Crew Battle:
Blade Oracles Vs. Lost Cause
Rules: Text
-No Crew Votes
-No Hate Votes
-No D/R Votes
-No Swaying
-No Feeding
-10 Lines
-Due Monday @ or before Midnight
GoodLuck..
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Crew Battle:
Blade Oracles Vs. Lost Cause
Rules: Text
-No Crew Votes
-No Hate Votes
-No D/R Votes
-No Swaying
-No Feeding
-10 Lines
-Due Monday @ or before Midnight
GoodLuck..
...checkity check check.....
check I will spit tommorrow like 3 pm
Dogg....what do you call the garbage you spit....are you Lyrically Insane??....
Bitch I see right through ur annoying ass....its easy to see ur clearly a pane....
I don't care if you and crucial don't want me....I got 2 fists that I can hit wit....
Bitch your battlin me for a Lost Cause....ur just another ass that spits shit....
He'll be seeing red...the whole crew be dead, he'll be screamin 'bloody murder'....
I see you have skill...but to beat me lyrically should have just studied further....
This bitch wouldn't come out holey...if he was shot while he was praying....
I might need to get a hobo for a translater to get the garbage ur saying...
Don't you fuckin EverRest? bitch.....u'll never a Mount to anything, 'cept dirt.....
Which explains why you just got stepped on...and I bet that shit hurts....
Hey dogg I got a wager...a game of chance....merely a huge bet....
Read my verse....then try to tell me.....Professor...u're not a threat...
Bet ya can't and even you do....don't think ya won't regret what ya do fool....
Bitch lemme help ya out....follow the yellow brick road and find Blue's Clues!!
Here's 14 good luck
i liekd this verse but i got to wait util he spits ya heard im out hope this is a good ass battle
lil jay me and u lets go u ugly hoeQuote:
Originally Posted by liljayy921
..yo WTF? it says 10 lines...so i automatically should get tha W for line limit..
You said rec’s don’t mean crap then why you hide yours hypocrit
Ripped quik, you couldnt take out wacks if yo words were Q-tips
Ill make you bleed ‘Bythetree’ so fuck your pleads an pet-peeves
…………………………….......Cant spit heat………………………................
Leave kuz it seems your age equals tha losses you've concieved
You riding tha Joke’s dick so much, surprised you havent choked
…………………..........So-called loke getting smoked………………….....
Kuz if BO reflex perfection, then you tha reason tha mirror broke
Your ‘Da Proffesor’ so mix chemicals to reveal why you act black
……………............‘White Dogg?’nah more like White Cat……………..
'Above' Id call you Barry Bonds tha way you filled with pure wack
Bitch ass krew slut getting stabbed, no other krew wants this fag
Kuz this hag don’t recycle, he makes all his garbage from scratch
..there go 10 on yo ass..
..Whatever is in '' is one of his only hundreds of aliases..
Dogg....what do you call the garbage you spit....are you Lyrically Insane??....
Bitch I see right through ur annoying ass....its easy to see ur clearly a pane....
too simple
I don't care if you and crucial don't want me....I got 2 fists that I can hit wit....
Bitch your battlin me for a Lost Cause....ur just another ass that spits shit....
the punchline needed rewording
He'll be seeing red...the whole crew be dead, he'll be screamin 'bloody murder'....
I see you have skill...but to beat me lyrically should have just studied further....
nice multiple, but needs more to the punch
This bitch wouldn't come out holey...if he was shot while he was praying....
I might need to get a hobo for a translater to get the garbage ur saying...
alright idea
Don't you fuckin EverRest? bitch.....u'll never a Mount to anything, 'cept dirt.....
Which explains why you just got stepped on...and I bet that shit hurts....
the set-up was nice
Hey dogg I got a wager...a game of chance....merely a huge bet....
Read my verse....then try to tell me.....Professor...u're not a threat...
nah
Bet ya can't and even you do....don't think ya won't regret what ya do fool....
Bitch lemme help ya out....follow the yellow brick road and find Blue's Clues!!
nah
vs.
You said rec’s don’t mean crap then why you hide yours hypocrit
Ripped quik, you couldnt take out wacks if yo words were Q-tips
nice
Ill make you bleed ‘Bythetree’ so fuck your pleads an pet-peeves
…………………………….......Cant spit heat………………………................
