WillKill4Money vs Young Cell

[WillKill4Money]

aight heres the rules...

16bars
blind spit
verse due 1hr after check in
check must be today
house rules apply...
thats no biting feedin recyclin you get the point

i'll check in in a couple of mins.

['Young Cell']

check in............................................

i havent did this in a long ass time lets get it popin scream at me

[WillKill4Money]

aight im checkin in than too good luck man...
remeber you got an hr...

[WillKill4Money]

step up face the best...better yet you face reality/
that means facin me you bond ta face fatality//(1)
you cant beat me in battles, rhymes got immortality/
how im suppose ta diss htis kid he lacks personality//(2)
my lethal lyrics strike tight...when i rap its abuse/
look at his check in he uses time as an excuse//(3)
he approaches mics bein gangstas a fad again/
talk bout heat...you would pack shit on a homos abdomen//(4)
i laugh at him...i can tell hes nervous look at him shakin/
in this battle i shit on you like pricher did dayton//(5)
why do i vs these newbs that constantly freepost/
and got less skill than shaq wit freethrows//(6)
im back spittin lethal destroy you fairies like hook would tinker/
you beatin me...that ideals sunk like a hook and sinker//(7)
i spit fire so you see when i rap you get burnt off/
jus forfiet now and tell the mods ta give you your 1st loss//(8)
theres no reason for spittin i'll decease your exsistence/
my rhymes are killer but i brought the peice for assistance//(9)
any resistance results in my wraith bein unleashed/
cat got your tounge...or you left w/o speech//(10)
cuz my thesis leaves this weak bitch speechless like jesus//(11)
im ready ta start buckin hop aboard and sattle up/
this bitch so dumb he didnt know how ta set a battle up//(12)
so he insisted i did it...and now heres what we got/
me spittin fire ta smoke this faggot like pot//(13)
my rhymes get in your mind set sail to explore/
before you come at me again let your young cell machore//(14)
and jus read hes profile its no suprise he lies/
accordin ta dat shit his the oldest guy alive//(15)
i spit this shit so this lil bitch gets whipped wit belts/
jus roll over and die homes apparently you out lived your self//(16)

something simple for a long time no rhyme kinda kid...haha

['Young Cell']

U Ready.....

This guy is not a nice one, claim this lame hard as icicles
wit no aim...ill flame this lame like 5 niggas
you cant hang, bitch your loose change like 5 nickels
fuck around and get killed, my punches spends the WILL like bicycles//
you die quicker, for you it seems harder to thank
he’s sweatin type’n the keys, he’s startin to faint
im killin the battle now I guess im startin to blank
on top of the ranks, im takin MONEY out like he was part of a bank//
this goddess is fake, beaten me?? No, I think he’ll be better shootin
you goals stop here, no ball skills you better shootin
CEO of rapbattles...you lame bitch, I was said the trues
I’ve the best in text battles, your just another ONE like eleven stupid//
catch the last line....I didn’t think so, but ill blast ya boy
I laugh at you quick, when I clap the 4
what you ask’n for, I be on my block wit the plastic 4
that will have you flippin like you on a gymnastics floor//


Easy..

['Young Cell']

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin 1^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

[siker]

