Assazin Vs. Def by Mouf

10-12 lines
house rules
check in time righ after you enter the thread
drop 2 hours after check in or A.S.A.P.
you spit first

g/luck man

checkin in dawg your sleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepppppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn! !!

*Fan's cheering and screaming*
:laugh: :laugh2: :roll: :headbang: :sex:
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...ok

I'm hearin all this comotion about this kat Def by Mouf
soon as Assazin step in to spit that's when the hype die's down

after I spit,I'm leavin you wit gray hairs,stressed,depressed in a drought
in battles you use*parent's*if that's your best..OMG dawg..then it's out

who writes ya shit~Mr.Spit~cuz if it is~plz~both of you stop it
Spit stay a sailor~Def's why krew's def~so lock ya krew in the closet

Mouf get's physical~from dismissal~but you think my issues are hypacritical
Def's~dismantled~and man handled~yo krew's in condition~but it's kRiTiKaL

you sent me all these PM's woufin mispelling bullshit man~I'd be embarrassed
time to treat you, "Hi I'm Hannibal let's dissect ya brain............................
.......................and ya bodily functions can just perish

done deal peace be still.

ill coice my opinion and cast my votes after your done
vote on my battle with maj1c plz

Alright checkkkkkkkkkkinnnnnnnnnnn innnnnnnnnnnnn and my fault i took a nap.........long day............

Let's talk about Assazins critiquing skillz,
They almost suck as bad as him.....oh yeah 'peace be still',
But...let's be real....what do u really do ASS,
Besides give a little and...pump..pump..pass,
And u talk about spellin....and u can't spell 'commotion',
If spelling should be counted.....then u shouldn't be postin,
i mean it defeats the purpose....just get the point across,
Like when i cut open ur face by slittin from each side of the jaw,
U've never fufilled the contract by clients who employ u...
That's y there's no 'done deal' and most try to ignore u,
Now imagine that an assazin who doesn't kill in cold blood,
Which would just make u copycat wannabe wit the same.....'1 luv'....

flow: tie..both were pretty nice..structure was good
punches: assazin..his were harder hitting imo
personals: tie..both a couple decent ones
multies: assazin
wordplay: tie..there was some..but there was also alot of quotations where they didn't need to be..

vote: assazin..this was pretty close..but assazin edged it with better punches and multies..everything else was pretty much even..both of you could work on using more creative punches.

both of your flows and structures were good but i thought assazin had harder hittin punches when it comes down to personals i think its a tie here, all-tho i thought assazin had better and both of your wordplays were good i make that a tie as well

overall:assazin gets my vote but it was very very close to call he gets it over punches for me.

both of your flows and structures were good but i thought assazin had harder hittin punches when it comes down to personals i think its a tie here, all-tho i thought assazin had better and both of your wordplays were good i make that a tie as well

overall:assazin gets my vote but it was very very close to call he gets it over punches for me.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=149906

uppin #1

both had really good
lines on both sides
but tha openrs and closers and tha
core of tha battles decided this one
i think Assazin came harder on this one
and def by mouth slept on this
one, like if he almost slacked on this one 'you
never slack on a battle no matter what
and his punches were a lil weaker and didnt land
Assazin had good wordplay and didnt slack up in it
(that much) but good battle to both

My V/ Assazin
good battle but ya boy
Assazin took this one

uppin #2

Assazin

I'm hearin all this comotion about this kat Def by Mouf
soon as Assazin step in to spit that's when the hype die's down
I GUESS ITS OK, A BIT OF STORY TELLIN BUT YEAH IT WAS COOL
after I spit,I'm leavin you wit gray hairs,stressed,depressed in a drought
in battles you use*parent's*if that's your best..OMG dawg..then it's out
FILLER BUT YEAH SOUNDED NICE
who writes ya shit~Mr.Spit~cuz if it is~plz~both of you stop it
Spit stay a sailor~Def's why krew's def~so lock ya krew in the closet
FIRE WORDPLAY HERE, FIYYYAAA!!!, NO NEED FOR THE ~~ THOU
Mouf get's physical~from dismissal~but you think my issues are hypacritical
Def's~dismantled~and man handled~yo krew's in condition~but it's kRiTiKaL
YEAH GOOD OVERALL BAR
you sent me all these PM's woufin mispelling bullshit man~I'd be embarrassed
time to treat you, "Hi I'm Hannibal let's dissect ya brain............................
.......................and ya bodily functions can just perish
STRETCHED TO THE MAXIMUM
done deal peace be still.


