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I'm not laying out more rules, but don't do anything stupid.
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Battles are due 11:59 eastern time on Friday.
Vote on at least 3 battles & leave links.
Only LLL competitors may vote on LLL battles.
I'm not laying out more rules, but don't do anything stupid.
the irony..
how bout just 10.
LMFAO... Sounds good. Good luck.
aight.. its like
i saw this dude write .. your shits played, & i must confess..
id take a walk in your shoes.. but people'd actually Payless..
been around awhile .. & yet indecision has him playin games..
identity crisis? HELL NAW .. dude's bout to pass Chrit in alias names..
dude's appearance is dirt .. kid needs a confidence boost prolly..
& id lend a second hand, but it seems ya already did ya shopping.
talk is cheap man, and you've wasted every fuckin amount..
God has gathered enough pounds.. ud think he had a UK bank account..
your battlings fallin off bro .. nothing really decent in awhile..
i mean..
check Jr champ match .. all your writtens seem to be Untitled..
Czech it...
Lloyd's just a whore in this league, up to the point he had sex with it
He's the type to struggle to make a deadline.... & fall down next to it
Tryin' to bring out the big guns, dawg? Son, you ain't fuckin' with me
I'd bring out my Rule. of thumb punches.. but he's still under my knee
Tab tries to act all thugged out & shit, thinks he'll act like a black guy
Heh, his whole style consists of a voting ring, rock bandana black eye
Brings played concepts every day to the table, left w/ nothin' to right
Tab Lloyd's a bigger old joke.. than every cast member on Nick at Nite
So in closing, I'll just comma'll over him, and have Lloyd quotin' my art
& leave this herb so bruised.... that heads won't even question marks
Later
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168619
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168614
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168617
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168613
Rule
been around awhile .. & yet indecision has him playin games..
identity crisis? HELL NAW .. dude's bout to pass Chrit in alias names..
dude's appearance is dirt .. kid needs a confidence boost prolly..
& id lend a second hand, but it seems ya already did ya shopping.
talk is cheap man, and you've wasted every fuckin amount..
God has gathered enough pounds.. ud think he had a UK bank account..
God
Lloyd's just a whore in this league, up to the point he had sex with it
He's the type to struggle to make a deadline.... & fall down next to it
that first line was nice by god, but that was pretty much it, rule hadda a pretty coo verse, them six lines basically took it
v/ rule
Lloyd's just a whore in this league, up to the point he had sex with it
He's the type to struggle to make a deadline.... & fall down next to it
^ dope
been around awhile .. & yet indecision has him playin games..
identity crisis? HELL NAW .. dude's bout to pass Chrit in alias names..
dude's appearance is dirt .. kid needs a confidence boost prolly..
& id lend a second hand, but it seems ya already did ya shopping.
^ doper
the u.k line sucked jace
v/ rule though
i saw this dude write .. your shits played, & i must confess..
id take a walk in your shoes.. but people'd actually Payless..
been around awhile .. & yet indecision has him playin games..
identity crisis? HELL NAW .. dude's bout to pass Chrit in alias names..
vs
Lloyd's just a whore in this league, up to the point he had sex with it
He's the type to struggle to make a deadline.... & fall down next to it
Tab tries to act all thugged out & shit, thinks he'll act like a black guy
Heh, his whole style consists of a voting ring, rock bandana black eye
and God came harder.
v/God
Vote Rule
saw this dude write .. your shits played, & i must confess..
id take a walk in your shoes.. but people'd actually Payless..
been around awhile .. & yet indecision has him playin games..
identity crisis? HELL NAW .. dude's bout to pass Chrit in alias names..
vs
Lloyd's just a whore in this league, up to the point he had sex with it
He's the type to struggle to make a deadline.... & fall down next to it
i thought this was close.. rhyme scheme goes to god.. personals goes to rule.. punches kinda even, consistancy kinda even, ima actually have to base this off originality and x factor.. god was more original.. i thought, cuz rule u said dude like 3 or 4 times u gotta stay away from that, one word can make ur verse seem repetetive.. and x factor.. i thought god's opening line was the best line.. so, close but vote=god
i saw this dude write .. your shits played, & i must confess..
id take a walk in your shoes.. but people'd actually Payless..
been around awhile .. & yet indecision has him playin games..
identity crisis? HELL NAW .. dude's bout to pass Chrit in alias names..
talk is cheap man, and you've wasted every fuckin amount..
God has gathered enough pounds.. ud think he had a UK bank account..
Vs.