step up face the best...better yet you face reality/
that means facin me you bond ta face fatality//(1)
4-10
you cant beat me in battles, rhymes got immortality/
how im suppose ta diss htis kid he lacks personality//(2)
3-10
my lethal lyrics strike tight...when i rap its abuse/
look at his check in he uses time as an excuse//(3)
hot 5-10
he approaches mics bein gangstas a fad again/
talk bout heat...you would pack shit on a homos abdomen//(4)
2-10
i laugh at him...i can tell hes nervous look at him shakin/
in this battle i shit on you like pricher did dayton//(5)
1-10
why do i vs these newbs that constantly freepost/
and got less skill than shaq wit freethrows//(6)
3-10
im back spittin lethal destroy you fairies like hook would tinker/
you beatin me...that ideals sunk like a hook and sinker//(7)
1-10
i spit fire so you see when i rap you get burnt off/
jus forfiet now and tell the mods ta give you your 1st loss//(8)
2-10
theres no reason for spittin i'll decease your exsistence/
my rhymes are killer but i brought the peice for assistance//(9)
1-10
any resistance results in my wraith bein unleashed/
cat got your tounge...or you left w/o speech//(10)
2-10
cuz my thesis leaves this weak bitch speechless like jesus//(11)
im ready ta start buckin hop aboard and sattle up/
2-10
this bitch so dumb he didnt know how ta set a battle up//(12)
should this be up there
so he insisted i did it...and now heres what we got/
me spittin fire ta smoke this faggot like pot//(13)
1-10
my rhymes get in your mind set sail to explore/
before you come at me again let your young cell machore//(14)
3-10
and jus read hes profile its no suprise he lies/
accordin ta dat shit his the oldest guy alive//(15)
5-10
i spit this shit so this lil bitch gets whipped wit belts/
jus roll over and die homes apparently you out lived your self//(16)
3-10

vs.

U Ready.....

This guy is not a nice one, claim this lame hard as icicles
wit no aim...ill flame this lame like 5 niggas
1-10
you cant hang, bitch your loose change like 5 nickels
fuck around and get killed, my punches spends the WILL like bicycles//
2-10
you die quicker, for you it seems harder to thank
he’s sweatin type’n the keys, he’s startin to faint
4-10
im killin the battle now I guess im startin to blank
on top of the ranks, im takin MONEY out like he was part of a bank//
2-10
this goddess is fake, beaten me?? No, I think he’ll be better shootin
you goals stop here, no ball skills you better shootin
0-10
CEO of rapbattles...you lame bitch, I was said the trues
I’ve the best in text battles, your just another ONE like eleven stupid//
1-10
catch the last line....I didn’t think so, but ill blast ya boy
I laugh at you quick, when I clap the 4
0-10
what you ask’n for, I be on my block wit the plastic 4
that will have you flippin like you on a gymnastics floor//
0-10



WillKill4Money=38
'Young Cell'=10
the battle was good willkill came harder i think had more punch lines then young...willkill got hard to read at the mid but came with it....nice ending lots of punchs
young u need to up your game i wasnt feelin it at all...hard to read and at the end it look like u were just saying shit...so i have to give this one to willkill

v/willkill

[WillKill4Money]

uppin this ish for da first time

uppin up up uppin this birch for da first time

[Ethnic]

step up face the best...better yet you face reality/
that means facin me you bond ta face fatality//(1)
you cant beat me in battles, rhymes got immortality/
how im suppose ta diss htis kid he lacks personality//(2)
nice rhyming,really like this
my lethal lyrics strike tight...when i rap its abuse/
look at his check in he uses time as an excuse//(3)
nice rhymes again but not real punch
he approaches mics bein gangstas a fad again/
talk bout heat...you would pack shit on a homos abdomen//(4)
nice punch........nice rhymes continue..
i laugh at him...i can tell hes nervous look at him shakin/
in this battle i shit on you like pricher did dayton//(5)
why do i vs these newbs that constantly freepost/
and got less skill than shaq wit freethrows//(6)
flow good,punch aagh
im back spittin lethal destroy you fairies like hook would tinker/
you beatin me...that ideals sunk like a hook and sinker//(7)
nice rhymes..............
i spit fire so you see when i rap you get burnt off/
jus forfiet now and tell the mods ta give you your 1st loss//(8)
flow keep on but maybe this time gotta came some another than 2 lines....
theres no reason for spittin i'll decease your exsistence/
my rhymes are killer but i brought the peice for assistance//(9)
any resistance results in my wraith bein unleashed/
dont even say...nice rhyme..
cat got your tounge...or you left w/o speech//(10)
cuz my thesis leaves this weak bitch speechless like jesus//(11)
im ready ta start buckin hop aboard and sattle up/
this bitch so dumb he didnt know how ta set a battle up//(12)
really good punch..........
so he insisted i did it...and now heres what we got/
me spittin fire ta smoke this faggot like pot//(13)
not so good like others.........
my rhymes get in your mind set sail to explore/
before you come at me again let your young cell machore//(14)
and jus read hes profile its no suprise he lies/
accordin ta dat shit his the oldest guy alive//(15)
i spit this shit so this lil bitch gets whipped wit belts/
jus roll over and die homes apparently you out lived your self//(16)
closer wasnt so good like opener........nice verse still
vs
This guy is not a nice one, claim this lame hard as icicles
wit no aim...ill flame this lame like 5 niggas
you cant hang, bitch your loose change like 5 nickels
nice opener...look cool
fuck around and get killed, my punches spends the WILL like bicycles//
you die quicker, for you it seems harder to thank
he’s sweatin type’n the keys, he’s startin to faint
im killin the battle now I guess im startin to blank
on top of the ranks, im takin MONEY out like he was part of a bank//
wtf that was bad...........
this goddess is fake, beaten me?? No, I think he’ll be better shootin
you goals stop here, no ball skills you better shootin
CEO of rapbattles...you lame bitch, I was said the trues
I’ve the best in text battles, your just another ONE like eleven stupid//
catch the last line....I didn’t think so, but ill blast ya boy
I laugh at you quick, when I clap the 4
what you ask’n for, I be on my block wit the plastic 4
that will have you flippin like you on a gymnastics floor//
that end wasnt so hot.....really lame shit......
Vote:4money

