aight u noe the rules but just incase
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no crew or h8 votes
no feeding
no bitchin
ill spit first make sure u not a no-show!!!
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aight u noe the rules but just incase
10lines
no crew or h8 votes
no feeding
no bitchin
ill spit first make sure u not a no-show!!!
aight its like i-to the izzo, e-to the essay
u failed bitch, lyrics aint flash, u got no time to play
ur flow aint foshizzle which makes u a shittizhole
tukin ur self to bed wont save you, cause my flow like a non-miss-ile
another newb to take to the doctors, better call the surgeon
cause i merked u here, u wannabe lyrical virgin
i finish u now cause i really cant be lucked
retire ur show, or here, ur ass will be fucked
this battle is finished, as the words are 'crystal clear'
get ur brain some rap trainin, give it about 1 year
aight ur turn...... dont take long
the only dope shit is your tupac pics. pleaz change up your rythm im not feelin it. quit trying to sound like snoop or jayz...late
who the fuk r u to be tellin me to change my shit. i dont usually use my rhythm like this but i try new things, like my 'tupac' pics... and dont tell me wat to do newb.
nah i back him stop trying to sound like snoop dogg....u sound ridiculous trust me
Ur flow is weak, and yo lyrics is wack,
can someone plz tell me is this guy really black,
u got nothin on me, ask ur ho,
i beat her shit harder, then she asked me fo mo,
i'll leave u six feet under like the hbo show,
u go against essay, i spit ice and leave you froze,
killa instict, eh........ i think thts crap,
the closest thing this dude came 2 killin is his own rap,
so i'mma spare you now and leave you be,
but next time think twice, u stupid ass pussy!
yo jus cause i use izzo and foshizzle dont mean my rhythm is like snoop or jay-z. ny ways were done her, vote up...
ok essay had no fukin creativity, way 2 fukin basic, neither had ne kinda vocab, but both had a pretty nice flo 2 it, both had weak punches, but wtf iz wit dat foshizzle shyt, one time wouldnt of been bad but u used it in 2 lines, da bars woulda been better if they were worded differently, instinct atleast attempted 2 use some multies, n ummm...essay, da sex lines bout da ho, NO, thas played as shyt, "his lyrics r wak iz he really black"???wtf, dumb as shyt
vote-Killa Instinct
aight its like i-to the izzo, e-to the essay
u failed bitch, lyrics aint flash, u got no time to play
-weak start
ur flow aint foshizzle which makes u a shittizhole
tukin ur self to bed wont save you, cause my flow like a non-miss-ile
-stop wit the izzle shit, and weak punch
another newb to take to the doctors, better call the surgeon
cause i merked u here, u wannabe lyrical virgin
-weak
i finish u now cause i really cant be lucked
retire ur show, or here, ur ass will be fucked
-ok
this battle is finished, as the words are 'crystal clear'
get ur brain some rap trainin, give it about 1 year
-weak finish
Ur flow is weak, and yo lyrics is wack,
can someone plz tell me is this guy really black,
-weak start, what were u gettin at?
u got nothin on me, ask ur ho,
i beat her shit harder, then she asked me fo mo,
-played concept, and not creative, = weak
i'll leave u six feet under like the hbo show,
u go against essay, i spit ice and leave you froze,
best bar, but was still weak
killa instict, eh........ i think thts crap,
the closest thing this dude came 2 killin is his own resap,
-no
so i'mma spare you now and leave you be,
but next time think twice, u stupid ass pussy!
-weak as fuck
Weak battle, vote goes to killa instinct for bein less wack, and at least havin one bar i thought was ok, both need some serious elevation, especially essay
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Too much 'weak'. - Ambiguous
aight this is how its gonna be. whoever votes on this fukn battle i will remember and vote on theirs, therefore we can both vote on eachothers battles instead of me having to uppppppppp all the fukn time. so vote on this or fuk off. uppin numba wateva plz vote!!!!
Killa Instinct-
aight its like i-to the izzo, e-to the essay
u failed bitch, lyrics aint flash, u got no time to play
Meh.. I dont see the punch?
ur flow aint foshizzle which makes u a shittizhole
tukin ur self to bed wont save you, cause my flow like a non-miss-ile
Pretty forced man.. stop with the izzle`s.. please.
another newb to take to the doctors, better call the surgeon
cause i merked u here, u wannabe lyrical virgin
Blah, I hate using the 'lyrical' adjective.. kinda played out now.
i finish u now cause i really cant be lucked
retire ur show, or here, ur ass will be fucked
Nope.. =\
this battle is finished, as the words are 'crystal clear'
get ur brain some rap trainin, give it about 1 year
:(
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Essay-
Ur flow is weak, and yo lyrics is wack,
can someone plz tell me is this guy really black,
Omg no.
u got nothin on me, ask ur ho,
i beat her shit harder, then she asked me fo mo,
Filler.
i'll leave u six feet under like the hbo show,
u go against essay, i spit ice and leave you froze,
Yet, again.
killa instict, eh........ i think thts crap,
the closest thing this dude came 2 killin is his own rap,
Meh.
so i'mma spare you now and leave you be,
but next time think twice, u stupid ass pussy!
No..
Overall, this battle was just blah to be honest. It seemed like both of ya`alls verse was just one big filler. No really creative concepts or disses, and the wit was just lacking. Essay, you got some elementary rhymes man.. ya need to step that shit up.. May seem like I`m hating on you guys, but I`m not intentionally doing so.. I just can`t find anything to highlight in ya`alls verses.. Killa basically wins for coming less wack. =\
v/ Killa Instinct
essay was very basic and had no truly creative concepts.
killa was pretty bad too, tryin to sound like pop rap or some shit, it aint workin in the future, but you got lucky this time because your opponent didnt truly show up
v//killa
haha and u think i did.. nyways vote up....
I'll vote in a little bit when i get more posts peace be still.
yeo sum1 tell me how ta battle i want in- sn ballerific69
Kill Instinct Got My Vote.. Better Punches.. Im Not Gun Put a big explanation in here...its obvious that sa lost, basicaly i just came in here to bitch out sa for stealin my name..thats been my name for ever dawg, my names scott and my last name starts with an a, damn posers.. o well its cool if you wanna be like me thats fine
V/kill-Instinct
OMG...
Vote - Killa Instinct
Reason:
At least threw a fucking punch....Essay came anus honestly...I've never seen such horrible shit... you need work on concepts and throwing actual hard punches if you want to do anything with your verses again...Killa came with a couple of decent attempts at hits...and just a better verse that tried to diss his opponent..instead of asking if he was black..wtf??
You Forgot To Poll In My Battle Killa:
PostmorteM vs. Ill Game
hmmmm both came pretty damn whack... killa i know you can come harder than this.... alright killa had better structure and his flow was better maintained... both had weak punches... i hated your opener killa but you had a couple of alright punches later.... well both need to peep some battles... and elevate...
vote - Killa I
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
last up or wateva.. plz finish this people i wanna battle again.. thnx
Oh My God.....
Essay - SO WHACk........ you are doing such elementary rhymes...... i want to laugh but it is really depressing...... you can't be rhyming words like whack: black ; ho: mo; It is too basic and that line about six feet under. it is so over played,,,,, well it was never played that horrible usually people use it as a concept.. your flow was alright..... but get a bigger much bigger vocabulary..
Killa Instict - I didn't really like yours. your flow was good. weak punches though. you could really benefit from some good concepts not concept liike non missle.....so whack.........
v/ Killa
(only cause Essay's verse was so pittiful)
upping for last vote.. plz vote i fuking hate this ugly battle from ages.. leave links