Brainwashed...(revised edition)

Brainwashed…

Don’t care shit bout religion imagine blessings from sinners with vile infections
High profile bent politicians orchestrate warfare declare global victims’
My loss of patience amazes all non-believing atheists’ who say God is tasteless
Non-existent empty entity shapeless, ducking Pagans invasion of the faithless
Graceless neva levitate gravity, pump black glove fist for nigaz who wrote history
Endured fights from the cavalry, actually conspiracy’ to brainwash folk is theory
Merely fantasy pipedream & fallacy power of the globe stands in hands of fiends’
Plotting plans & grimy schemes to expand control land via military – teams
Officially – mean, broad-faced commit daylight robbery never catch a court-case
Even if law breaks they cohort for the state
Morbid mercenary magnates report to base.

They’ll manipulate ur mans brain then hit u wit the same cosh
Zombies duped by subliminal-force Prepare for the Brainwash….

European Royal families swathe in diamond claim poor people tax for royalties
Masonic Lodge house the secrecies, need to rotate knowledge 360 degrees
Society bleeds internal organs are feeble displeased unable to stage upheaval
Facing rage of the most lethal, power struggling monies at the base of evil
Case simple, write in black & white they cover every angle of attack & take flight
Dark Hell a single candle for light, once stakes get high they gamble your life
This ain paradise here see we stereotyped for common function treated unfairly
More they fool more they feel glee; lies are mixed with truth to build dynasties
Like crime being free from these cretins who scam as I talk plan my life sentence
Telling me to close my mouth empty weapons
Methods condition your psyche in 60 seconds.

They’ll manipulate ur mans brain then hit u wit the same cosh
Zombies duped by subliminal-force Prepare for the Brainwash….



HOLL@





http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=219628

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=216342

Tight Drop

Flow 9/10
multis 2/10
Metaphors: 8/10
Complexity: 8/10
Wordplay: 7/10

Overall: 7/10 great drop man.

this was a dope drop....i liked tha emotion....i liked tha imagery...your wordplay and vocab were tight...you had some nice use of complexity...original as well...keep droppin tha hotness...your elevatin.~1~

Yeah....
Most deff one of tha hottest peices ive seen in a while..
I will have to tell you what was wrong with it.... ummm... nevermind i can't think of shit... lol
Dope Drop

thanks yo good looks

ups

yo this shit was dope I give it to you homie nice drop I give it a 7.8/10
I liked this right here keep up the writin homie do some more shit like this my nigga and you'll be gettin some respect and thats real and can you hit up my OM please!~1~

yeah imma keep at it fosho fosho

ups

That was dope. Great imagery and awesome wordplay and vocab. The lines seemed a little lengthy but still good. Seems that it would be a great audio piece. Great style and ya doin better. Keep it up.

thanks yo

uppy

bumps

this peice was dope man...the word play was great and the emotion was unmistakable in this peice...i really liked the vocab aswell it was complex and had alot of meaning.

can you give feed on this please.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=220974

thanks yo

bumpers

yea this piece was real hot, good vocab. I agree tha lines were a little long, but i do tha same thing. Nice drop.

good looks


ups

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That was good man, do the damn thing.

fosho^^^^^^^^^^^^

great feedback lolz

up tiddly up ups

not bad at all... i was not ecpexting it to be this good accualy... nce drop nice to see some new talent around and that ALL of rb isisnt infested with morons... i thought that the content was semi-orinigal and that you had good flow...

keep at it... eventually you'll be droping really dope...

:)

well, this had some really good complexity and vocab, the rhymes were tight, word play was used very good in this drop, great job overall 8.7/19. flow was also really good same with structure, keep droppin and you got potential to be sum thin big homie, peace

Man This Was Tight.
Multis 6
Flow 9
Topic 9
Overall 9 Out Of 10
Hott!!

good looking out yo fosho

up tiddly ups

bump

this was nice close the way i think more than my style itself just work on your metaphores other than that i really like it i've got a friend who droped a verse about god and i replyed it with some quick ish you really remind me of him i will post it on OM sometime soon

safe blood