[KªL¡]

(WillKill4mONEY)------

(KALI) quote= 1st line came pretty hard..

step up face the best...better yet you face reality/
that means facin me you bond ta face fatality//(1)= Rate*@ 5-10.

(KALI) quote= 2nd line, cloud be better, but was funny...

you cant beat me in battles, rhymes got immortality/
*how im suppose ta diss htis kid he lacks personality*//(2)=Rate*@ 2-10

(KALI) quote= 3rd line, nice (punchline)

my lethal lyrics strike tight...when i rap its abuse/
look at his check in he uses time as an excuse//(3)= Rate*@ 5-10

(KALI) quote= 4th line, could be worded better...NOT BAD THO'

he approaches mics bein gangstas a fad again/
talk bout heat...you would pack shit on a homos abdomen//(4)= Rate*@ 2-10

(KALI) quote= 5th line, HOTT, was feel'n it,...

i laugh at him...i can tell hes nervous look at him shakin/
in this battle i shit on you like pricher did dayton//(5)= Rate*@ 6-10

(KALI) quote= 6th line, nice wordplay...

why do i vs these newbs that constantly freepost/
and got less skill than shaq wit freethrows//(6)= Rate*@ 8-10

(KALI) quote= 7th line, not feel'n @, couldnt follow it...

im back spittin lethal destroy you fairies like hook would tinker/
you beatin me...that ideals sunk like a hook and sinker//(7)= Rate*@ 0-0.

(KALI) quote= 8th line, strong (punch),

i spit fire so you see when i rap you get burnt off/
jus forfiet now and tell the mods ta give you your 1st loss//(8)= Rate*@ 5-10

(KALI) quote= 9th line, decent, could've been better...

theres no reason for spittin i'll decease your exsistence/
my rhymes are killer but i brought the peice for assistance//(9))= Rate*@ 1-10

(KALI) quote= 10th line, not-digg'n...@ all

any resistance results in my wraith bein unleashed/
cat got your tounge...or you left w/o speech//(10))= Rate*@ 0-0

(KALI) quote= 11th line, alright, just couldnt understand y you threw jesus in there,
jesus, was never speechless, plus it didnt rhyme N made no sense...
2nd pt. ptretty cool.....

cuz my thesis leaves this weak bitch speechless like jesus//(11)>
im ready ta start buckin hop aboard and sattle up/ =Rate*@ 2-10
this bitch so dumb he didnt know how ta set a battle up//(12)>

(KALI) quote= 13th line, wasnt strong, but still came with it..

so he insisted i did it...and now heres what we got/
me spittin fire ta smoke this faggot like pot//(13)= Rate*@ 2-10

(KALI) quote= came hard, nice (punch)

my rhymes get in your mind set sail to explore/
before you come at me again let your young cell machore//(14)= Rate*@ 6-10

(KALI) quote= 15th line, not feeling. very weak....

and jus read hes profile its no suprise he lies/
accordin ta dat shit his the oldest guy alive//(15)= Rate*@ 1-10

(KALI) quote= last line, hott, was liking....

i spit this shit so this lil bitch gets whipped wit belts/
jus roll over and die homes apparently you out lived your self//(16)= Rate*@

OVERALL (WillKill4Money) I was feeling it.....Total= 45

'YoungCell'

U Ready.....

