yo aight, this is my first drop so tell me what yall think i need to work on and all that stuff......
in tha hood.... You see hustlas hustling and dealers selling drugs thugs,pimps, and hoes even getting fucked Too much violence and crimes,drug dealers selling dimes Therse dark futures awaiting,kuz it seem the sun neva shine People getting shot for drugs,people killing for money even kids getting in the wrongful accions,aint it funny? Crime scenes everywhere but no cops around for miles they dont come when we call,but hurry when a rich man dials Girls getting rapped and brused,but no one does anything 'bout it Kids getting jumped and bruised,but no one does anything 'bout it Only thing you hear is ambulence sirens and cursing Car alarms going off and house windows bursting aint it funny? How people doing whatever it take to survive Kids learning to hold different guns at the early age of nine Tha hood is where i was born,im ahppy i moved ahead It was worth all the tears i cried and blood i bled
just a liul freestyle....my first drop
need feedback ppl!!thanx in advance
