ight post 10 - 20 lines
no d/r
no hate
u spit first due before midnight i spit after you
SmokaJoka
Ill Game
ight post 10 - 20 lines
no d/r
no hate
u spit first due before midnight i spit after you
Midnight is about 22 hours from now where I live...I'll see you then...lol...
I.J.L.
Without the J...we're just Ill
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umm igth or u could just spit now cuz its 10 22 here and i obviously wasnt talking about where u r
lol
You got the flow? ..Fucka, we know that Post'll drop this hoe
How the fuck you got that pic in ya sig without droppin audios?
Speakin of that bitch, ...the words in it could this on a spin
"Are you next?"....only if you mean the one in line for the win
We can tell ya ways.....and nobody can ever help this gay
If heaven came with your rhymes...then you'd have hell to pay
This kid better pray......or at least listen to what I gotta say
The only Ill Game he got caused Magic Johnson to quit NBA
Post'll destroy ya people....bitch ya know I got this win on lock
^Speakin of that...
Fucka watch son....I'd leave ya whole race against the clock
Fuck it...my fists are just something you can't top dumb fuck
And if my punches were blood on ya face...then I'd draw blood
Ya devasted..fuck it Ill..all the voters know ya wack and hated
...Cuz if it boiled down to it, ...you'd be done and evaporated
14...match me and post tonight
I.J.L.
Without the J...we're just Ill
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Damn dawg that ending was killin on most battles I vote for I always let kats
know like that ending was weak or there was no fatality there but the was a fatality
good shit but I'll vote after Ill spits peace be still.
can you do me a favor and hit my battle I'm already up 4-0 just give me ya honest vote
aight then one.
in your avy you where right cuz that ^was a dead post
im not gonna bost,i dropped an audio and it bombed
but that was becasue it wasnt rap..it was me fucking ur mom
ican show u a pic of post go to fallenoffrappers.com
voters protest ur verse more than they did on vietnam
cause rb has got no use for you or your crew
sometimes ur cool but in thsi verse u let ur wack ooze through
in this battle your done, ill just call you a phillips screw
from another point of view im saying i merked you in 8 lines
you where done before you started you shoulda watches the signs
like a 90 degree drop all your verse did was decline
when postmortem went golfing is the only time hes gonna pull out tha nines
if you didnt excpect me to win you shoulda improved you lines
now ur merked laying on the ground covered with heinz
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SCORES-
post mortem-
You got the flow? ..Fucka, we know that Post'll drop this hoe
How the fuck you got that pic in ya sig without droppin audios?
*** nice punch, good flow
Speakin of that bitch, ...the words in it could this on a spin
"Are you next?"....only if you mean the one in line for the win
** ok, not too creative, but gets the job done
We can tell ya ways.....and nobody can ever help this gay
If heaven came with your rhymes...then you'd have hell to pay
* not that effective of a punch, this is a played concept in my opinion
This kid better pray......or at least listen to what I gotta say
The only Ill Game he got caused Magic Johnson to quit NBA
*** I'm a sucka for bball jokes :-P
Post'll destroy ya people....bitch ya know I got this win on lock
^Speakin of that...
Fucka watch son....I'd leave ya whole race against the clock
* self glorification has got to be good or its just filler, this is filler
Fuck it...my fists are just something you can't top dumb fuck
And if my punches were blood on ya face...then I'd draw blood
* filler, but not completely stupid
Ya devasted..fuck it Ill..all the voters know ya wack and hated
...Cuz if it boiled down to it, ...you'd be done and evaporated
*** this is great, the first line is just an ok setup though
ill game-
in your avy you where right cuz that ^was a dead post
im not gonna bost,i dropped an audio and it bombed
but that was becasue it wasnt rap..it was me fucking ur mom
**** tight opener, original and hard hitting for a mom joke
ican show u a pic of post go to fallenoffrappers.com
voters protest ur verse more than they did on vietnam
** aight
cause rb has got no use for you or your crew
sometimes ur cool but in thsi verse u let ur wack ooze through
in this battle your done, ill just call you a phillips screw
* weak filler
from another point of view im saying i merked you in 8 lines
you where done before you started you shoulda watches the signs
* not good
like a 90 degree drop all your verse did was decline
when postmortem went golfing is the only time hes gonna pull out tha nines
** lol aight
if you didnt excpect me to win you shoulda improved you lines
now ur merked laying on the ground covered with heinz
**
TOTALS-
post- 14 stars/7 bars = 2.000 (C)
ill- 12 stars/6 bars = 2.000 (C)
TIEBREAKER-
Best Line- Ill
"in your avy you where right cuz that ^was a dead post
im not gonna bost,i dropped an audio and it bombed
but that was becasue it wasnt rap..it was me fucking ur mom"
Vote- Ill
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The glass isn't half empty, it's one third full...
but I wouldn't drink that anyway, it's mostly backwash.
OK newb you have no idea on what you are doing^^^
POST-Okay this was a pretty one sided battle here, you had all the right things needed in this battle, good flow, nice structure, good punches, and came with some wit, you got got the point across and show that your on a skill level above what he came with you droped dope what eles is there to say, your verse was on key nothing really wrong, pretty much came like a vet would...Nice drop and keep the good keystyles up.
Best line from Post"You got the flow? ..Fucka, we know that Post'll drop this hoe
How the fuck you got that pic in ya sig without droppin audios?"