Lloyd's just a whore in this league, up to the point he had sex with it
He's the type to struggle to make a deadline.... & fall down next to it
Tab tries to act all thugged out & shit, thinks he'll act like a black guy
Heh, his whole style consists of a voting ring, rock bandana black eye
Pretty decent battle here, but rule had the better verse overall. Better punches and personals, the pounds line was hot. God, you came ok, some reused concepts but overall decent
V/Rule.
i actually got god takin this..
for oblivious reasons
rule, you my boy and all, but that uk bank account line and payless = no-no's. they weren't BAD, but they weren't effective eitha.. your best line was the personal on the alias's, shit was maddd funny
god, you came good, nothing really played, or whack, and the struggle/deadline line was dope, liked it
like i said, i got God takin this
v/ god.
^LOL.. I think he meant obvious... oblivious sounds like D/R
Lol, yeah, my bad.
now THAT'S funny.Quote:
Originally Posted by Expo
Word... LOL...
been around awhile .. & yet indecision has him playin games..
identity crisis? HELL NAW .. dude's bout to pass Chrit in alias names..
dude's appearance is dirt .. kid needs a confidence boost prolly..
& id lend a second hand, but it seems ya already did ya shopping.
vs.
Lloyd's just a whore in this league, up to the point he had sex with it
He's the type to struggle to make a deadline.... & fall down next to it
Tab tries to act all thugged out & shit, thinks he'll act like a black guy
Heh, his whole style consists of a voting ring, rock bandana black eye
the quotables were even in this battle. but i feel God had a less played verse that was more consistent. Rule.'s opener really hurt his verse in my opinion... wasn't feeling it...anyway.
for more consistency...
v/ God
saw this dude write .. your shits played, & i must confess..
id take a walk in your shoes.. but people'd actually Payless..
nah. pay less for what? I cant think of anything that we pay for on rb so this is nothing but wordplay to me.
been around awhile .. & yet indecision has him playin games..
identity crisis? HELL NAW .. dude's bout to pass Chrit in alias names..
decent
dude's appearance is dirt .. kid needs a confidence boost prolly..
& id lend a second hand, but it seems ya already did ya shopping.
above average. you had the punchline, but lending a second hand? ive heard of lending a hand but this is a little forced. so when i read it i was like "wtf", then i understood why you said second hand. but it shouldn't have me saying "wtf" in the first place, nah sayin? just trying to help you out, it was good wordplay except for the fact the phrase was a bit forced.
talk is cheap man, and you've wasted every fuckin amount..
God has gathered enough pounds.. ud think he had a UK bank account..
Lol, good.
your battlings fallin off bro .. nothing really decent in awhile..
i mean..
check Jr champ match .. all your writtens seem to be Untitled..
alright.
Lloyd's just a whore in this league, up to the point he had sex with it
He's the type to struggle to make a deadline.... & fall down next to it
the setup was forced. but the punch was witty & hard hitting, made up for it easily. dope line.
Tryin' to bring out the big guns, dawg? Son, you ain't fuckin' with me
I'd bring out my Rule. of thumb punches.. but he's still under my knee
above average
Tab tries to act all thugged out & shit, thinks he'll act like a black guy
Heh, his whole style consists of a voting ring, rock bandana black eye
Lol i laughed, plus it was semi hard, good line.
Brings played concepts every day to the table, left w/ nothin' to right
Tab Lloyd's a bigger old joke.. than every cast member on Nick at Nite
no.
So in closing, I'll just comma'll over him, and have Lloyd quotin' my art
& leave this herb so bruised.... that heads won't even question marks
meh.
v/ God, pretty good battle. two heads you wouldn't expect to see a good battle from, both come a lot better than you expect. props guys.
rule..
been around awhile .. & yet indecision has him playin games..
identity crisis? HELL NAW .. dude's bout to pass Chrit in alias names..
dude's appearance is dirt .. kid needs a confidence boost prolly..
& id lend a second hand, but it seems ya already did ya shopping.
god..
Lloyd's just a whore in this league, up to the point he had sex with it
He's the type to struggle to make a deadline.... & fall down next to it
Tab tries to act all thugged out & shit, thinks he'll act like a black guy
Heh, his whole style consists of a voting ring, rock bandana black eye
gods 2 bars were better.. barely.. but still
v/god
up.. more votes..
I would vote but....
Rule used to be in IJL...
and I don't want anyone
to say D/Rider vote...
are you in LLL currently? if so you can vote. we don't do that d/r bullshit in LLL. anyone can vote on anything.
God wins (1-0)
rule loses (0-1)