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happy 21'st..... loss..
Smoka's with the crowd of punks, so ill bring the heat bitch,
With so many waves goodbye...... this bitch got sea sick,
When in the ring with the best, You bite their lines see,
So now when Smoke posts his verse...... he includes a bibliography,
IJL's decent, Still dont have half the skill i do,
Claim your not on Feebs dick..... But didnt you retire too?
Im being serious, Say your gay? No fair,
Yeah Rv is whack... Turns out half your crew came from there,
Your not on my level, But people are too informed to care,
I admitt this cow comes raw...... but i prefer mine medium rare,
Im hittin a nerve, You'll come hard, thats not wrong,
Cause when Smoke clicks.... Its usually Imperial at RM.com
Heh...your funny
Fuck this kids beliefs, just remember Smoke is dust, ya see?
So when this bitch bites the dust....it'll be me all over your teeth
^That's about my fist you weak hoe, ya verse is merely a giggle
And Elwood has a purpose....without PO in the fucking middle
Quotables might cherish ya, but sadly...you know what's scarier?
That they know ya numbers are up...in every mens stall of ya area
Said he's got a bitch, that's cool....I know the truth you fuckin tool
Found out the bitch swung by his house...cuz he lives near the school
Said he had good shows...sorry, but the yearly concerts had to stop
Cuz I've just knocked on Wood so much....he's RB's laughing Stock..
Every hit missed whore, ..and Smoka is a win that you won't afford
Cuz like his verses....Elwood not only drops shit, but he's piss poor
Smoka got it...too bad I can't vote. Want to check out my battle against Domthelord
elwood breakdown...........
Smoka's with the crowd of punks, so ill bring the heat bitch,
With so many waves goodbye...... this bitch got sea sick,
good opener nice punch
When in the ring with the best, You bite their lines see,
So now when Smoke posts his verse...... he includes a bibliography,
decent
IJL's decent, Still dont have half the skill i do,
Claim your not on Feebs dick..... But didnt you retire too?
1st line selfglorifying 2nd was decent
Im being serious, Say your gay? No fair,
Yeah Rv is whack... Turns out half your crew came from there,
good personal and good punch
Your not on my level, But people are too informed to care,
I admitt this cow comes raw...... but i prefer mine medium rare,
nice punch with wordplay and meta
Im hittin a nerve, You'll come hard, thats not wrong,
Cause when Smoke clicks.... Its usually Imperial at RM.com
good closer with punch with a good personal
smokajoka666......................
Fuck this kids beliefs, just remember Smoke is dust, ya see?
So when this bitch bites the dust....it'll be me all over your teeth
kind of selfglorifying but decent punch
^That's about my fist you weak hoe, ya verse is merely a giggle
And Elwood has a purpose....without PO in the fucking middle
nice wordplay and decent punch
Quotables might cherish ya, but sadly...you know what's scarier?
That they know ya numbers are up...in every mens stall of ya area
decent
Said he's got a bitch, that's cool....I know the truth you fuckin tool
Found out the bitch swung by his house...cuz he lives near the school
decent punch with a personal
Said he had good shows...sorry, but the yearly concerts had to stop
Cuz I've just knocked on Wood so much....he's RB's laughing Stock..
good punch with wordplay and personal
Every hit missed whore, ..and Smoka is a win that you won't afford
Cuz like his verses....Elwood not only drops shit, but he's piss poor
weak and played,should have been more complex like ya otha lines
conclusion.................
elwood came hard and had good punches and personals and wordplay
smoka came hard as well but i wasnt feelin the closer
punches-elwood(slightly)
personals-elwood(slightly harder)
structure-smoka
flow-elwood
multis-smoka(elwood had no multis)
wordplay-smoka
metas-elwood(smoka had no metas)
well as u can see from everything above,in overall i think elwood did better but by a lil bit...good and close battle ya'll
vote/Elwood.............ps.plz hit my sig up with an honest vote,thx -1-
upp..
preferably for people who will understand our personals.
Elwood
Smoka's with the crowd of punks, so ill bring the heat bitch,
With so many waves goodbye...... this bitch got sea sick,
Decent.
