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due - asap
house rules...
lets do it
twix in...........................................
chek this out.. chek-i-t-y fukaz
Cuttin down this mutha fuka, break him like sticks
cause the truth is told, that best snacks are twix
fuking herb, u couldnt shine if u had the sun on ur sides
and the only way u gettin votes, is if ur ass dickrides
fukas a pussy, thought hes good at text, but gets stomped on
just look at this pic, looks like he just returned from compton
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157063
yeh u out done, twitchin now, and like ur avatar u hide in the dark
hes got his beaming eyes, cause bitch has envy runnin through his heart
fuk that, i only called u out cause bitch u had no1, so another win is logical
also do yourself a favor and stop battling bitch, go back to topicals
ill drop a verse later tonight i gotta.. go to photo...
aight hommie just drop soon cause i wanna get votes in here.. i hate waitin for battles.
yo its mornin now, past 12.00 wen u gonna spit,,
Killer instinct... your shit you drop is truely a classic thriller. really
everyone sceaming stop your whack give up now stop spitting freely
Resort to violence… make this bitch scream out for some support
killer insinct could be sky diving and this idiot would still fall short
Your weak lines outweigh the ones that could be alright.
Like a plane every time you get some height you gotta end the flight
i shed light in battles while you hide in the dark you come with weak concepts
while i come hard everytime... dropping chaos like bomb threats
You could freestyle on a motorcycle but you rhymes still won’t roll
cuz a kinder gardener's colorin sheet is more compex than your whack ass flow
Cuttin down this mutha fuka, break him like sticks
cause the truth is told, that best snacks are twix
-decent nameplay
fuking herb, u couldnt shine if u had the sun on ur sides
and the only way u gettin votes, is if ur ass dickrides
-filler
fukas a pussy, thought hes good at text, but gets stomped on
just look at this pic, looks like he just returned from compton
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157063
-stomped on and compton dont rhyme, and the guys from Yukon...how does it look like compton?
yeh u out done, twitchin now, and like ur avatar u hide in the dark
hes got his beaming eyes, cause bitch has envy runnin through his heart
-decent... but wheres the punch
fuk that, i only called u out cause bitch u had no1, so another win is logical
also do yourself a favor and stop battling bitch, go back to topicals
decent personal
Killer instinct... your shit you drop is truely a classic thriller. really
everyone sceaming stop your whack give up now stop spitting freely
-pretty good concept, but no punch
Resort to violence… make this bitch scream out for some support
killer insinct could be sky diving and this idiot would still fall short
-iiiight
Your weak lines outweigh the ones that could be alright.
Like a plane every time you get some height you gotta end the flight
-decent
i shed light in battles while you hide in the dark you come with weak concepts
while i come hard everytime... dropping chaos like bomb threats
-Self glorification
You could freestyle on a motorcycle but you rhymes still won’t roll
cuz a kinder gardener's colorin sheet is more compex than your whack ass flow
-iiight closer
IIIght killa instinct had 3 decent bars, and the rest meh. Twix had 2 iight and 1 decent the rest meh, iiight>decent, therefore Twix takes thisfor and overall better verse, wit harder hittin punches, this was a really close battle though, it could go eitherway dependin on the voters preferences, u guys are pretty evenly matched, but i think TWIX took this one
RETURN THE FAVA IN THE BATTLE IN MY SIG
Killa_Instinct
Cuttin down this mutha fuka, break him like sticks
cause the truth is told, that best snacks are twix
-played, and not very witty
fuking herb, u couldnt shine if u had the sun on ur sides
and the only way u gettin votes, is if ur ass dickrides
-weak
fukas a pussy, thought hes good at text, but gets stomped on
just look at this pic, looks like he just returned from compton
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157063
-weak
yeh u out done, twitchin now, and like ur avatar u hide in the dark
hes got his beaming eyes, cause bitch has envy runnin through his heart
-no
fuk that, i only called u out cause bitch u had no1, so another win is logical
also do yourself a favor and stop battling bitch, go back to topicals
-decent personal
Twixn-
Killer instinct... your shit you drop is truely a classic thriller. really
everyone sceaming stop your whack give up now stop spitting freely
-meh
Resort to violence… make this bitch scream out for some support
killer insinct could be sky diving and this idiot would still fall short
-haha nice
Your weak lines outweigh the ones that could be alright.
