10 lines minimum..
house rules...
25 minutes 2 drop after 1st verse...
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10 lines minimum..
house rules...
25 minutes 2 drop after 1st verse...
go head nigga do ya thang
My words is listed clips-Lip lock the chamber N get smoked when the coil slips...
TruFuse look'N to 'change distinctiveness', bitin 'hot' lyrics with his 'finger tips'...
You'll still get ripped; an actor wit an attitude is probably the scripts aint his...
Like movers I'll handle my biz, you'll get masked like Michael Jackson's kid's...
My text bring'N burn 2 UR eyes surfaces, with purpose's: gas U out like pump services..
Curious...you cant even claim a status, when only time U rank HI is under sturdiest...
TruFuse couldnt really pilot victory~ thats why I came into intervention...
I darken divine wit tendency & affinity....I hold you up by suspension...
I bet if I wink write... you'll get beat like mosley did, but only you a mochery...
Noting to this; dont dome sloppy wit'cha carbon copy, vocabulary glossary...
Forget shakes I'm break'n~his~hand...like stand up comedians, I'm tak'N the stand...
I spit on command, fuck battles... You aint mak'N the BAND...
Im'a X-pose you faster than a Paris Hilton video...You just a goat...
Am I supposed to battle, you aint been 2 a studio, so just change ya quote,
Call me the grim reaper cuz I rip wack MC'z...
like a slim keeper, I can search TruFuse's room & wouldnt find a RAP cd..
Music dont want his bars like 'weight rooms' in a school dance...
You wanna C someth'n funny, look in TruFuse'z pants...
Bring ya umbrella cuz I can spit a river...You better off reading what he dont wrote...
my punches hit n deliver....That'll make TruFuse 'CHANGE HIS OWN VOTE..........
NEXT.....
Its On You Homie.....get Right, Come Hard........i'll C U When Its Ova ---1
check in..........................................
im, chillin here wit da three blind mice.//
i had to find somebody dat would agree to what you write.//
yea yea ima king and a night.//
ima give dis battle to you cause i moved to another site.//
uppin fa votes.//
911 take this for easy 1.his vrse was better 2.he has more punches3.his verse was longer...................
911
You'll still get ripped; an actor wit an attitude is probably the scripts aint his...
Like movers I'll handle my biz, you'll get masked like Michael Jackson's kid's...
My text bring'N burn 2 UR eyes surfaces, with purpose's: gas U out like pump services..
Curious...you cant even claim a status, when only time U rank HI is under sturdiest...
vs
tru
nothing really
VOTE for easy 911
well you heard him he stated the obvious you got this battle kaliko you dropped well better shit iller in every way possible and had better vocab punchlines wordplay evrything i dont know why this cat even bothered he better move to another site cuz he aint ever gunna win droppin shit like that
drop a vote here 100+posts only plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176784
I would grade this battle but not yet.
Uppin.................
Could I Get More Votes On This Plz.........
I Kow It Was A Pretty Wack Battle, This Lil Nicca Sayn Shit Shit Like He Gone 2 Another Site...........
Cuz His Skillz Aint Up 2 Par......basically.
No Other Xplanation......
But Holla Ppl........
this was the most pathetic battle i've eva seen in my life Kalikoze ya whole verse was hot you had the complete package you had personals, punches, structure, and flow even when you started to sound s/g you ended it with a punch about your opponent
and Tru Fuse i dont kno what to say about you you didnt even meet the requirement of 10 lines you put a sorry ass 4 you should be ashamed of yourself and DQ'd even
v/goes to Kalikoze9/11
Oh vote on one of my battles cuz they need close'n but if you really wanna see the proper way to merk a newb then vote on my battle with Ethnic
Thank You
"Vote Honestly and I'll Return The Favor"
fuck you living legend.....you bitch ass cant beat me in topical......so fuck your mom.....
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial
911 has a bigger and better rap verse
vote/911
return the favor......
More Votes, Plz.................uppn, Tho This Faggit, Left.
Ayo Can I Get Some More Votes So This Can Get Closed, And I Can Start A New Battle..................thats Meaningful............................
Uppn...............................
Kalikoze911:
You'll still get ripped; an actor wit an attitude is probably the scripts aint his...
Like movers I'll handle my biz, you'll get masked like Michael Jackson's kid's...
lol
Music dont want his bars like 'weight rooms' in a school dance...
You wanna C someth'n funny, look in TruFuse'z pants...
coo
My words is listed clips-Lip lock the chamber N get smoked when the coil slips...
TruFuse look'N to 'change distinctiveness', bitin 'hot' lyrics with his 'finger tips'...
nice...
obviously kalikoze got this, waaayyy more lines, an they were better than trufuses lines...
trufuse:
im, chillin here wit da three blind mice.//
i had to find somebody dat would agree to what you write.//
yea yea ima king and a night.//
ima give dis battle to you cause i moved to another site.//
^there was nothing in that homie lol...
obvious vote-kalikoze911
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yo can you please return the favor an hit up the battle in my signature, aprecciated.
Kalikoze - Very nice flow going and good use of multies. However you were lacking in the punches department. You had a lot of great concepts and similies going, just reword them man so they are harsher and harder hitting punches. Decent verse, just yeah, work on ya punches.
Tru Fuse - I guess you moved to another site so you wanted a loss... well I'll gladly vote against you and happily hand you this loss, lol. I don't think we're missing anything with you either.
Vote - Kalikoze
Please hit up the sig, thx
what kind of shit was that tru? a measley 4 lines in a 10 line max? man, that's wack... just for that kali gets my vote cuz his is longer and he's got some funny punches....man tru, get some more stuff written in a battle...
DaTrusHurtz : GOOD LOOKN APPRCIATE THE VOTE...............DEFINITELY KEEPN IN MIND WUT U SAID, USE HARSHER WORDS....DEFINITELY. THANX I WILL RETURN THE FAV: .............__________________________________________________ _______
UPP'N 4 MORE VOTES 2 CLOSE THIS....................THNX
dope_emcee_420
YEA, I REALLY DIDNT KNOW WUT WAS WRONG WIT TRU, BUT I GUESS WE'LL NEVA KNOW HOW HE TOOK THIS LOSS............APPRECIATE THE FEEDBACK & VOTE..............KEEP DROPPIN,
POST UP A LINK, WILL RETURN THE FAV:
PLZ VOTES ON THESE BATTLES SO THEY CAN GET CLOSED.THNX
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176857
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176588
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176852
Quote:
Originally Posted by DJsmokey
GOOD LOOKN ON THE FEEDBACK, DROP LINKX SO I CAN RETURN THE FAV...NO LINKS IN YA SIG
Uppm This Some More.................get In The Votes So This Can Ge Closed.
Thnx.....
LMAO HAHAHA
Kalikoze took this muther effin battle hands down...ahaha all u had to do was write one line lmao Yu still would have won hahaha i cant stop laffin :laugh::laugh:
Drop a vote on my battle with Young Manny, you can be honest