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U Spit First
10-15 Lines
All Rules Apply
Due By 2morrow
U Spit First
aiight homie.....check it...
Kaas,
Dogg u a vet, thats what makes it so traject...
askin me to me to spit first, u on some bitch shit...
its ok tho, I ll be da first ta leave ya hangin wit yo wrists slit...
bitch u should just forfit....
cause u couldnt raize to the occasian, like a sore dick...
battlin So Sic ya get, left like an Orphan...
u aint stand a chance, like babies versus Abortion...
and im just displayin a portion, of wat i gots ta offer..
standin takin ur punches, cause they harmless like armless boxers...
while mine stay harder than massaged cocks...
toxic rhymes, So Sic gots, microphones, So Sic rocs...
so kick rocks, go back to da lab, take a stab...
u come to discover, wat makes me able....
So Sic da newest rawest most powerful, substance on da periodic table...
peace
imma fuckin cut the top of ya head off and leave you open minded....
what the matter peon cant you see up to my high level you must be short sighted....
i should be the one named so sic cos when i spit im so fuckin ill....
even your mommas sick of hearin your rhymes you betta stop her takin that suicide pill....
ive seen your battles before your lines are more played than fake death threads in EI....
i see ya rhymin bout cocks lickin ya boys end i guess that why ya both see eye to eye....
shit i strecthed that, but look at your lines there short like ya limit yourself....
ya used to only showin a small portion to ya girl thats why she pisses herself....
ya rhymes are wack, throwin punches at me is like hittin ants with a sledgehammer....
its hard to read ya cos ya page is blank talkin bout dis and sat you have no grammar....
open your nose and take a whiff of the air, i know you can smell me cos im the shit....
hatin your rhyme style its so fuckin shit and i hope you know you wont have one hit....
if your on the periodic table your on the bottom and you know youll never see the top....
you know im on the fuckin shittin on you below me feel my fuckin heat cos im forever hot....
Wow...
Im surprised, Kaas i was expectin suttin like vets spit, but what was that? Serious, ur shit is stretched and punches was madd weak. Surprised wit u, serious i was expectin suttin like BTK or Elwood would drop. And wassup wit da feedin? Gotta work on ur structure flow and punches, i didnt really c anything that directly hit Sic.
Urs wasnt too badd, first off wasnt stretched. Saw bout 3 punches there that was average, some was personals too. U gotta work on ur punches, but ur wordin helps u.
For the 3 punches and better structure etc.
Vote - Sic.
Good Luck Fellas.
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On Vacation, Bitches.
i would vote but yall never vote so forget yall bitches
freepost
kaas takes it i guess cuz of his avy...
nah chill but yeh kaas takes this shit i guess the other cat was on some ill kill u with my gun u beter run shit...kaas came kinda ass but i guess he did wat was necessary to take this battle...
word kaas for punches personals and just a better overrall verse..
v/kaas
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Punches - Kaas
Personnals - Kaas
Flow - Sic
Enjoyment - Kaas
Multies - Sic
Wordplay - Kaas
Metaphors - Sic
Opener - Kaas
Closer - Kaas
Humour - Sic
Vocab - Kaas
Structure - Sic
Creativity - Kaas
Originality - Kaas
Complexity - Kaas
Content - Kaas
Sense - Kaas
...pretty 1 sided but not a bad verse Sic..
VOTE - KAAS
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
way ta explain the votezOriginally Posted by Clynch
Kaas, not as good as I expected but enough to win. Weak punches and personals and the bars were a bit streched. So_Sic, didn't really think it was very good, poor verse, not much stood out. I felt kaas had better punches and personals but sic had slightly better structure.
V/Kaas
Return the favour please.
...The Ghostface Killllllaaaaaahhhhhhhh
Man both ya shits were coo but it wasnt consistant
but on the real kaas shows more effort
and so sic just toys wit it like i know im hard
so it gives a push wit the cockiness
but kaas said that shit i wanted to read
Vote kaas
hey yall, good lookin on da votes appreciate all da feedback.....once i hit a hiundred i ll start votin on yall battles for real.......uppin.......... peace
look yall it aint hard just click whos name won........vote up yall......peace
Wow...