Like a plane every time you get some height you gotta end the flight
-not bad
i shed light in battles while you hide in the dark you come with weak concepts
while i come hard everytime... dropping chaos like bomb threats
-alright
You could freestyle on a motorcycle but you rhymes still won’t roll
cuz a kinder gardener's colorin sheet is more compex than your whack ass flow
-alrite, its a pretty good finisher
Killa_instinct- not a bad flow, your vocab was ok, your punches were pretty weak except the last one was decent, you should try to use more wordplay and see if you cant get wittier with your punches
Twixn- nice flow, most of your punches were alrite and one of them was good, vocab was decent, my favorite line had to be:
"Resort to violence… make this bitch scream out for some support
killer insinct could be sky diving and this idiot would still fall short"
Vote: Twixn for having wittier punches
Plz return the favor here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157329
uh for chewy i said his pic look like he just returned from compton.. but yeh uppin this.
uppin... ill vote on yah battles tommorow or in like 30 mins guy... leave links
I'll vote later tonight when I hit 100 posts. (83 right now).... but, if you can hit up my links I'd appreciate it.. I promise to vote later too.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Killa_Instinct
im killa instinct now bitch i'm playing you like tha game
games over killa i'm taking your name, you lame, you put your own name to shame/ only 10 minutes and I logged on, i'm gonna make you bleed so go put your tampon on and sing along/ after i quote, i don't know if i'm gonna get any votes/ it's okay this is my first time writing 5 lines next time i'm blowing up like land mines.........
oh boy,,, more wack fuk newbz..
im outta breathe sum1 tell him to fukoff...
This was a fairly close battle. The deciding factor was structure, and Twixn's verse was more focused and flowed nice also. I wasn't too impressed with either of your performances though. Instinct, you gotta elevate man. Vote-Twixn
Return the favor, link in sig.
gotta love the newbie verse every time, lol, i would vote for the newb, but since he's not on the poll... hhahahaQuote:
Originally Posted by emulous
ok here's the deal, this was a very close battle. in fact, it might be the best ive seen here on frontlines yet. time for a breakdown...
KILLA-
Cuttin down this mutha fuka, break him like sticks
cause the truth is told, that best snacks are twix
** ok, decent personal
fuking herb, u couldnt shine if u had the sun on ur sides
and the only way u gettin votes, is if ur ass dickrides
*** i like it
fukas a pussy, thought hes good at text, but gets stomped on
just look at this pic, looks like he just returned from compton
**** my favorite punch is a link punch, especially this kind, hahahaha
yeh u out done, twitchin now, and like ur avatar u hide in the dark
hes got his beaming eyes, cause bitch has envy runnin through his heart
** ok #2, filleresque
fuk that, i only called u out cause bitch u had no1, so another win is logical
also do yourself a favor and stop battling bitch, go back to topicals
**** i get this, and its good
TWIXN-
Killer instinct... your shit you drop is truely a classic thriller. really
everyone sceaming stop your whack give up now stop spitting freely
** ok, smart, but weird flow
Resort to violence… make this bitch scream out for some support
killer insinct could be sky diving and this idiot would still fall short
**** niiiiiice, ur best bar by far
Your weak lines outweigh the ones that could be alright.
Like a plane every time you get some height you gotta end the flight
** aight, enough with the plane jokes...
i shed light in battles while you hide in the dark you come with weak concepts
while i come hard everytime... dropping chaos like bomb threats
*** ummm, didnt killa just talk about hiding in the dark? still, its pretty good
You could freestyle on a motorcycle but you rhymes still won’t roll
cuz a kinder gardener's colorin sheet is more compex than your whack ass flow
** actually, that line had bad flow
TOTALS-
killa- 15stars/5bars = 3.000 (B)
twixn- 13stars/5bars = 2.600 (B-)
vote- killa
yea thats right, im going against the grain lol
killa
Cuttin down this mutha fuka, break him like sticks
cause the truth is told, that best snacks are twix
good opener... Good punch, strong rhymes
fuking herb, u couldnt shine if u had the sun on ur sides
and the only way u gettin votes, is if ur ass dickrides
that was good... a strong rhyme AND a good punch
fukas a pussy, thought hes good at text, but gets stomped on
just look at this pic, looks like he just returned from compton
That was kind of wack...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157063
yeh u out done, twitchin now, and like ur avatar u hide in the dark
hes got his beaming eyes, cause bitch has envy runnin through his heart
good punch, strong Rhyme
fuk that, i only called u out cause bitch u had no1, so another win is logical
also do yourself a favor and stop battling bitch, go back to topicals
good end... every line had a punch and a strong rhyme... good lines
twixn
Killer instinct... your shit you drop is truely a classic thriller. really
everyone sceaming stop your whack give up now stop spitting freely
that to me was dumb... compairing him to an old horror movie
Resort to violence… make this bitch scream out for some support
killer insinct could be sky diving and ths is idiot would still fall short
to me, that would make sense cuz hes falling... so say such as a burn isnt to clear.. to ME at least
Your weak lines outweigh the ones that could be alright.
