10-14 lines
30 min
ill spit first
good luk
no crew votes or dr or hate votes cause maybe ban or dq
10-14 lines
30 min
ill spit first
good luk
no crew votes or dr or hate votes cause maybe ban or dq
hey dogg im spitten
philly cat wut kinda name is that
come on anything other than PILLYCAT
how bad ur rhymes are there rude and crude
im gonna run all ova you have a fued
hey u smell like shit in a can
my first battle, an era just began
i havent evan see u u probably a nerd
you an asswipe plus a terd
man i aint gonna lie ima kill 'ya
for u to win ur gonna need a thriller
i aint no 50 cent
wen im done wit u its like a hardcore wrestling event
he be watching homo and im watin babe porn
wut r u and ya boyfriend gonna name it wen it is born
Big Pimpin?, this Hova wannabe wants to takeover the game?
but the only time he brings in money, is at the end of his name
With Vida Guerra as your avy, it might serve as a clue...
that you have to sign in to rb to get a hot bitch under you
I'm here caus there's a lesson to teach, your future's bleak
you ran your mouth....
so I put you in a wheelchair to correct your speech
I can see right through your weak lines with prefect clarity
you couldn't handle my shit even with perfect dexterity
I'm killing bigpimpin, spending this g, his situation's dire
now I'll make him fade to black...........and finally retire
nice lol lets see who won
nice job phills
Big Pimpin Thats A Jay-Z Song!
I Hate Jay-Z But you get my vote 4 good punches and flow. work on the sructure tho homes.
The other cat i will give you credit for punches. work on every thing else.
Yo PhillyCat went out there and he was alright. Big Money u wouldve done a lot better if u wouldve expanded on ya lines, there to short. So work on that 4 ya next battle. PhillyCat u did have a FEW good lines but i sure hope u can come harder later in the game.. With that my vote goes to PhillyCat ^^^^
up.
lets gets some more votes in here
uppin #3
i totaly agree u had some good lines.Originally Posted by UptownNolia
just come harder with the punches
and expand your lines and you'll do better.
big i kinda like yo flow but u aint come as hard as
philly.u did have good structure and some good lines though.
just come harder on the punches yuo'll be good.
v/philly for punches(close battle)
BigPimpin$$
philly cat wut kinda name is that
come on anything other than PILLYCAT
No
how bad ur rhymes are there rude and crude
im gonna run all ova you have a fued
No
hey u smell like shit in a can
my first battle, an era just began
No
i havent evan see u u probably a nerd
you an asswipe plus a terd
No
man i aint gonna lie ima kill 'ya
for u to win ur gonna need a thriller
No
i aint no 50 cent
wen im done wit u its like a hardcore wrestling event
No
he be watching homo and im watin babe porn
wut r u and ya boyfriend gonna name it wen it is born
No
Your verse was terrible. Structure was off because your bars were to short. No good punches. No personals about your opponent. No multi's, or metaphors. Your verse was basically describing it as a newbie. Go through elevation an have someone help you improve your lines.
PhillyKat
Big Pimpin?, this Hova wannabe wants to takeover the game?
but the only time he brings in money, is at the end of his name
*Meh*
With Vida Guerra as your avy, it might serve as a clue...
that you have to sign in to rb to get a hot bitch under you
mmk
I'm here caus there's a lesson to teach, your future's bleak
you ran your mouth....
so I put you in a wheelchair to correct your speech
ok
I can see right through your weak lines with prefect clarity
you couldn't handle my shit even with perfect dexterity
ok
I'm killing bigpimpin, spending this g, his situation's dire
now I'll make him fade to black...........and finally retire
*meh*
Your verse was ok. You had 2 or 3 decent punches. 1 ok personal. You used 1 bar for a multi which is better then none. Your strucutre was ok. You can also extend your bars they seemed a little too short. Elevate on strucutre an punches.
Break Down
Punches- Philly
Personals-Philly
Flow- Tie
Strucutre- Philly
Multi's-Philly
Metaphors- Philly
Wordplay- Philly
Similies- Philly
Enjoyable- Philly
v/ PhillyKat for harder hitting punches
nothen
vs
Big Pimpin?, this Hova wannabe wants to takeover the game?
but the only time he brings in money, is at the end of his name
big-verse was wack i wasnt feeling none of the punces you need to elevate keep battling and get better though
philly-verse was coo but you coud of came with moer punches good shit but yuo need to up your level but your punches came noobish but keep drop strcuture was koo good shit nothen specuali though
v/philly ill vote when i get my 100 post
BigPimpin$$
philly cat wut kinda name is that
come on anything other than PILLYCAT
No
how bad ur rhymes are there rude and crude
im gonna run all ova you have a fued
No
hey u smell like shit in a can
my first battle, an era just began
No
i havent evan see u u probably a nerd
you an asswipe plus a terd
No
man i aint gonna lie ima kill 'ya
for u to win ur gonna need a thriller
No
i aint no 50 cent
wen im done wit u its like a hardcore wrestling event
No
he be watching homo and im watin babe porn
wut r u and ya boyfriend gonna name it wen it is born
No
Your verse was terrible. Structure was off because your bars were to short. No good punches. No personals about your opponent. No multi's, or metaphors. Your verse was basically describing it as a newbie. Go through elevation an have someone help you improve your lines.
PhillyKat
Big Pimpin?, this Hova wannabe wants to takeover the game?
but the only time he brings in money, is at the end of his name
*Meh*
With Vida Guerra as your avy, it might serve as a clue...
that you have to sign in to rb to get a hot bitch under you
mmk
I'm here caus there's a lesson to teach, your future's bleak
you ran your mouth....
so I put you in a wheelchair to correct your speech
ok
I can see right through your weak lines with prefect clarity
you couldn't handle my shit even with perfect dexterity
ok
I'm killing bigpimpin, spending this g, his situation's dire
now I'll make him fade to black...........and finally retire
*meh*
Your verse was ok. You had 2 or 3 decent punches. 1 ok personal. You used 1 bar for a multi which is better then none. Your strucutre was ok. You can also extend your bars they seemed a little too short. Elevate on strucutre an punches.
Break Down
Punches- Philly
Personals-Philly
Flow- Tie
Strucutre- Philly
Multi's-Philly
Metaphors- Philly
Wordplay- Philly
Similies- Philly
Enjoyable- Philly
v/ PhillyKat for harder hitting punches
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