-Crucial- Vs Pope

You posted in my callout and so i decided to make a battle.

Rules:
:No Crew Votes
:No Hate Votes
:No D/R Votes
:No Feeding off the others verse
:No Bullshit
:10 Line Verse, No More No Less
:Dope Your Verse ONE HOUR After Checkin

-muthafucka this muthafucka that how about i bring a whole clip to ur back this aint no movie i'll jappslap yo ass criscros ya ass leave ur ass at the half court line like u aint no wat happin tan colored porshe yeah it kinda look like apple saushe back to me firein on yo ass have ur shirt lookin like wet tomatoes block lookin like atfer tornados/ crucial this aint a game maintain ur frame ima keep my kool wen i bring dem shots to ur brain after this freestyle the game dun changed just like yo momma how she was givin me that change have yo ass eattin out a dumpster ur a nasty muthafuka wannabe gangsta u need to stop fruntin if u wanna roll wit us gangstas u betta b stuntin/sortin grams packin pakastanians wit glocks in both hands/send the task after yo ass im kinda like osama i blow things up just for the drama

Oh shit you actually showed......................i was starting to wonder........any way you didnt even check........this is my check.......

i tried but i couldnt so just put it.............................?

A’yo
Just a lil somthin…..
Check it…..
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Ill leave the Pope’s body more holy then the bible,
Beat me you got a better chance joinin the American idol,
We both new to this but we all know that you still cant spit,
Even if I stuck my hand up yo’ ass I wouldn’t feel yo shit,
The pope will get rocked like new shoes with different color laces,
My punches are the only reason you went to the dentist to get braces,
You could be Mr. Wilson and I could be Denis the menace,
All your rhymes are brocken like records, change ya name to guenis,
I took the lead in this battle and even the pope is takin my orders,
I told him rap needed a change and this fag braught quarters,
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Bligity Bligity Blah............Whoopdeedoo
Oh and good luck

Fuck......... this shit all the way in page three...............wtf. we need votes. Pope you gotta help me up this shit when it gets down cuz no one is votin. up #1

i know these people need to vote they only lookin! come on peeps

pope -muthafucka this muthafucka that how about i bring a whole clip to ur back this aint no movie i'll jappslap yo ass criscros ya ass leave ur ass at the half court line like u aint no wat happin tan colored porshe yeah it kinda look like apple saushe back to me firein on yo ass have ur shirt lookin like wet tomatoes block lookin like atfer tornados/ crucial this aint a game maintain ur frame ima keep my kool wen i bring dem shots to ur brain after this freestyle the game dun changed just like yo momma how she was givin me that change have yo ass eattin out a dumpster ur a nasty muthafuka wannabe gangsta u need to stop fruntin if u wanna roll wit us gangstas u betta b stuntin/sortin grams packin pakastanians wit glocks in both hands/send the task after yo ass im kinda like osama i blow things up just for the drama

^^^ This was very hard to read. Your structure is wak. U don't even have a structure. Sorry.



A’yo
Just a lil somthin…..
Check it…..
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Ill leave the Pope’s body more holy then the bible,
^^ Tight was good
Beat me you got a better chance joinin the American idol,
^^ tight
We both new to this but we all know that you still cant spit,
Even if I stuck my hand up yo’ ass I wouldn’t feel yo shit,
^^ both were tight
The pope will get rocked like new shoes with different color laces,
My punches are the only reason you went to the dentist to get braces,
^^that was tight u merked'em right there
You could be Mr. Wilson and I could be Denis the menace,
All your rhymes are brocken like records, change ya name to guenis,
I took the lead in this battle and even the pope is takin my orders,
I told him rap needed a change and this fag braught quarters,
.
.
.
.
.
.
Bligity Bligity Blah............Whoopdeedoo
Oh and good luck
^^Ok

Vote/ Crucial he merked you. I couldn't even read you shit pope.

Omg crucial can you teach me your good man whoever you are i want a friggin lesson wit you man..... Good job both, but CRUCIAL ate this kid, POPE, sry man keep droppin' both...... if i could I would vote for CRUCIAL!!!!!!!!!!

Pope - Your shit was wack man. Put a structure to your verse and think of real punches instead of all that gangsta shit that you wrote about. Talkin like the real rappers don't make you cool... read other verses around here to learn how to rap.

Crucial - Aight verse. The opener is played as fuck but aight. The 2nd bar you might want to read again... i read it a few times and I couldn't figure it out. You can't feel the shit up his ass? Why is your hand up his ass anyway? Don't ever diss yourself, lol. The last 3 bars were solid so good work there, just check your spelling before you post...no reason to spell words like guiness or bought wrong, but good job anyway, your verse was much better than his.

Vote - Crucial

pope
Your verse was difficult to read because of the structure. Try to you some type of rhyme scheme as to make your verse flow. You had no punches or personals, both of which are essential, in my opinion, in a battle. Whack drop on your behalf.

-Crucial-
You had a decent structure and your verse flowed for the most part. Punches were kind of hit and miss, try to be consistant. Personals were okay, could of been more creative though. Average drop from you.

Vote
-Crucial-

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P-o-p-e

your structure was horrible...making it hard for me to read it...but i managed...to read it...this is a battle...so save the gangsta talk...it has no impression on the viewers..you got to come witty with it...ur verse was horrible dawg...no hate just being honest


-crucial-

your verse wasnt all that good either....your structure was way better though...u didnt have any real strong punchlines...but you had punchlines...so thats why you gettin my vote....

both of yall need to elevate
-peace-

v/-crucial-

UP.........................jstyles you didnt poll th vote........blah

ayo pope you used ass and muthafucka too much forone, you had no structure shit was hard as hell to read crucial took you but yall keep droppin

Pope
-muthafucka this muthafucka that how about i bring a whole clip to ur back this aint no movie i'll jappslap yo ass criscros ya ass leave ur ass at the half court line like u aint no wat happin tan colored porshe yeah it kinda look like apple saushe
-dont really get this, no structure, no real punches

back to me firein on yo ass have ur shirt lookin like wet tomatoes block lookin like atfer tornados/ crucial this aint a game maintain ur frame ima keep my kool wen i bring dem shots to ur brain after this freestyle the game dun changed just like yo momma how she was givin me that change have yo ass eattin out a dumpster ur a nasty muthafuka wannabe gangsta u need to stop fruntin if u wanna roll wit us gangstas u betta b stuntin/sortin grams packin pakastanians wit glocks in both hands/send the task after yo ass im kinda like osama i blow things up just for the drama
structure is still messed up i cant even divide it properly and strucurally grade it. u have punches in this bit but theyre not worded properly and not that hard. the only thing i can really say is that u have a continuous flow

Crucial
Ill leave the Pope’s body more holy then the bible,
heavy start line. strait in wit tha punches
Beat me you got a better chance joinin the American idol,
not bad
We both new to this but we all know that you still cant spit,
Even if I stuck my hand up yo’ ass I wouldn’t feel yo shit,
this is aiight
The pope will get rocked like new shoes with different color laces,
My punches are the only reason you went to the dentist to get braces,
both lines were sic
You could be Mr. Wilson and I could be Denis the menace,
All your rhymes are brocken like records, change ya name to guenis,
I took the lead in this battle and even the pope is takin my orders,
I told him rap needed a change and this fag braught quarters,
nang ending, the quarters bit cracked me up

ya structure was good, flow was tite and u had sum good punches

vote- Crucial


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crucial was better, pope had no structure, i tried to divide it up but even divided it still has no structure, his flow was off, and he had barely a punch...
V/Crucial