O.V.Dose vs xVerbal KInTx

[Mr. Write]

10 lines
House rules
I set up so you spit first
verses due 45 min after check-in

[Mr. Write]

uppin, waitin on this kid to spit...................

[xVerbal KInTx]

First off you made the callout. That means you go first. Everyone knows that. Spit and I'll drop soon after.

[xVerbal KInTx]

You gonna spit or what. You made the callout so Im just waiting for youl.

[Assazin]

I'll voice my opinion after both kats spit one..........

[frosty_101]

anybody bustin it out yet iam waiting to hear this shit

[Mr. Write]

fine have it your way, no feedin.......

You're sure to get Verbal after my words have been hurdled/
You writing hurful punches is unheard of like drawin a perfect circle//
I heard only steers and queers are from Texas dont know your sexual preference/
But im guessin since you spit so much 'Bull' that youre the first reference//
He's left with his shattered hopes and dreams of makin it big/
Only time he ever 'drops bombs' is when hes takin a shit//
Im on FIRE while this kid doesnt have a chance to ignite/
He wraps 100 rubberbands around his raps hopin to make them 'tight'//
You 'laid all your cards on the table' after you see my verse you'll be foldin/
You aint got the balls for this rap shit so i suggest you go 'Texas Hold'em*//

*Texas Hold'em is a card game

[Mr. Write]

Uppin for verse...................................

[Mr. Write]

Uppin for verse............................again...

[xVerbal KInTx]

Let’s-Play-Hold-Em Better-Fold Cause I Trouble~Most//
We-Can-Battle Twice and I’ll Give-You a Double~Dose//

I-Don’t Mess~With~Whack …wins is what I do Im the Best~At~That//
I’ll Stress~The~Fact Spit-At-Your-Chest so Your Breat~Will~Crack//

Raps-Evil Scream-At-Your-Face while My Spits~Goin~Scare~Boys//
But O.V. can’t Muscle-It-Out like Fat~Chicks~On~Steroids//

Punchlines-To-Rip-Yah and Put Cracks~in~Your~Ribs//
People only look at your posts to see that Ass~in~Your~Sig//

Never Pleasing~the~Youth my Hot-Multis are just Teasing~The~Newbs//
Im-Just-Better and by now your Seeing-The-Truth..He like “uppin,uppin” why you Eager~to~lose//

Aiight there's my spit. Sorry man first day back from school. Had B-Ball practice so I was barely able to hit this up.

[steveontrial]

ok verbal, here's the deal:

im not gonna vote for ovdose because you cheated by feeding off of his verse, as was prohibited before spittin began.

im not voting for ovdose because he came out stronger than you and had a more consistent verse than yours

im not voting for ovdose because you cant tell the difference between a sig and an avatar

im not gonna vote for ovdose because his verse had strong punches and wordplay, especially the steers line.

im not voting for ovdose because he had better rhymes than you did

im not voting for ovdose for any of those good reasons.

im voting for ovdose because you are a faggot.

have a nice day.

v/ ovdose

[Mr. Key]

You're sure to get Verbal after my words have been hurdled/
You writing hurful punches is unheard of like drawin a perfect circle//
-decent
I heard only steers and queers are from Texas dont know your sexual preference/
But im guessin since you spit so much 'Bull' that youre the first reference//
-lol,iiight
He's left with his shattered hopes and dreams of makin it big/
Only time he ever 'drops bombs' is when hes takin a shit//
-ok
Im on FIRE while this kid doesnt have a chance to ignite/
He wraps 100 rubberbands around his raps hopin to make them 'tight'//
-naw, now feelin this
You 'laid all your cards on the table' after you see my verse you'll be foldin/
You aint got the balls for this rap shit so i suggest you go 'Texas Hold'em*//
iiight personal


Let’s-Play-Hold-Em Better-Fold Cause I Trouble~Most//
We-Can-Battle Twice and I’ll Give-You a Double~Dose//
-filler

I-Don’t Mess~With~Whack …wins is what I do Im the Best~At~That//
I’ll Stress~The~Fact Spit-At-Your-Chest so Your Breat~Will~Crack//
no
Raps-Evil Scream-At-Your-Face while My Spits~Goin~Scare~Boys//
But O.V. can’t Muscle-It-Out like Fat~Chicks~On~Steroids//
decent
Punchlines-To-Rip-Yah and Put Cracks~in~Your~Ribs//
People only look at your posts to see that Ass~in~Your~Sig//
ha, decent
Never Pleasing~the~Youth my Hot-Multis are just Teasing~The~Newbs//
Im-Just-Better and by now your Seeing-The-Truth..He like “uppin,uppin” why you Eager~to~lose//
no, and newbs and lose dont rhyme

Heres the break down, OV had 2 iiight, 1ok , 1 decent,and one weak, while Verbal jus had 2 decents, overall OV had harder hittin punches and better flow and structure, Verbal u did decent for a noobie, but ur structure wasnt good and ur punches were few and far between, multies were good.... but multies dont win battles, punches, wordplay and personals do. so..
Vote: OV dose

RETURN THE FAVA WITH AN HONEST VOTE IN THE BATTLE IN MY SIG

[xVerbal KInTx]

Chewy's vote was straight but god dawn Steve did I steal something from you. Why the hatred homie....lol

[Killa_Instinct]

vote ov
y.................................................
just harda hittin concepts, punches, metas, personals fell short but the structure was basic which was aight.. the other guys was newbish also and he fell short on hard punches.. both need more practice but ov just came away wit dis for more creativivty...
return the favor and vote here man...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157514

[Mr. Write]

uppin 1................................................. ....