Ill- ok you came allright here, you could use some work on your punches and your verse was all over the place, work on better personals and shit, but you did come okay other then a few things you lacked, but you didnt have the lyrical power here to take this on, no hate okay drop on your part but Poat just came doper then you came..keep up the work and elevate.....
Best line from Ill Sorry man but nothing stood out, it seem's like just a verse full of filler.No hate
No hate just my opinion...One sided.
V/ Post
AIGHT
MORTEM
You got the flow? ..Fucka, we know that Post'll drop this hoe
How the fuck you got that pic in ya sig without droppin audios?
(lol not bad)
Speakin of that bitch, ...the words in it could this on a spin
"Are you next?"....only if you mean the one in line for the win
(meh..)
We can tell ya ways.....and nobody can ever help this gay
If heaven came with your rhymes...then you'd have hell to pay
(nah)
This kid better pray......or at least listen to what I gotta say
The only Ill Game he got caused Magic Johnson to quit NBA
(hmm not bad..)
Post'll destroy ya people....bitch ya know I got this win on lock
^Speakin of that...
Fucka watch son....I'd leave ya whole race against the clock
(no..no)
Fuck it...my fists are just something you can't top dumb fuck
And if my punches were blood on ya face...then I'd draw blood
(nah)
Ya devasted..fuck it Ill..all the voters know ya wack and hated
...Cuz if it boiled down to it, ...you'd be done and evaporated
(ive heard it sum where but cant member, its ok)
ILL
in your avy you where right cuz that ^was a dead post
im not gonna bost,i dropped an audio and it bombed
(neva rhymed n wtf)
but that was becasue it wasnt rap..it was me fucking ur mom
ican show u a pic of post go to fallenoffrappers.com
(stop wit the moms.. wat if shes 70 or dead..wack)
voters protest ur verse more than they did on vietnam
cause rb has got no use for you or your crew
(who r u to say,, and neva rhymed)
sometimes ur cool but in thsi verse u let ur wack ooze through
in this battle your done, ill just call you a phillips screw
(wtf.. hes through call u a phillips screw..sounded like u just wanted to rhyme)
from another point of view im saying i merked you in 8 lines
you where done before you started you shoulda watches the signs
(1st line wack 2nd wacker,, stop with the i beat u in 8 or 4, thats so played)
like a 90 degree drop all your verse did was decline
when postmortem went golfing is the only time hes gonna pull out tha nines
(good lines here)
if you didnt excpect me to win you shoulda improved you lines
now ur merked laying on the ground covered with heinz
(wack)
1 sided battle to postmortem.. his structure, punches, rhymes, flow, attemptment was way betta then urs.. i cant believe i lost twice to ur lines... i should vote on other peeps to votes like u.. ny way no hate but its obvious,, steveontrial gave post 14 stars and ill 12 and he gave it to ill.. hint hint.. ny way good luck to both and yeh...
return the favor by votin on these battles plz,, there old and i wanna finish em to battle again plz.. thnx guys peace.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=151677
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=152023
yea, and post had more bars than ill.... do the math numbnutsOriginally Posted by Killa_Instinct
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The glass isn't half empty, it's one third full...
but I wouldn't drink that anyway, it's mostly backwash.
WoW...Theres Not Even A Point To Be Explainin' This Mufkin' Battle...All I Had To Read From ILL Game's Verse Was Up To The Part About A Phillips Screw...??? TO Kno That His Game Is Whack..LoL...This Shud Be An Easy Win For PostmorteM..His Folw, Punches, Word-play An Metas Were All Better..But That Verse Was Still A LiL Weak..Cud Use Some Werk To Make Yah Rhymes More Complex...Holla-Back..
Vote:PostmorteM
***Drop Votes On My Battle Against Zict..That Shit Shud Be Over By Now..Holla At Yea Boyy***
aight here it goes
VOTE ON MY BATTLES im tired of voting and noone returnin not a favor but an honest vote. n e wayz here i go
Postemortem opener first 3 lines-------You got the flow? ..Fucka, we know that Post'll drop this hoe
How the fuck you got that pic in ya sig without droppin audios?
Speakin of that bitch, ...the words in it could this on a spin
(it was an aight opener nuthin eyeopening but aight)
Ill Game opener opener first 3 lines-------in your avy you where right cuz that ^was a dead post
im not gonna bost,i dropped an audio and it bombed
but that was becasue it wasnt rap..it was me fucking ur mom
(nice punches but not really that good aight opener i guess)
Ill game core of battle lines 5-9-------We can tell ya ways.....and nobody can ever help this gay
If heaven came with your rhymes...then you'd have hell to pay
This kid better pray......or at least listen to what I gotta say
The only Ill Game he got caused Magic Johnson to quit NBA
Post'll destroy ya people....bitch ya know I got this win on lock
(not really feelin it but i know others will aight though)
Ill game core of battle lines 5-9-------voters protest ur verse more than they did on vietnam
cause rb has got no use for you or your crew
sometimes ur cool but in thsi verse u let ur wack ooze through
in this battle your done, ill just call you a phillips screw
from another point of view im saying i merked you in 8 lines
(nice flow aight structure but pretty good so far you got this is u have a better ending than him)
Postmortem closer las 2 lines-------Ya devasted..fuck it Ill..all the voters know ya wack and hated
...Cuz if it boiled down to it, ...you'd be done and evaporated
(really good closer but i dont know......can u reedem urself??)
Ill game closer last 2 lines-------if you didnt excpect me to win you shoulda improved you lines
now ur merked laying on the ground covered with heinz
(aight could of ended with something better but u got this one)
my vote for better flow and shit like that
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