Let's talk about Assazins critiquing skillz,
They almost suck as bad as him.....oh yeah 'peace be still',
WEAK OPENER
But...let's be real....what do u really do ASS,
Besides give a little and...pump..pump..pass,
FILLER 2ND LINE, NICE WORDPLAY THOU
And u talk about spellin....and u can't spell 'commotion',
If spelling should be counted.....then u shouldn't be postin,
NOT FEELIN THIS ONE
i mean it defeats the purpose....just get the point across,
Like when i cut open ur face by slittin from each side of the jaw,
OK BAR
U've never fufilled the contract by clients who employ u...
That's y there's no 'done deal' and most try to ignore u,
FEEDIN FA SHO
Now imagine that an assazin who doesn't kill in cold blood,
Which would just make u copycat wannabe wit the same.....'1 luv'....
WEAK FINISH

VERDICT:
BOTH WERE SOLID VERSES BUT ASSAZIN WAS A LIL SLOPPY, I READ THE TOP AND ASSAZIN SAID HOUSE-RULES...DAT INCLUDES NO FEEDIN, DEF FED OFF HIS VERSE...BY THAT REASON I VOTE ASSAZINITS A SHAME COS DEF CUDDA TAKEN THIS


VOTE=ASSAZIN

uppin #3 let's keep it rollin

Assazin-
I'm hearin all this comotion about this kat Def by Mouf
soon as Assazin step in to spit that's when the hype die's down
-weak, self glorification

after I spit,I'm leavin you wit gray hairs,stressed,depressed in a drought
in battles you use*parent's*if that's your best..OMG dawg..then it's out
-nope

who writes ya shit~Mr.Spit~cuz if it is~plz~both of you stop it
Spit stay a sailor~Def's why krew's def~so lock ya krew in the closet
-nah man

Mouf get's physical~from dismissal~but you think my issues are hypacritical
Def's~dismantled~and man handled~yo krew's in condition~but it's kRiTiKaL
-decent

you sent me all these PM's woufin mispelling bullshit man~I'd be embarrassed
time to treat you, "Hi I'm Hannibal let's dissect ya brain............................
.......................and ya bodily functions can just perish
-weak finisher

Def by Mouf

Let's talk about Assazins critiquing skillz,
They almost suck as bad as him.....oh yeah 'peace be still',
-decent personal

But...let's be real....what do u really do ASS,
Besides give a little and...pump..pump..pass,
-meh

And u talk about spellin....and u can't spell 'commotion',
If spelling should be counted.....then u shouldn't be postin,
-lol i found this funny

i mean it defeats the purpose....just get the point across,
Like when i cut open ur face by slittin from each side of the jaw,
-nah

U've never fufilled the contract by clients who employ u...
That's y there's no 'done deal' and most try to ignore u,
-alright

Now imagine that an assazin who doesn't kill in cold blood,
Which would just make u copycat wannabe wit the same.....'1 luv'....
-decent finisher

I voted for Def by Mouf because i thought he had stronger punches, Assazin you had a decent and pretty good vocab but the punches just werent there, Def your flow was pretty good and your vocab was mediocre.

Vote: Def by Mouf
Plz return the favor by voting on a battle in my sig

damn.. i dont know it was a good little text battle but umm...
i think def didnt come off as hard so my vote assazin

uppin #4 come on peeps

uppin #5

vote assazin
he just had harder hittin punches,, both were pretty simple but sazin just came harder wit metas personal n punches etc... the other cat was simple but wasnt too bad.. structure from both was aight but yeh like i said assazin got it...

ok im gona have to go with ass on this one his punches were just more harder where def no doubt had sum aiight personals in there it wasnt to bad but ass just won cause of the harder hitting punches

i think assazin took this one from tha get go
easy win for him. his punches just seemed to make more sence and hit a lil harder
that new krew M3 is pretty hottt
but i dont know
N E wayz my vote goes to assazin