aight here we go nikka!...the rules:
10 linez..
house rulez..
YOU spit first..
check-in's due in 30 minutez..
VERSES due in an hour..
all the basic shit actually...
this is my check-in!
843-Kid
lyrically_insane
aight here we go nikka!...the rules:
10 linez..
house rulez..
YOU spit first..
check-in's due in 30 minutez..
VERSES due in an hour..
all the basic shit actually...
this is my check-in!
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aight this bitch aint spitting so i guess ill spit my SHIT!!!
.......aight nikka....here we go*piks up mic*
An x-ray shows a dick in yo stomach…......this KID’s been wit many-gays
My punchlines leave U‘speechless’ but aint like U ‘had a vocabulary anyways
He lacks crudentials but like "puerto rico" wanting to be on the map
Frustrated by inabilities..like "handless giftship workers" he can't wrap(rap)
You'll never be an issue until you really UPDATE your wacked out text
while yours suck,my verse is taken a Haik(hike) more than social rejects
Ya punches could be "Alexander Graham Bell" an not fathem connection
You'd have an alergic seizure if talent was administered in injections
Your punches complexity's like Asians standing under tha bombs of hiroshima
Opposing me with yo 'skilled' verses is dumber than registering a stolen beemer
*drops mic and walks out without any further werds*
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alright
u think ur hot but ur rocking my name
and u sound more like shit , u in need of raising ur game
better yet in dis one line u'll already be losing
left cold in ur blood wit ur throwback stained
i'll spit in ur coffin screaming the a-town athemn
yo puches comes once in a while, mine comes every stanza
better yet every two lines plus i got two nines
that'll leave u hurting in pain more then niggers wit two lifes
but keep u coming back like a sex addict wit two wifes
red dot on ur head u in need of a couple new rhymes
we shoulda gone longer
ya boi
An x-ray shows a dick in yo stomach…......this KID’s been wit many-gays
My punchlines leave U‘speechless’ but aint like U ‘had a vocabulary anyways
He lacks crudentials but like "puerto rico" wanting to be on the map
Frustrated by inabilities..like "handless giftship workers" he can't wrap(rap)
Your punches complexity's like Asians standing under tha bombs of hiroshima
Opposing me with yo 'skilled' verses is dumber than registering a stolen beemer
vs.
u think ur hot but ur rocking my name
and u sound more like shit , u in need of raising ur game
better yet in dis one line u'll already be losing
left cold in ur blood wit ur throwback stained
i'll spit in ur coffin screaming the a-town athemn
yo puches comes once in a while, mine comes every stanza
better yet every two lines plus i got two nines
that'll leave u hurting in pain more then niggers wit two lifes
but keep u coming back like a sex addict wit two wifes
red dot on ur head u in need of a couple new rhymes
not even a close battle. lyrical insane had harder punches. while 843 had none. and lyrical's first two bars and last bar was just it.
v/lyrically insane
hit up this battle.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4&page=2&pp=15
this dude forgot to POLL VOTE.can i do it for him?
well if i could vote it woulda gone to INSANE-tha reAL ONE!
843- Kid--weak ass punches..aight flow..aight structure..WAY TOO SIMPLE..sum of yo lines were just stupid!
lyrically insane--tight punches..hard hitting..good st4ucture...tight flow..basically you topped him in everything..keep battling yall!!
oh for real tho..can i vote FOR him since YOUNG AVELOn didnt POLL??
thanx homeboy!...
yo people cmon!...BUMPIN THIS#1!!!!!!!
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yo sorry i cant vote...but when i can i will..mean time can yall HONESTLY VOTE ON THIS BATTLE
CHUOK VS J SPILLA...pce
yea i cant vote but lyric won this1........
cmon people ii need to get these cloesd!!!!!!!1
BUMPING THIS!#2
bump,bump!
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ZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzz who were u verseing Lyrically Insane
Punches-IL
Flow-IL
Structure-843
Muiltes-IL
Wordplay-IL
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An x-ray shows a dick in yo stomach…......this KID’s been wit many-gays
My punchlines leave U‘speechless’ but aint like U ‘had a vocabulary anyways
He lacks crudentials but like "puerto rico" wanting to be on the map
Frustrated by inabilities..like "handless giftship workers" he can't wrap(rap)
Your punches complexity's like Asians standing under tha bombs of hiroshima
Opposing me with yo 'skilled' verses is dumber than registering a stolen beemer
vs.
u think ur hot but ur rocking my name
and u sound more like shit , u in need of raising ur game
better yet in dis one line u'll already be losing
left cold in ur blood wit ur throwback stained
i'll spit in ur coffin screaming the a-town athemn
yo puches comes once in a while, mine comes every stanza
better yet every two lines plus i got two nines
that'll leave u hurting in pain more then niggers wit two lifes
but keep u coming back like a sex addict wit two wifes
red dot on ur head u in need of a couple new rhymes
ok i i could vote i would give this one to lyrically_insane.he came out harder and had more punch lines...843-Kid was ok but it was to Simple.
v/lyrically_insane
my bad i ment to say if i could vote i would....my fuck up
nice battle nott
lyrical you fuckin merked this kid
843- Kid--weak ass punches..aight flow..aight structure..WAY TOO SIMPLE..sum of yo lines were just stupid!
lyrically insane--tight punches..hard hitting..good st4ucture...tight flow..basically you topped him in everything.
v/lyrical
yo lyrical when you goin battle me pimp fuck these newbs no hate we boys i just want to battle you
UPPING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!#3
up,uP,UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo people!
BUMPING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!#4
bump,bump,bump,bump
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