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No BS vote
VOTE COUNT AT 500
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In case anyone's wondering the two crews battling here are Anomalistical Minds and Soul-Taking Mafia...
I ain't worried, cos when they say P's verses are a bit hit 'n miss
They mean he gets hit and his punches miss, s'why I'ma shit on this
I spit on kids, how's a battle of wits gonna be won by a Plain Thug?
N' ya won't be drinking to victory after my punches break your mug
Ya name's mud, got no friends, fag, they all left for the better
When they saw you wanting "meat up", didn't mean a get-together
Ya punches hit like a feather, but my hat's off to you...
Collecting donations for rhyming lessons for your wack crew
Look watchu do, claimin not to wet yourself on seeing a real MC?
That argument doesn't hold water, like you on catchin sight of me
Ya spellt ya crew name wrong, G, you're the one getting a whipping
After all, the SOLE-Taking Mafia's used to receiving a butt-kicking
if you don't get any of the wordplay ASK and DON'T VOTE until ya get it. I'm fed up of dumbass votes. Dumbasses are gonna be called out to get clowned.
Other than that, leave links, I'll vote honestly on all battles of people who leave detailed honest votes, whoever they vote for.
I feel sorry for ya crew...Steve made a mistake givin u his co-spot
Just like dis battle...U'll git no votes like a geek convention parkin lot
Dont they only accept people in ya crew who dope,why you in then?
Shit rappin aint ya thing...Ya better off wit Table tenis n batminton
Man i barely see you online...I bet people dont even know you alive
Ya so willing for any good rhymes....den da show desperate house wives
Tryin to beat me...Ha,its like an adventure,just like da show jonny quest*
Ima leave you more un-known than you are,like ya hometown budapest
Shit, ya crew wazz real good until they re-cruited and had yo' shoes
Ya rhymes R more plainer den ma name,its like da theme song of blue clues
* An old classic tv show with a character named jonny quest who Went on dailt adventures and shit.....uppin...............
aigh peace, up1
Can someone wit fuckin 500 posts vote already.............please.............
uppin this shit
up3, come on peeps, I vote on loads of battles
of course I'll vote honestly......plain thug didn't come as hard as he usually does but came decent and could of worked some multis in there....and took out some filler...but I give his diss verse a 6/10.....cause it wasn't his best.....vaskez had better punches and a little bit of a betta flow and his lines got harder and harder....bar after bar...his ending was good and his verse was better so he wins...I give him a 7.5/10...nice battle and keep elevating.
vote- vaskez
Vote on ma battles here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=222809
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=139897
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=213566
uppin this for votes all.... and this doesnt count against vaskez by the way
vaskez won this with better punches.. he also had a better structure than plain thug... thugs structure wuz fucked up... lines stretched too long both need work on ya verses though
vote/vaskez for way better punches and better verse with a good structure
vote on this thank you
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=223462
Vaskez
I spit on kids, how's a battle of wits gonna be won by a Plain Thug?
N' ya won't be drinking to victory after my punches break your mug
Ya name's mud, got no friends, fag, they all left for the better
When they saw you wanting "meat up", didn't mean a get-together
Ya punches hit like a feather, but my hat's off to you...
Collecting donations for rhyming lessons for your wack crew
Look watchu do, claimin not to wet yourself on seeing a real MC?
That argument doesn't hold water, like you on catchin sight of me
Ya spellt ya crew name wrong, G, you're the one getting a whipping
After all, the SOLE-Taking Mafia's used to receiving a butt-kicking
Not a bad verse, continue with the dopeness my nigga, The Sole-Taking line was funny
vs
Plain-Thug
nothing
You're a real plain internet thug, work on elevatin' dude, no hate though
v/vaskez..... a way better verse by a landslide, that consisted better punches, and wordplay, need I say more
Vote= Vaskez
He had harder punches and better wordplay...both had good structure and the rhyme was there...but Plain Thug ya verse was basically like ya name said...the shit was plain...tryin usin wordplay and be more creative wit ya punches...well nobody is votin so I decided to vote anyway...u can count the shit if u want or not...
but vote on my battle....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=223444
thanks for feedback, I've voted on links where applicable
uppin for more (4)
Peaches answer kinda seem kinda stupid.....Whatever uppin..............
i think Vaskez no he won this shit......both had good structure and Thug had an aiight wordplay...but im a punchline finatic when it comes to battles and Vaskez hit em hard in this shit
v/=vaskez....just better punches and wordplay
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185643
return da favor
500 posts to vote ass wipe cant you read........................
lol o damn cant vote il vote if i post 500 in tym or il jus do it on my alias...good battle
and Plain shut ur bitch ass up before you get dat ass beat agin
Uppin......And please read da god damn battles instead of looking at what all the other people voted on and vote on what they did......
vaskez:
I ain't worried, cos when they say P's verses are a bit hit 'n miss
They mean he gets hit and his punches miss, s'why I'ma shit on this
nah sorta like a prewrit
I spit on kids, how's a battle of wits gonna be won by a Plain Thug?