Im surprised, Kaas i was expectin suttin like vets spit, but what was that? Serious, ur shit is stretched and punches was madd weak. Surprised wit u, serious i was expectin suttin like BTK or Elwood would drop. And wassup wit da feedin? Gotta work on ur structure flow and punches, i didnt really c anything that directly hit Sic.
Urs wasnt too badd, first off wasnt stretched. Saw bout 3 punches there that was average, some was personals too. U gotta work on ur punches, but ur wordin helps u.
For the 3 punches and better structure etc.
Vote - Sic.
Good Luck Fellas.
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this is my third battle like ever so....and thanks for the vote,uppin x1
^^guess that's "inadequate" so...ima do it like every1 else does....prolly shoulda done that in the first place but hey...thats how the voting worked on the site i usta battle on (no talent so i came here) so i jus tried it since i never voted b4..so here is my corrected vote:
So_Sic:
Kaas,
Dogg u a vet, thats what makes it so traject...
..WHACK OPENER!
askin me to me to spit first, u on some bitch shit...
its ok tho, I ll be da first ta leave ya hangin wit yo wrists slit...
..OK..I guess
bitch u should just forfit....
cause u couldnt raize to the occasian, like a sore dick...
..Let's think...DOESNT RHYME!!
battlin So Sic ya get, left like an Orphan...
u aint stand a chance, like babies versus Abortion...
...Not too bad at all...pretty good
and im just displayin a portion, of wat i gots ta offer..
standin takin ur punches, cause they harmless like armless boxers...
could
while mine stay harder than massaged cocks...
toxic rhymes, So Sic gots, microphones, So Sic rocs...
..PLAYED!!
so kick rocks, go back to da lab, take a stab...
..MAYBE IF YOU MADE YOUR OPENER A FULL BAR YOU WOULDNT HAVE THIS WHACK ASS LINE FLOATING AROUND!!
u come to discover, wat makes me able....
So Sic da newest rawest most powerful, substance on da periodic table...
..see where your goin..not bad..not good either tho
overal verse: creative, good effort..not feelin tho...its ok keep battlin you'll elevate
Kaas:
imma fuckin cut the top of ya head off and leave you open minded....
what the matter peon cant you see up to my high level you must be short sighted....
..good opener
i should be the one named so sic cos when i spit im so fuckin ill....
even your mommas sick of hearin your rhymes you betta stop her takin that suicide pill....
..pretty good
ive seen your battles before your lines are more played than fake death threads in EI....
i see ya rhymin bout cocks lickin ya boys end i guess that why ya both see eye to eye....
..AGREED!! and good punch!
shit i strecthed that, but look at your lines there short like ya limit yourself....
ya used to only showin a small portion to ya girl thats why she pisses herself....
..lol!! funny shit!!
ya rhymes are wack, throwin punches at me is like hittin ants with a sledgehammer....
its hard to read ya cos ya page is blank talkin bout dis and sat you have no grammar....
..yep! feelin it..
open your nose and take a whiff of the air, i know you can smell me cos im the shit....
hatin your rhyme style its so fuckin shit and i hope you know you wont have one hit....
..slightly played...but not too bad
if your on the periodic table your on the bottom and you know youll never see the top....
you know im on the fuckin shittin on you below me feel my fuckin heat cos im forever hot....
..also slightly played..but its not like you needed a GREAT closer to win it
overall verse: SOMEBODY CALL THE COPS!! IT'S A LYRICAL MURDER!! (jp i hate fuckin pigs) BUT 1 SIDED SHIT FO SHO!!
Vote: KAAS
better?
thanx for votin again clynch, drop a link or some shit to a battle, and ill make a honest vote,UPPIN X2
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