Like a plane every time you get some height you gotta end the flight
good rhyme, good punch
i shed light in battles while you hide in the dark you come with weak concepts
while i come hard everytime... dropping chaos like bomb threats
You could freestyle on a motorcycle but you rhymes still won’t roll
cuz a kinder gardener's colorin sheet is more compex than your whack ass flow
not bad, there was some stuff I liked and didnt like
killa had no wack with a STRONG rhymes and good punches...
Twixn had a lot of good punches but a wack line...
And concidering the lines that I saw
KILLER INSTICT:
His rhyme were just as strong, some of his punches were stronger, and he didnt have one wack line
V/ KILLA
killa
Cuttin down this mutha fuka, break him like sticks
cause the truth is told, that best snacks are twix
coulda been worded better, but stil good wordplay
fuking herb, u couldnt shine if u had the sun on ur sides
and the only way u gettin votes, is if ur ass dickrides
played
fukas a pussy, thought hes good at text, but gets stomped on
just look at this pic, looks like he just returned from compton
decent, links r kinda played, but his pic....omfg, enuff ced
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157063
yeh u out done, twitchin now, and like ur avatar u hide in the dark
hes got his beaming eyes, cause bitch has envy runnin through his heart
decent
fuk that, i only called u out cause bitch u had no1, so another win is logical
also do yourself a favor and stop battling bitch, go back to topicals
played, every1 includin me uses that 1 against him
twixn
Killer instinct... your shit you drop is truely a classic thriller. really
everyone sceaming stop your whack give up now stop spitting freely
not even really a punch
Resort to violence… make this bitch scream out for some support
killer insinct could be sky diving and ths is idiot would still fall short
good attempt, but dont think u pulled it off
Your weak lines outweigh the ones that could be alright.
Like a plane every time you get some height you gotta end the flight
ok ok
i shed light in battles while you hide in the dark you come with weak concepts
while i come hard everytime... dropping chaos like bomb threats
self-glorification, no
You could freestyle on a motorcycle but you rhymes still won’t roll
cuz a kinder gardener's colorin sheet is more compex than your whack ass
hell no
umm...twixn, ya didnt really have ne actual punches, come harder n more wittier next time
Killa instinct-pretty nice drop, good punches altho some played, n nice flow, enuff 2 get tha job done......1
V/ KILLA
Quote:
Originally Posted by Chewbakka
umm....Chewy, stomped n Compton werent supposed 2 rhyme, but Stomped ON n Compton do
o return tha favor plz, links n sig
thanks for the votes.... leave links..............
aight,both of you came real well ,well done ..
you both had good flow wasnt chopper of anything well done ...-Draw you both did well
both had good personals and punches ...-Twinx came harder with his personals...
Both of your structures where good...-draw again..
But i think twinx take this due to he had a bit better personals that hit harder but it was a v.gd battle well done to both of you
PLease hit up this battle..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157461
uppin3............................................ leave links
upinng.................................. leave links....
uppin5................. leave links...............
Plz return the favor here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157329
ok so here goes plz return tha favour
Cuttin down this mutha fuka, break him like sticks
cause the truth is told, that best snacks are twix
fuking herb, u couldnt shine if u had the sun on ur sides
and the only way u gettin votes, is if ur ass dickrides
fukas a pussy, thought hes good at text, but gets stomped on
just look at this pic, looks like he just returned from compton
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157063
yeh u out done, twitchin now, and like ur avatar u hide in the dark
hes got his beaming eyes, cause bitch has envy runnin through his heart
fuk that, i only called u out cause bitch u had no1, so another win is logical
also do yourself a favor and stop battling bitch, go back to topicals
yer that was nice sum good punches in there tho tha flow was off a bit structure was ok
twixin
Killer instinct... your shit you drop is truely a classic thriller. really
everyone sceaming stop your whack give up now stop spitting freely
Resort to violence… make this bitch scream out for some support
killer insinct could be sky diving and this idiot would still fall short
Your weak lines outweigh the ones that could be alright.
Like a plane every time you get some height you gotta end the flight
i shed light in battles while you hide in the dark you come with weak concepts
while i come hard everytime... dropping chaos like bomb threats
You could freestyle on a motorcycle but you rhymes still won’t roll
cuz a kinder gardener's colorin sheet is more compex than your whack ass flow
yer i was feelin that sum strong punches n funny stuff in there good flow n structure
no hate but twixin won for beeing betta overall