N' ya won't be drinking to victory after my punches break your mug
nah statement
Ya name's mud, got no friends, fag, they all left for the better
When they saw you wanting "meat up", didn't mean a get-together
nyeah ok
Ya punches hit like a feather, but my hat's off to you...
Collecting donations for rhyming lessons for your wack crew
no
Look watchu do, claimin not to wet yourself on seeing a real MC?
That argument doesn't hold water, like you on catchin sight of me
no
Ya spellt ya crew name wrong, G, you're the one getting a whipping
After all, the SOLE-Taking Mafia's used to receiving a butt-kicking
nah statement
couldn't see anything much. 1st bar was ok then you kinda lost it
vs.
Plain Thug
I feel sorry for ya crew...Steve made a mistake givin u his co-spot
Just like dis battle...U'll git no votes like a geek convention parkin lot
convention parking lot? no forced
Dont they only accept people in ya crew who dope,why you in then?
Shit rappin aint ya thing...Ya better off wit Table tenis n batminton
didn't really connect though nice try with the link
Man i barely see you online...I bet people dont even know you alive
Ya so willing for any good rhymes....den da show desperate house wives
noooo
Tryin to beat me...Ha,its like an adventure,just like da show jonny quest*
Ima leave you more un-known than you are,like ya hometown budapest
wow played 'unkown hometowns' thing no,
Shit, ya crew wazz real good until they re-cruited and had yo' shoes
Ya rhymes R more plainer den ma name,its like da theme song of blue clues
nooooooooooooo
well at least we know why you call yourself plain thug. no j/k. but seriously you gotta elevate your humour. theyre corny. the blues clues thing is corny. i like blues clues. no hate. elevate
didn't really see much in both but vaskez kinda got a flow going so i'ma vote for him. good here
v/ vaskez
I ain't worried, cos when they say P's verses are a bit hit 'n miss
They mean he gets hit and his punches miss, s'why I'ma shit on this
I spit on kids, how's a battle of wits gonna be won by a Plain Thug?
N' ya won't be drinking to victory after my punches break your mug
Ya name's mud, got no friends, fag, they all left for the better
When they saw you wanting "meat up", didn't mean a get-together
Ya punches hit like a feather, but my hat's off to you...
Collecting donations for rhyming lessons for your wack crew
Look watchu do, claimin not to wet yourself on seeing a real MC?
That argument doesn't hold water, like you on catchin sight of me
Ya spellt ya crew name wrong, G, you're the one getting a whipping
After all, the SOLE-Taking Mafia's used to receiving a butt-kicking
vs.
I feel sorry for ya crew...Steve made a mistake givin u his co-spot
Just like dis battle...U'll git no votes like a geek convention parkin lot
Dont they only accept people in ya crew who dope,why you in then?
Shit rappin aint ya thing...Ya better off wit Table tenis n batminton
Man i barely see you online...I bet people dont even know you alive
Ya so willing for any good rhymes....den da show desperate house wives
Tryin to beat me...Ha,its like an adventure,just like da show jonny quest*
Ima leave you more un-known than you are,like ya hometown budapest
Shit, ya crew wazz real good until they re-cruited and had yo' shoes
Ya rhymes R more plainer den ma name,its like da theme song of blue clues
-Plain Thug- I really wasn't feelin your verse bro. Your structure was ok but I could have been better. There really wasn't anything in your verse that made it great to me.
Just seemed plain. You need to elevate on your wordplay more. Your flow was ok wasn't the best either.You didn't come that hard with your punchlines. Could have came harder and could have made your lines more creative....Just Elevate...
Overall 3/10.........Elevate..........
-Vaskez- Your verse was pretty good. Your wordplay was pretty nice. It flowed well smooth...seemed well put together. Nothing really seemed forced which is good. Your rhyme scheme was good. You rhyme well without any difficulty. Your punchlines were better than his. You came a lot harder...Keep it up...
Overall 6/10
v/Vaskez
Hit my battle up in my sig...RTF HONESTLY...Thanks Much...
you couldn't see much cos you don't know what wordplay is.Quote:
Originally Posted by Kamp Boy
WTF pre-written? Yeah pre-deadline written, like everything else on this damn site, lol.
Break your mug = break your face (and mug is something you drink from)
meat up = meet up (saying the fag likes to see boners not get-togethers)'s called wordplay but I already explained this
hat's off = respect, but also people tip money in hats on the ground for beggars
last line: Soul-taking sounds like sole-taking i.e. sole of foot, hence the ass-kicking.
and argument holding water means argument is crap
fed up of dumbass voters, even if he did vote for me, lol
ah well
plain- well your verse was kinda ok, but u lacked on hard punches and good personals. in ur verse u had no good punches that i thought were good. flow was iight, structure was koo 2. u tryed to come with creativity 2 ur verse but had bad wording in my eyes. need better vocabs as well. all im sayin is that u came weak in this battle and elevate alil more. now vaskez liked ur wordplays and yes i did get them. type koo. liked ur punches that u through at him, i thought they came hard and got the job done. nice flow and pretty ok structure. u get my vote for comin harder.
v/Vaskez