Okay Eminem.
12 lines.
Due midnight, pacific time.
You're done yo.
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Okay Eminem.
12 lines.
Due midnight, pacific time.
You're done yo.
yo...bitch ass wannabe battle me think he a MC/
like he the one N only good rapper on RB/
well bitch you aint shit nutthin butta has-bin admit it/
your rhymes are juss lyrically unfitted you can be chewed up and spitted/
i can merk you rip you kno doubt afta this battle you been offically "layed out"/
all of your battles your rhymes have juss been wasted.../
.....even tho every single line was copyed and pasted/
you say Violence Uprising neva seen sum 1 as bad very well suprising/
your 24-0 even thoguh you battled every newbie who eva said HELLO/
althoght against me you get ruptured juss like a structure and ya flow/
so stay outta raps until ya mide adapts end ya witha 1-2 pucnch make ya spine collapse/
you all fake shoot bottle caps get them form tha store go and do ya country shit tha music you were borin for/
Out.
its due.....
11:07 Pacific Time, right now.. stfu.
aiyo.. i'm worried for you, all in a hurry to lose
you dope?.. like a reporter asking a question..
..that's some curious news
i'm furious too, smackin a bitch that's lackin the wit
think that battle in your sig is funny? it's just pathetic..
..and we ain't laughin' a bit
it's the saddest of shit, so now you can see faggot
that your verses are the reason we don't wanna B-Rabbit
please scrap it, cuz honestly, i'm tired of these wack herbs
you're supposed to drop dope.. BR must have RB backwards
you'll never last nerd, and for real, this here is an illin' job
so watch me end your Hope so fast... I'll get accused for killin' Bob
your 24-0 even thoguh you battled every newbie who eva said HELLO/
althoght against me you get ruptured juss like a structure and ya flow/
your best line and man it wasn't too good either rabbit...man u got better than this show off a lil man...Nice TRy!!!
it's the saddest of shit, so now you can see faggot
that your verses are the reason we don't wanna B-Rabbit
please scrap it, cuz honestly, i'm tired of these wack herbs
you're supposed to drop dope.. BR must have RB backwards
you'll never last nerd, and for real, this here is an illin' job
so watch me end your Hope so fast... I'll get accused for killin' Bob
Hey man nice job....I like your style nad this ^^^ was very well put together becuz it flowed nicely...sorry rabbit but lay doubt came a little better man...
Imma vote for Lay Doubt...but hey good battle guys...you 2 hit my sig battles and layed hit my one vs. xplicit for sho man thanx and good job to both parties!!! later!!!
v/Lay Doubt
ay i dont kno if im allowed to vote on these battles but i like to break the battles down so yall can count it or not up to yall
[b-rabbit]
i can merk you rip you kno doubt afta this battle you been offically "layed out"/(nice line but wheres the rest of the bar)
all of your battles your rhymes have juss been wasted.../
.....even tho every single line was copyed and pasted/(this was a koo lil bar)
you say Violence Uprising neva seen sum 1 as bad very well suprising/(again wheres the rest of the bar)
your 24-0 even thoguh you battled every newbie who eva said HELLO/
althoght against me you get ruptured juss like a structure and ya flow/(nice lil punch/personal)
overall this wasnt a good battle verse. it could of been alot betta. keep it up pimpin u will elevate believe me.
no beef just da truth.
[layout]
it's the saddest of shit, so now you can see faggot
that your verses are the reason we don't wanna B-Rabbit(koo lil punch)
i'm furious too, smackin a bitch that's lackin the wit
think that battle in your sig is funny? it's just pathetic..
..and we ain't laughin' a bit(this punch was ur best and it wasnt much)
if u really r 24-0 i dont kno how. this wasnt much of a verse either. just keep it up i guess.
overall i thought this was not much of a battle but here is my decision
my vote goes to B-rabbit just cuz he had more punches. u did have the best punch but he just hit wit more.
so hate it or go wit it.
like i said u dont have to accept da vote but i did it honestly.
no beef just da truth.