Leave kuz it seems your age equals tha losses you've concieved
ok
You riding tha Joke’s dick so much, surprised you havent choked
…………………..........So-called loke getting smoked………………….....
Kuz if BO reflex perfection, then you tha reason tha mirror broke
ok
Your ‘Da Proffesor’ so mix chemicals to reveal why you act black
……………............‘White Dogg?’nah more like White Cat……………..
'Above' Id call you Barry Bonds tha way you filled with pure wack
attempted personals
Bitch ass krew slut getting stabbed, no other krew wants this fag
Kuz this hag don’t recycle, he makes all his garbage from scratch
eh
v/Lyrically Insane. Using the aliases were attempting personals, but the punches on his professer name and crew worked better. Prof. you had some good ideas, but they didn't end strong, like you said the punch early, or put too much into the set-up. Lyrically Insane was more creative with his punches, and his personals had a greater effect.
Lyrically Insane, hit this up.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=189909
first of al I ain't ab0ve he is yo h it's fitty
ok uppin
hahaha, damn...i thought this would be a merkin by lyrically insane, but da professor took this one in my eyes... damn....good shit, both you...youd both destroy me, but yeah...i was way impressed by da prof...and lyrical didnt come as hard as i thought...good spit prof...v/prof...holler....and rtf...thnx
lol,^
good battle..
crucial, who do you think won? just, in your opinion? you can pm me if you dont wanna piss off your boy or whatever....
i think it was a good battle, but i dont want to sway any voters... i want this to be completly fair.
Dogg....what do you call the garbage you spit....are you Lyrically Insane??....
Bitch I see right through ur annoying ass....its easy to see ur clearly a pane....
EHH! GOOD ATTEMP, BUT PLAYED LINE...
I don't care if you and crucial don't want me....I got 2 fists that I can hit wit....
Bitch your battlin me for a Lost Cause....ur just another ass that spits shit....
DECENT LINE, OK PERS. ALITTLE FORCED
He'll be seeing red...the whole crew be dead, he'll be screamin 'bloody murder'....
I see you have skill...but to beat me lyrically should have just studied further....
EHH! 1ST LINE WAS FORCED FILLLER 2ND LINE OK........
This bitch wouldn't come out holey...if he was shot while he was praying....
I might need to get a hobo for a translater to get the garbage ur saying...
LOL GOOD ATTEMPT BUT WTF IS A HOBO, *really*
Don't you fuckin EverRest? bitch.....u'll never a Mount to anything, 'cept dirt.....
Which explains why you just got stepped on...and I bet that shit hurts....
1ST LINE GOOD STARTN, BUT FELL OF 2ND LIND....
Hey dogg I got a wager...a game of chance....merely a huge bet....
Read my verse....then try to tell me.....Professor...u're not a threat...
EHH!!! DIDDO........ 2ND LINE.... NOT FEELN
Bet ya can't and even you do....don't think ya won't regret what ya do fool....
Bitch lemme help ya out....follow the yellow brick road and find Blue's Clues!!
NOT FEELIN THE ENDN..... BAD CLOSER....
Da Professor....
you had a EHH!!! verse...
there was some forced filler which i think didnt fit..... Started off iight but kept falln off, inconsistency with lines a,d structure.... I mean, you used some creative thinking to come up with your word play, but i dont think you executed'em in the right way.... You have elevated ill give you that, youve come a long way... But i think you didnt do so well here... in this battle..
..yo WTF? it says 10 lines...so i automatically should get tha W for line limit..
You said rec’s don’t mean crap then why you hide yours hypocrit
Ripped quik, you couldnt take out wacks if yo words were Q-tips
I FEEL THE 1ST LINE SOUND GOOD SPITTN FAST.... IM STUCK ON THIS
Ill make you bleed ‘Bythetree’ so fuck your pleads an pet-peeves
…………………………….......Cant spit heat………………………................
Leave kuz it seems your age equals tha losses you've concieved
OK, NICE PERS.
You riding tha Joke’s dick so much, surprised you havent choked
…………………..........So-called loke getting smoked………………….....
