12 Lines seems fine.
due in an hour? hour 1/2 if need be.
good luck.
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12 Lines seems fine.
due in an hour? hour 1/2 if need be.
good luck.
bada bing.
in.
kk. in for me swell.
whem are yall going whos goin first some one better specify that
dont free post.
it's like this...
eye already thrashed ur crew, so who are you to talk shit
ur about to kill urself follow’n sirus…
like freaks after the hail bop comet
& after reading your battles I know you don’t measure
..I don’t know u, but I know enough…and u aint clever..
Breed talent w/ this ass and ur destined to get a mule
12 of my rhymes up and felon notice just to break rule
Ur a fool, who couldn’t get shit to stick wipe’n ur ass w/ pot-its
Its sad u so bad kid…
I gotta bend rule backwards so someone I’ll take notice
Kid a poor sport? Naw this bitch won’t ever complain
Besides, to be a poor sport don’t you have to have game?
Just Freak-Show of sorts, & I got reason to hint
That this kid couldn’t drop dimes…even w/ sprint
pot it's = post its... spellin mistake :\
you were in the league for a match, only to get booted from a win..
but at least you can say ya made LLL ...... less wack again.
ya crews gay, check their damn roster to get a sample..
but.. all TNL punches are played .. & he's a living example.
you obviously suck dude, but whats actually worse is..
stupidity is as stupidity does... write all your verses.
we all know ya alias dep!ct, but even that dont help ya win..
& if someone could fill me in...
since when was adding ! for a letter cool again?..
id embarass ur ass here, but dude.. im still having my fun..
afterall, let bygones be bygones, and by gone i mean ur done.
you's a comedian, crackin jokes like its a damn curse..
but he who laughs last .. prolly read your whole verse.
fucka 1 !!
0 is the loneliest number, zeeeeero is the loooonliest numberrrr !!
givin this to rule...better lines and good stuff!
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic
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up 1, & rule... are u really going to accpet that fucks vote? where any feedback or anything that proves it a legit vote?
^ naw man, i PM'd a mod to dq it . i aint that cheap yo .. lol
i know u aint, thats why i didnt go to a MOD, and talked to u here.
u've never acted fetish towards me, thats why i posted here.
well this is gay ..
the inate characteristics of this battle.... yea.
yo this was a real fuckin tuff battle to decide on but lemme break it down...
SirusX..
eye already thrashed ur crew, so who are you to talk shit
ur about to kill urself follow’n sirus…
like freaks after the hail bop comet
pretty tight punch...i give this....5/5
& after reading your battles I know you don’t measure
..I don’t know u, but I know enough…and u aint clever..
aight punch...3/5
Breed talent w/ this ass and ur destined to get a mule
12 of my rhymes up and felon notice just to break rule
LOL...5/5
Ur a fool, who couldn’t get shit to stick wipe’n ur ass w/ pot-its
Its sad u so bad kid…
I gotta bend rule backwards so someone I’ll take notice
LOL...kinda stretched but...5/5
Kid a poor sport? Naw this bitch won’t ever complain
Besides, to be a poor sport don’t you have to have game?
good punch....4/5
Just Freak-Show of sorts, & I got reason to hint
That this kid couldn’t drop dimes…even w/ sprint
aight punch...straight...3/5
score:.. 25/30
Rule...
you were in the league for a match, only to get booted from a win..
but at least you can say ya made LLL ...... less wack again.
prtetty good punch...4/5
ya crews gay, check their damn roster to get a sample..
but.. all TNL punches are played .. & he's a living example.
LOL...5/5
you obviously suck dude, but whats actually worse is..
stupidity is as stupidity does... write all your verses.
straight punch....4/5
we all know ya alias dep!ct, but even that dont help ya win..
& if someone could fill me in...
since when was adding ! for a letter cool again?..
aint really a punch toward him...3/5
id embarass ur ass here, but dude.. im still having my fun..
afterall, let bygones be bygones, and by gone i mean ur done.
kool punch...5/5
you's a comedian, crackin jokes like its a damn curse..
but he who laughs last .. prolly read your whole verse.
LOL....5/5
score: 26/30 B+
givin this fo Rule...he got you by one point Sirus....but otha wise good shit both yall
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173757
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174009
my bad ...i fogot tha links to my battles.......!ill highly appreciate it if yall drop a vote on both of those!
i cant vote..........
rule took this,verse had harder punches....prolly should spend a bit more time writin it though,tha structure was aight,but tha flow wasnt tha greatest...