~1~
good battle man....UPPIN^^
yo...bitch ass wannabe battle me think he a MC/
like he the one N only good rapper on RB/
uhh….no
well bitch you aint shit nutthin butta has-bin admit it/
your rhymes are juss lyrically unfitted you can be chewed up and spitted/
once again no
i can merk you rip you kno doubt afta this battle you been offically "layed out"/
umm….this isn’t even a whole bar so……..NO
all of your battles your rhymes have juss been wasted.../
.....even tho every single line was copyed and pasted/
you can prolly guess by now what Im gonna say
you say Violence Uprising neva seen sum 1 as bad very well suprising/
once again it’s only one line, wheres the rest of the bar dumbass
your 24-0 even thoguh you battled every newbie who eva said HELLO/
althoght against me you get ruptured juss like a structure and ya flow/
lemme see……..no
so stay outta raps until ya mide adapts end ya witha 1-2 pucnch make ya spine collapse/
nope
you all fake shoot bottle caps get them form tha store go and do ya country shit tha music you were borin for/
and again no
aiyo.. i'm worried for you, all in a hurry to lose
you dope?.. like a reporter asking a question..
..that's some curious news
nah, coulda been better
i'm furious too, smackin a bitch that's lackin the wit
think that battle in your sig is funny? it's just pathetic..
..and we ain't laughin' a bit
decent
it's the saddest of shit, so now you can see faggot
that your verses are the reason we don't wanna B-Rabbit
ok
please scrap it, cuz honestly, i'm tired of these wack herbs
you're supposed to drop dope.. BR must have RB backwards
like this
you'll never last nerd, and for real, this here is an illin' job
so watch me end your Hope so fast... I'll get accused for killin' Bob
nice closer
vote-lay doubt, don’t see how the fuk b-rabbit even got one vote
ummm……..elevate, A LOT b-rabbit
yo ill vote on this battle if you guy's vote on
God'$LyricalGift vs Lyrical Burst
it would be much appreciated...good looks
it doesn't work like that. ^
you didn't poll your vote Mak.
upping for votes.. leave links.
please scrap it, cuz honestly, i'm tired of these wack herbs
you're supposed to drop dope.. BR must have RB backwards
vs
werid attempts at self glory...i think.
anyways... B-Rabbit is clearly under the impression that he's dope.
Your not.
v/geno
look for my battles if you will.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial
B-Rabbit:
yo...bitch ass wannabe battle me think he a MC/
like he the one N only good rapper on RB/
-attempted diss, not a good can-o-whoopass opener
well bitch you aint shit nutthin butta has-bin admit it/
your rhymes are juss lyrically unfitted you can be chewed up and spitted/
-nice hit, fix tha struc
i can merk you rip you kno doubt afta this battle you been offically "layed out"/
all of your battles your rhymes have juss been wasted.../
-where's rhyme, ya fell off on ya rhyme scheme, good insult
.....even tho every single line was copyed and pasted/
you say Violence Uprising neva seen sum 1 as bad very well suprising/
-aight line
your 24-0 even thoguh you battled every newbie who eva said HELLO/
althoght against me you get ruptured juss like a structure and ya flow/
-I like that, I like that, punchin a nigga
so stay outta raps until ya mide adapts end ya witha 1-2 pucnch make ya spine collapse/
you all fake shoot bottle caps get them form tha store go and do ya country shit tha music you were borin for/
-rhyme? punch-kinda, struc
overall-not to bad, i gotta check tha other cat's now, but work a lil on struc
Lay Doubt
aiyo.. i'm worried for you, all in a hurry to lose
you dope?.. like a reporter asking a question..
-rhyme scheme?
..that's some curious news
i'm furious too, smackin a bitch that's lackin the wit
-rhyme scheme?horrible struc
think that battle in your sig is funny? it's just pathetic..
..and we ain't laughin' a bit
-fuck ya struc but nice lil diss
it's the saddest of shit, so now you can see faggot
that your verses are the reason we don't wanna B-Rabbit
-like that like that hit 'em
please scrap it, cuz honestly, i'm tired of these wack herbs
you're supposed to drop dope.. BR must have RB backwards
-haha, good one niggy
you'll never last nerd, and for real, this here is an illin' job
so watch me end your Hope so fast... I'll get accused for killin' Bob
-aight closer
overall fix tha struc up a lil, ya fell off ya rhyme scheme a lil, keep up wit that an it wasn't too badd of a verse there playa
V/this dude Lay Doubt here for tha better verse on this script
hit this up here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=172999
honestly
lol, you break it down like this dawg..
aiyo.. i'm worried for you, all in a hurry to lose
you dope?.. like a reporter asking a question..