Kuz if BO reflex perfection, then you tha reason tha mirror broke
LIKE THE LINEs, funky LOL
Your ‘Da Proffesor’ so mix chemicals to reveal why you act black
……………............‘White Dogg?’nah more like White Cat……………..
'Above' Id call you Barry Bonds tha way you filled with pure wack
LMFAO, NICE PLAY W/ BARRY
Bitch ass krew slut getting stabbed, no other krew wants this fag
Kuz this hag don’t recycle, he makes all his garbage from scratch
LOL, NICE CLOSER....
OVERALL: Lyrically insane, you had a good verse, but other than that, i liked all the personals..... against your opponent, You had some funny ass lines in there also, very witty.. You had good word play decent use of multies. Pretty good structure....
THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE, BOTH WAYS, BUT I FEEL THAT
Lyrically insane just came more personal with his verse....harder punches, more original...............
v/----------------Lyrically insane
Dogg....what do you call the garbage you spit..are you Lyrically Insane??
Bitch I see right through ur annoying ass..its easy to see ur clearly a pane
ok
I don't care if you and crucial don't want me..I got 2 fists that I can hit wit
Bitch your battlin me for a Lost Cause..ur just another ass that spits shit
k
He'll be seeing red...the whole crew be dead, he'll be screamin 'bloody murder'
I see you have skill...but to beat me lyrically should have just studied further
ok
This bitch wouldn't come out holey..if he was shot while he was praying
I might need to get a hobo for a translater to get the garbage ur saying
LMAO,damn
Don't you fuckin EverRest? bitch...u'll never a Mount to anything, 'cept dirt
Which explains why you just got stepped on..and I bet that shit hurts
ok
Hey dogg I got a wager...a game of chance...merely a huge bet
Read my verse....then try to tell me....Professor...u're not a threat
ok
Bet ya can't and even you do....don't think ya won't regret what ya do fool
Bitch lemme help ya out...follow the yellow brick road and find Blue's Clues!!
lol,ok
V.S
You said rec’s don’t mean crap then why you hide yours hypocrit
Ripped quik, you couldnt take out wacks if yo words were Q-tips
ok
Ill make you bleed ‘Bythetree’ so fuck your pleads an pet-peeves
…………………………….......Cant spit heat………………………................
Leave kuz it seems your age equals tha losses you've concieved
ok, nice personal
You riding tha Joke’s dick so much, surprised you havent choked
…………………..........So-called loke getting smoked………………….....
k
Kuz if BO reflex perfection, then you tha reason tha mirror broke
Your ‘Da Proffesor’ so mix chemicals to reveal why you act black
no, if his other name was white dogg and his in a white crew how does how dosent act black?
……………............‘White Dogg?’nah more like White Cat……………..
'Above' Id call you Barry Bonds tha way you filled with pure wack
nah
Bitch ass krew slut getting stabbed, no other krew wants this fag
Kuz this hag don’t recycle, he makes all his garbage from scratch
lol,ok
\V/ = Proffesor
LI- if ur gonna go for a personal make it true atleast
Lmfao, Re-read that shit homie, & *Elevate ya self* While your @ it.......Quote:
Originally Posted by F-ROQ(RESURRECT)
..Both People Lacked At Some Points, Some Had Really Nice Points, All-In-All It Was A Good Battle..
Pro- Ya Shit Was Simple At Times, At Others It Was Nice And The Punches Would Be Good.
LI- Eh, Not The Best, Punches Were Kind Of Played, And Nothing Really Stood Out, Kep Elevating.
Vote- Pro.
Da Proffesor...
Nothing....no punches that hit at all...
Vs.
Lyric...
This:
You said rec’s don’t mean crap then why you hide yours hypocrit
Ripped quik, you couldnt take out wacks if yo words were Q-tips
You riding tha Joka’s dick so much, surprised you havent choked
Kuz if BO reflex perfection, then you tha reason tha mirror broke
Bitch ass krew slut getting stabbed, no other krew wants this fag
Kuz this hag don’t recycle, he makes all his garbage from scratch
Easy vote......Lyrically insane took this battle
who r u^^^^^^^ wtf uppin
wow uppin plz
uppin shit comon this my 3rd up
Dogg....what do you call the garbage you spit....are you Lyrically Insane??....