X,i didnt understand alot of your punches....if they were punches,an ya flow,structure an rhymes didnt seem to go together.
return tha favour.....no hate
peace
lol this was a good battle i cant vote but id say rules last lines had me laughin....thats how an endin of a battle should be sirux u were good but its always the opener and closer that makes us go daaammn and u didnt really have that...
VOTE ON THIS THO HONESTLY
GANGSTA NATION VS WICKED
who are these children...& where did they come from?
Sirus-X: man you had too muche filler, there were a few good lines but not consistant, flow was decent, not any multis, and a few personals...
Rule.: your shit came hard, had good punches, made me laugh, this was a good verse, especially the ender, flow was better, and punches connected better....
V/ Rule
annnd 5...........................................
RTF
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=173379&page=2
Sirus:
weak punches some were statements and some were played. u lacked personals and used that played "break rule" concept which is getting annoying.
Rule:
The depict personals were good and u connected ur pucnhes well. u had wittier and more creative concepts and flowed better. this was a one sided battle, u got this simply becuz of the effort u put in.
v/Rule
RTF In My Battle with AtotheKnice Its The last battle link in my sig U should See the poll results youd prolly laugh But RTF
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Well Lets Compare the best punchez from Rules verse
ya crews gay, check their damn roster to get a sample..
but.. all TNL punches are played .. & he's a living example.
&
id embarass ur ass here, but dude.. im still having my fun..
afterall, let bygones be bygones, and by gone i mean ur done.
Compared to
Kid a poor sport? Naw this bitch won’t ever complain
Besides, to be a poor sport don’t you have to have game?
Just Freak-Show of sorts, & I got reason to hint
That this kid couldn’t drop dimes…even w/ sprint
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Id Haveto give my Vote to Rule although you both couldve did alot more better ........ I think rule still dropped better Than sirus when it came to punchez and personalz
So There
still tryin to get votes on this fun thread.
Just Freak-Show of sorts, & I got reason to hint
That this kid couldn’t drop dimes…even w/ sprint
vs
ya crews gay, check their damn roster to get a sample..
but.. all TNL punches are played .. & he's a living example.
you obviously suck dude, but whats actually worse is..
stupidity is as stupidity does... write all your verses.
we all know ya alias dep!ct, but even that dont help ya win..
& if someone could fill me in...
since when was adding ! for a letter cool again?..
id embarass ur ass here, but dude.. im still having my fun..
afterall, let bygones be bygones, and by gone i mean ur done.
v/ rule
eye already thrashed ur crew, so who are you to talk shit
ur about to kill urself follow’n sirus…
like freaks after the hail bop comet
--not bad
& after reading your battles I know you don’t measure
..I don’t know u, but I know enough…and u aint clever..
--okish
Breed talent w/ this ass and ur destined to get a mule
12 of my rhymes up and felon notice just to break rule
--not bad
Ur a fool, who couldn’t get shit to stick wipe’n ur ass w/ pot-its
Its sad u so bad kid…
I gotta bend rule backwards so someone I’ll take notice
--1st line not bad, otherwise just okish
Kid a poor sport? Naw this bitch won’t ever complain
Besides, to be a poor sport don’t you have to have game?
--ok
Just Freak-Show of sorts, & I got reason to hint
That this kid couldn’t drop dimes…even w/ sprint
--ok
vs.
you were in the league for a match, only to get booted from a win..
but at least you can say ya made LLL ...... less wack again.
--hehe quite nice
ya crews gay, check their damn roster to get a sample..
but.. all TNL punches are played .. & he's a living example.
--ok
you obviously suck dude, but whats actually worse is..
stupidity is as stupidity does... write all your verses.
--hehe
we all know ya alias dep!ct, but even that dont help ya win..
& if someone could fill me in...
since when was adding ! for a letter cool again?..
--hehe ok, personal
id embarass ur ass here, but dude.. im still having my fun..
afterall, let bygones be bygones, and by gone i mean ur done.
--okish
you's a comedian, crackin jokes like its a damn curse..
but he who laughs last .. prolly read your whole verse.
--lol not bad
Rule. takes this/ v/Rule
damn, i feel like a real dick... i do rtf i jus aint seen it
this was a fairly good battle
i reckon you both brought some heat
v/ rule- other dude wasnt bad, but i feel that rule was prolly better in most areas (punchlines, flow , structure etc.)
the last line cracked me up too
when you get enough posts actually vote on mine
peace