look here, this kid's not even decent, he came wit no flow
The type to win ROOKIE OF THE YEAR...5 years in a row[/]
that shyt had me rollin.....
over all tho imma have to say that king took this his consistancy whas there and had more creativity there were alot of punches in ur verse dead that ive either used or seen being used....
vote-evil king...
Dead'll shake the funny and rattle this clown down in a scrimmage
Here's a pair of concrete boots...to go wit that Watered down image
Nice
Look here, this kid's not even decent, he came wit no flow
The type to win ROOKIE OF THE YEAR...5 years in a row
Naw
U soft dawg...ya bitch ass the type the type to call the cops
Drop me? U should stay focused on tryin make ya balls drop
Iight
I'll whore this kid, and punch infinitely til just a Corpse is left
Then make you call me Oxygen......when u finish Short of Breath
IIght
But enough with the small talk, just spit and shut up herb
You can't come hard, not even your SIG's looking UP to your verse
Nice
Your rhymes are garbage, watch me stuff em and can it
It's like he wrote his verse on a Stone Tablet...
Naw
...Cuz people always take his wordz for Granite!
Matter of fact, that's it...a waste of time & another empty moment
Naw
VS
small punchlines not hurting me lil nigga honestly don't get big...
cause you couldn't beat me even if you had help from da niggaz in ya sig...
IIght
my hits,structure and wording hitting hard plus my crone is rite...
mutha fucka you couldn't get 2 votes even if you own dis site...
Lol
mental problems so when you die ya family goin bury you in a phsyco-grave..
i don't think you could spit hot even if you put ya saliver in a micro-wave ...
Lol Nice
make cash dead serious dats why evil king payday-known...
you dominucan stop rapping go make some regga-ton...
iight
my hits going hard threw ya flesh i know it feels like you gettin shank b...
ya quala ass belong in concerts making songs wit tego and daddy yankee...
IIght
goin feel like a taco customer when i'm done giving you all these shells...
madafact you goin feel like bob marley after i hand you all these L's....
Naw
neva say strong words in ya verse's all you be doing is poping shit...
best chance you got in gettin a vote is if dey switch da poll question opposite...
Lol Nice
V/ Dead You came a lil weak but you had some good shit....Evil king yo verse cracked me up start to finished and you had some good punches so ma vote gose to you..pz
This was a close battle but evil took tis away with punches and flow....I liked the other dudes verse about as equally and kings tho....Both were very enjoyable to read...I like battles like this cause it makes it easier on me to vote..I don't have to tell them what they need to grow...both of you need nothing except to keep battling...Good spits and keep doing what yall do....
V/ King for punchlines and better enjoyability
i like to piss people off no i love to piss people off so i vote da guy wit 4votes haha
i like to piss people off no i love to piss people off so i vote da guy wit 4votes haha fuckin loser Bitch ass trick