When in the ring with the best, You bite their lines see,
So now when Smoke posts his verse...... he includes a bibliography,
Okay.
IJL's decent, Still dont have half the skill i do,
Claim your not on Feebs dick..... But didnt you retire too?
No.
Im being serious, Say your gay? No fair,
Yeah Rv is whack... Turns out half your crew came from there,
RV punches are very played.
Your not on my level, But people are too informed to care,
I admitt this cow comes raw...... but i prefer mine medium rare,
Coo.
Im hittin a nerve, You'll come hard, thats not wrong,
Cause when Smoke clicks.... Its usually Imperial at RM.com
Not really feelin' it.
SmokaJoka666
Fuck this kids beliefs, just remember Smoke is dust, ya see?
So when this bitch bites the dust....it'll be me all over your teeth
Nice shit, nice flip on that concept too.
^That's about my fist you weak hoe, ya verse is merely a giggle
And Elwood has a purpose....without PO in the fucking middle
Lol.
Quotables might cherish ya, but sadly...you know what's scarier?
That they know ya numbers are up...in every mens stall of ya area
Decent.
Said he's got a bitch, that's cool....I know the truth you fuckin tool
Found out the bitch swung by his house...cuz he lives near the school
Ehh, for some reason, I wasn't really feelin' it.
Said he had good shows...sorry, but the yearly concerts had to stop
Cuz I've just knocked on Wood so much....he's RB's laughing Stock..
Lmao, I think this is your best line so far.
Every hit missed whore, ..and Smoka is a win that you won't afford
Cuz like his verses....Elwood not only drops shit, but he's piss poor
Cool closer.
V/Smoka
Peace :cool:
knocking on Elwood is old Smoka.
I used it too.
its a shame Elwood could of pulled this
off if his wording had been better..
Felt this was a decent battle enjoyed it
Smoka Just Shaded It
Reason: After reading both verses a couple of times i just thought that smoka's was less played than elwoods, although elwood came decent his verse wasnt overall as good and as witty. Overall the battle was enjoyable..and elwood lost out this time..no hate
V/ Smoka: For better concepts and punches
I took the time out..now return me the favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...9&page=1&pp=15
sorry wasnt able to poll..coz i havent post 200 yet
Heh, pretty close. Umm....
Both did decent here. I think Elwood took it because his verse was more personal, while Smoka had some wordplay but wasn't very good personally. Elwood, I thikn this is the best I've sen from ya. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: Elwood
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=146756
Hit this up, thanks. Peace.
If this wasn't the 100th battle with the same personals I'd applaud your verse Elwood....either way...still a good drop....liked the opener...;)
Smoka-your structure was better then El's.... your flow was good and it was onpoint didnt really fall off at anypoint... punches was good except that knocking on elwood line other then that all your shit was solid man... good verse
Elwood-verse was alright... stucutre a little off... flow was okay could have been better... you could have taken this battle if you rewored your punches and came wit a lil bit more wit but you didnt so that is why you lost.... pc
v/smoka
Up #2
yeah, i know structure wins battles..
up :)
hi :)
3....
Up #3
wow this was a nice battle both MC's came hard at each other
Elwood:
Smoka's with the crowd of punks, so ill bring the heat bitch,
With so many waves goodbye...... this bitch got sea sick,
i like that opener shit was crazy
When in the ring with the best, You bite their lines see,
So now when Smoke posts his verse...... he includes a bibliography,
that was ok
IJL's decent, Still dont have half the skill i do,
Claim your not on Feebs dick..... But didnt you retire too?
nah wasn't feeling it
Im being serious, Say your gay? No fair,
Yeah Rv is whack... Turns out half your crew came from there,
wack
Your not on my level, But people are too informed to care,
I admitt this cow comes raw...... but i prefer mine medium rare,
this was ok
Im hittin a nerve, You'll come hard, thats not wrong,
Cause when Smoke clicks.... Its usually Imperial at RM.com
it was alright better then smokes closer
Smoke verse
Fuck this kids beliefs, just remember Smoke is dust, ya see?
