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Last edited by Cels; March 6th, 2005 at 08:13 PM
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I feel sorry for this herb, kid, there's nothing to celebrate,
expecially since you gotta sit on a migit's foot to elevate,
Ur not dope enough to brag fag, even kids put L's in ur bag,
cuz when 3rd graders wanna have fun, they easily play Tag,
Treat you like a toilet, and have you russian off like berlin,
now TNL is wet, so we got better aim to piss on the crew urine,
Why verbally box you?, ur killing urself, there's no assumptions,
so staple ur fist together, so u can at least connect ya punches,
He's The Next Level without the next, he's stable and cryin,
cuz if i say this cat's the king of the jungle, then i'd be lion,
Its amazes me how Moe wins battle..it must be pure luck
Cuz I aint naming a Stooge..but hes known to fuck something up
And if you’ve seen the show no doubt this dudes ugly as fuck
Kid had a date with destiny…….but even that stood him up
Fuck Moe even tho hes easy going and actually pretty laid back
His Punches hit me? the only thing he be hitting..is the Sack
And the road to success? your going nowhere, u dumb faggot
…And Moe is hearing horns..... cause hes backing up traffic
His Cheap verse cheap rhymes…will only get him so far in this game
Cause I Paid a penny for his thoughts…and I actually received change
hmmmm very very close battle here guys.... i think tagailo took this 1 though... barely but i think he won with that last punch at the end there... but i think it was pretty weak all in all... o well nicely done guys keep at her
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Aight here's a Little BreakDown..
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Tagailo.. Your Verse Was pretty decent. I liked how you
used Simple words at the Ends of your Lines, but made
your verse Still Sound Good. You wrote this Verse well, the
flow of it was Good, but the Punches were Better.
Its amazes me how Moe wins battle..it must be pure luck
Cuz I aint naming a Stooge..but hes known to fuck something up
And if you’ve seen the show no doubt this dudes ugly as fuck
Kid had a date with destiny…….but even that stood him up
^^these Lines were Clever and had Ok Finishers. Nice.
the Next Two Lines were Simple, not Clever and Wack.
His Cheap verse cheap rhymes…will only get him so far in this game
Cause I Paid a penny for his thoughts…and I actually received change
^^I Liked this alot. Swear Iv'e heard it Worded Differently
before though, but you Pulled it off the way you worded it.
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Omnicient.. your Punches were aight Too. Close Battle
right up until the End. T just had Stronger Punches though.
I feel sorry for this herb, kid, there's nothing to celebrate,
expecially since you gotta sit on a migit's foot to elevate,
Why verbally box you?, ur killing urself, there's no assumptions,
so staple ur fist together, so u can at least connect ya punches,
^^these are your best Lines in my opinion. your Finisher
was ok wordplay.. but honestly Kinda Corny.. just Dumb.
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tagailo got this,ts not that omni's verse wasnt decent but.. a migit line bro??? no no no.. i refuse to look at played shit any other way then played shit.. im sorry.. tagailo was more consistant, iver seen similar lines to the date with destiny thing, but other than that pound for pound tagailo came a little harder,lus his closer was dope, vote=tagailo
Cause I Paid a penny for his thoughts…and I actually received change
Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.
tailgo went harder had better everythin v/tailgo
hit up my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175784
Why verbally box you?, ur killing urself, there's no assumptions,
so staple ur fist together, so u can at least connect ya punches,
vs.
Fuck Moe even tho hes easy going and actually pretty laid back
His Punches hit me? the only thing he be hitting..is the Sack
And the road to success? your going nowhere, u dumb faggot
…And Moe is hearing horns..... cause hes backing up traffic
Alright battle.. both of you had some played shit and everything.. Tagailo came slightly more consistent with his punches.. although he had a couple of played cliches.. both had good structure and flow. Moe's punches just didn't hit as hard in my opinion.. not much more to really say about it.
v/ Tagailo
Been a real one.
hit this plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173894
I feel sorry for this herb, kid, there's nothing to celebrate,
expecially since you gotta sit on a migit's foot to elevate,
ok opener, could of been harder
Ur not dope enough to brag fag, even kids put L's in ur bag,
cuz when 3rd graders wanna have fun, they easily play Tag,
weak
Treat you like a toilet, and have you russian off like berlin,
now TNL is wet, so we got better aim to piss on the crew urine,
decent
Why verbally box you?, ur killing urself, there's no assumptions,
so staple ur fist together, so u can at least connect ya punches,
best bar.
He's The Next Level without the next, he's stable and cryin,
cuz if i say this cat's the king of the jungle, then i'd be lion,
lol.. okish, pretty dry.. not a good finish
Its amazes me how Moe wins battle..it must be pure luck
Cuz I aint naming a Stooge..but hes known to fuck something up
decent,but nope
And if you’ve seen the show no doubt this dudes ugly as fuck
Kid had a date with destiny…….but even that stood him up
lol ight
Fuck Moe even tho hes easy going and actually pretty laid back
His Punches hit me? the only thing he be hitting..is the Sack
good
And the road to success? your going nowhere, u dumb faggot
…And Moe is hearing horns..... cause hes backing up traffic
lmao..was coo
His Cheap verse cheap rhymes…will only get him so far in this game
Cause I Paid a penny for his thoughts…and I actually received change
haha ight closer
this goes to tag, for having more quotables.. coming more consistant, having harder punches,personals
v/tag
y won't no one vote on my battles lol http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173498
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175609
^Cuz ur gay.
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