This guy is not a nice one, claim this lame hard as icicles (wack)-0
wit no aim...ill flame this lame like 5 niggas (not-feelin)-0
you cant hang, bitch your loose change like 5 nickels (its ok, could be better)-4
fuck around and get killed, my punches spends the WILL like bicycles// (noway)-0
you die quicker, for you it seems harder to thank>
he’s sweatin type’n the keys, he’s startin to faint> (could b way better)-0-1
im killin the battle now I guess im startin to blank
on top of the ranks, im takin MONEY out like he was part of a bank//-2 (ok)
this goddess is fake, beaten me?? No, I think he’ll be better shootin (wack)-0
you goals stop here, no ball skills you better shootin (iight)-4
CEO of rapbattles...you lame bitch, I was said the trues (dont get-it)-0
I’ve the best in text battles, your just another ONE like eleven stupid// (decent)-3
catch the last line....I didn’t think so, but ill blast ya boy (???)-0
I laugh at you quick, when I clap the 4 (how u gone clap 4 on web boards)-0
what you ask’n for, I be on my block wit the plastic 4 (might b tru)-2
that will have you flippin like you on a gymnastics floor// (work-on-it)-2


Easy..



OVERALL ('YoungCell')........I wasnt feeling this, punchlines werent there, no multis,
this could have been better....Total= 18

WillKill, had a longer VERSE`, better bars, stronger punches..........


(WillKill4Money) Total=45
UPP'N FOR WillKill4Money........
(YoungCell) Total=18

[XM]

this was an overall good battle as a matta of fact this shit was hot but my vote will be quick bcuz unfortunately it was stated in the rule to spit 16 bars and 16 bars in 32 lines so Young Cell didnt meet the requirement but if he would have kept it go'n he would've gotten my vote

v/goes to WillKill4Money due to Disqualification

vote on my battles and i'll vote on yours but i'll vote honestly

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial

[KªL¡]

yOUNG cELL YA NEED 2 DROP DA MIC. IT AINT WRKN 4 YA


AYO LEGEND, YA BOY HERE, IS IN A BATTLE WIT ME......CHK THIS OUT

['Young Cell']

uppin............................................. ...

[DJsmokey]

willkills best part:

my lethal lyrics strike tight...when i rap its abuse/
look at his check in he uses time as an excuse//(3)
he approaches mics bein gangstas a fad again/
talk bout heat...you would pack shit on a homos abdomen//(4)
i laugh at him...i can tell hes nervous look at him shakin/
in this battle i shit on you like pricher did dayton//(5)
why do i vs these newbs that constantly freepost/
and got less skill than shaq wit freethrows//(6)


youngcells best part:

you cant hang, bitch your loose change like 5 nickels
fuck around and get killed, my punches spends the WILL like bicycles//
you die quicker, for you it seems harder to thank
he’s sweatin type’n the keys, he’s startin to faint


pretty good battle, willkill got it though, harder punches... props to both though.


vote-willkill4money

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[DaTrusHurtz]

WillKill - The shit about the homos abdomen was kinda funny for some reason. The shit about him being the oldest guy alive was nice, the rest was pretty eh. Make your battles shorter in the future, 16 bars is a lot of shit to read for voters, but you came aight... just work on more punches and less self-glorification, you had a lot of that shit and it doesn't help you.

Young Cell - The closer was nice about gymnastics. The rest of your shit was eh, lots of threats really and very little punching your opponent. Your flow was pretty off also as a lot of your shit was forced and it wasn't reading that well, read it out loud before you post it. Not as effective a verse as your opponent as his had more punches so he wins this, sorry.

Vote - WillKill

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