..that's some curious news
one bar.. ^
i'm furious too, smackin a bitch that's lackin the wit
think that battle in your sig is funny? it's just pathetic..
..and we ain't laughin' a bit
another bar.. ^
it's just a different set up.. but the structure and rhyme scheme was straight.
Thanks for the vote, I'll check that link in a minute.. if you want a battle voted on Dep!ct, leave a link.. cuz I'm not gonna go hunting for one..
3-0, my lead.. more votes please.
yea, forgot too
here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174654
flip yeah man,
b-rab, go ryte in ur rhyme book, cause u cant rap in real life......
no good lines or punches, structure was wack joe, u should stick to workin at the detroit press man..........
overall i give you a 3/50, for tryin....
lay dout, nice punches, all of them conected, b's k.o'd, all ur lines were dope but liked dis one the most...."
i'm furious too, smackin a bitch that's lackin the wit
think that battle in your sig is funny? it's just pathetic..
..and we ain't laughin' a bit"
27/50
vote/ld
B-Rabbit: You need to elevate dag. Your rhymes were simplistic at best and ur structure was all over the place. i didn't see any thing that really sttod out at all.
Lay Doubt: Not bad at all although i've seen u do a lot better. Put I think u played up to ur competition, which wasn't much.
Anyway easy vot = Lay
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meh @ two disqualified votes..
upping for more votes now.. blah.
leave links and i'll return the favor.. peace.
weak battle but lay doubt came harder and wittier. he connected his punches and b rabbit didn't. b rabbit came played and basically spit statements and threats.
one sided.
v/Lay
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ight=omnicient
^Return the favor when u see this.
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hit this: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173894
this was all LAY DOUBT... b rabbit i mean u tryed to diss him.. but lOL ur punches missed buy a fucking county mile..lay u ddint have to do much to win this.. dunno y u even battling this dude but fuck.. just ur last 2 barz ripped him, can tell u didnt try at all what that take u 2 mins ? lol....
rabbit elevate some more, read some battles in the LLL etc, and try aagain
best barz of the batte:
please scrap it, cuz honestly, i'm tired of these wack herbs
you're supposed to drop dope.. BR must have RB backwards
you'll never last nerd, and for real, this here is an illin' job
so watch me end your Hope so fast... I'll get accused for killin' Bob
v/lay
Easily
wow @ you idiots not being able to vote.
you faggots are being lazy.. leave real feedback so it doesn't get disqualified.
upping AGAIN.. leave links if you vote for real.
nothing
vs.
i'm furious too, smackin a bitch that's lackin the wit
think that battle in your sig is funny? it's just pathetic..
..and we ain't laughin' a bit
it's the saddest of shit, so now you can see faggot
that your verses are the reason we don't wanna B-Rabbit
please scrap it, cuz honestly, i'm tired of these wack herbs
you're supposed to drop dope.. BR must have RB backwards
you'll never last nerd, and for real, this here is an illin' job
so watch me end your Hope so fast... I'll get accused for killin' Bob
lay's verse was good... not the greatest but it did the job... b-rabbit,you had no clever lines at all and your structure was crap.. your lines were stretched as hell
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173614
nothing
vs.
i'm furious too, smackin a bitch that's lackin the wit
think that battle in your sig is funny? it's just pathetic..
..and we ain't laughin' a bit
it's the saddest of shit, so now you can see faggot
that your verses are the reason we don't wanna B-Rabbit
please scrap it, cuz honestly, i'm tired of these wack herbs
you're supposed to drop dope.. BR must have RB backwards
one sided.
B rabbit- punches were weak.
structure was crap. work on your punches and creativity.
lay doubt- nothin much to say. but overall it was a solid drop.
punches were good. but i wasnt feeling your opener tho.
v/lay
for obvious reasons
RTF.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175748