Bitch I see right through ur annoying ass....its easy to see ur clearly a pane....
I don't care if you and crucial don't want me....I got 2 fists that I can hit wit....
Bitch your battlin me for a Lost Cause....ur just another ass that spits shit....
He'll be seeing red...the whole crew be dead, he'll be screamin 'bloody murder'....
I see you have skill...but to beat me lyrically should have just studied further....
This bitch wouldn't come out holey...if he was shot while he was praying....
I might need to get a hobo for a translater to get the garbage ur saying...
Don't you fuckin EverRest? bitch.....u'll never a Mount to anything, 'cept dirt.....
Which explains why you just got stepped on...and I bet that shit hurts....
Hey dogg I got a wager...a game of chance....merely a huge bet....
Read my verse....then try to tell me.....Professor...u're not a threat...
Bet ya can't and even you do....don't think ya won't regret what ya do fool....
Bitch lemme help ya out....follow the yellow brick road and find Blue's Clues!!
^^^^^this verse was sick, he came way hard with personals...........and also clowned him with concept......
You said rec’s don’t mean crap then why you hide yours hypocrit
Ripped quik, you couldnt take out wacks if yo words were Q-tips
Ill make you bleed ‘Bythetree’ so fuck your pleads an pet-peeves
…………………………….......Cant spit heat………………………................
Leave kuz it seems your age equals tha losses you've concieved
You riding tha Joke’s dick so much, surprised you havent choked
…………………..........So-called loke getting smoked………………….....
Kuz if BO reflex perfection, then you tha reason tha mirror broke
Your ‘Da Proffesor’ so mix chemicals to reveal why you act black
……………............‘White Dogg?’nah more like White Cat……………..
'Above' Id call you Barry Bonds tha way you filled with pure wack
Bitch ass krew slut getting stabbed, no other krew wants this fag
Kuz this hag don’t recycle, he makes all his garbage from scratch
..there go 10 on yo ass..
..Whatever is in '' is one of his only hundreds of aliases..
^^^this verse was good, but it was wack at tha same time....he came almost to hard so i didnt understand it, and i even did some resaerch to try and get it....but anyways......need ta work on struc......no hate....no DR........
v/DA P. for comin alot harder, and harder structured punches.....
uppin
this my last upp so now it's up to lyric to up it
close battle but my vote goes to the proffesor cus i liked his structure better
Uppin for these dudes
yo look at AbOve's IP and Da Professor Ip.....same!...
WTF you a lil cheating ass mathafukka forreal...and WTF kinda feed was that...?
ur an idiot we go to school together u see we're both online I ain't on like 2 comps i am on network all same IP
Red_ its true man......
but honestly if i could vote it would go to the professoar for comin better with the punch lines and stuff.....he came harder with struc as well....but lyrically was really good to.....
lol, wow
My vote, Insane. Prof, you had soem good attempts at your shit, but just didn't seem to follow through. Insane, your shit was reall good. Everything seemed to be on contact. Prof, need to elevate man. Yo! Also, I really would like to battle. Need some votes on other battles. Over the legal limit. Would really appreciate it if who ever wants to battle to vote. And if you could, pass the word on. I will RTF! So please vote people. Choose any link:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=186868
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=184834
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=186643
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=187475
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185773
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=189241
Vote on any of these battles, please...
Vote/ Lyrically_Insane...
DA PRO
dude, you had a great verse
you had some really good rhymes
I thought that you fallowed up on everything... you had some very strong punches that i thought, were very OUT OF THE BOX
you were full of personals
some shit actually made me do a lil...' WOW '
its ppl like you that really make RB great with all the herbs
so overall, you kicked ass in this verse
GREAT SHIT...
Lyical
you had some good stuff
i thought your structure and flow were a bit off
your rhymes seemed a lil stretch and the middle things every 2 bars or so are kind of dumb.
You had a lot of good shit too
some pretty good personals
i recognised a few switched lines but i cant tell where they are from so that wont deduct much...
you rhyme scheme was good but i felt you didnt fallow up on punches and on some good setups
V/ PRO
better structure, and MORE punches, better personals
srry man..this is NO HATE.. I SWEAR