So when this bitch bites the dust....it'll be me all over your teeth
lmao nice punch man nice opener
^That's about my fist you weak hoe, ya verse is merely a giggle
And Elwood has a purpose....without PO in the fucking middle
lmao nice purse
Quotables might cherish ya, but sadly...you know what's scarier?
That they know ya numbers are up...in every mens stall of ya area
it was ok
Said he's got a bitch, that's cool....I know the truth you fuckin tool
Found out the bitch swung by his house...cuz he lives near the school
lmao nice as punch
Said he had good shows...sorry, but the yearly concerts had to stop
Cuz I've just knocked on Wood so much....he's RB's laughing Stock..
blah wasn't really feeling that
Every hit missed whore, ..and Smoka is a win that you won't afford
Cuz like his verses....Elwood not only drops shit, but he's piss poor
blah closer
So i think smoke took this he had way better punches and had me cracking up
omfg next time can ya'll state that you need 200 post to vote damn well return the favor please link in sig.
Yall Tripping Bro To See That Elwood Won, This Was Joker All Over It, His Punches Were Tight And The One About The Purpose Without The Po In The Middle Did Have Me Laughin, And Elwoods Verse Was Just Boring To Me, So In Con Clusion Although U Need 200 Post To Vote Im Just Showing Feedback
V/smoka
Elwood
Smoka's with the crowd of punks, so ill bring the heat bitch,
With so many waves goodbye...... this bitch got sea sick,
pretty tight..
When in the ring with the best, You bite their lines see,
So now when Smoke posts his verse...... he includes a bibliography,
ok..
IJL's decent, Still dont have half the skill i do,
Claim your not on Feebs dick..... But didnt you retire too?
decent, nothin special..
Im being serious, Say your gay? No fair,
Yeah Rv is whack... Turns out half your crew came from there,
is this true? nice..
Your not on my level, But people are too informed to care,
I admitt this cow comes raw...... but i prefer mine medium rare,
aight..
Im hittin a nerve, You'll come hard, thats not wrong,
Cause when Smoke clicks.... Its usually Imperial at RM.com
ha... aight closer
Smoka
Fuck this kids beliefs, just remember Smoke is dust, ya see?
So when this bitch bites the dust....it'll be me all over your teeth
would not of made much sense, but line 3 made up for it... so it was decent
^That's about my fist you weak hoe, ya verse is merely a giggle
And Elwood has a purpose....without PO in the fucking middle
witty wordplay personal...
Quotables might cherish ya, but sadly...you know what's scarier?
That they know ya numbers are up...in every mens stall of ya area
ha..decent
Said he's got a bitch, that's cool....I know the truth you fuckin tool
Found out the bitch swung by his house...cuz he lives near the school
ok...
Said he had good shows...sorry, but the yearly concerts had to stop
Cuz I've just knocked on Wood so much....he's RB's laughing Stock..
aight aight... nothin much
Every hit missed whore, ..and Smoka is a win that you won't afford
Cuz like his verses....Elwood not only drops shit, but he's piss poor
played concept but never seen it flipped like this, so decent
Overall: I thought it was pretty close... but smoka's consistency took it b/c elwood fell off a bit in the middle or so, if he would of kept up with his opener I believe he would of won.. good battle though fella's...
Vote: Smoka
RETURN THE FAVOR (CHECK SIG)
aight both fukn good flows.. i felt that elwood got this for 1 reason.. the 1 reason i could think that just made him get this vote is because i liked it more. both had evrythin a rap should hav but in my view elwood jus took this..
v/el
peace!!
ayo in return vote in mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=147822
and this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=147706
thnx yall!!!
now im able to pole a vote..goes to person i originally voted 4 pz
Up #4, and I'll reply back to your battles ASAP (to those who left links so far)
Up #5...
i thought that Elwood took this, i just thought his punches were harder hitting and were more on target, dont get me wrong Smoka had some NICe punches but i think that Elwood just had better ones. both structures were good, this was VERY close and i stress that word, but i just thought Elwood edged this one out on his punches.. good job to the both of you and good job Elwood....
v/ Elwood.
Ok i got 200 post so i just polled my vote peace.....
Elwood:
Smoka's with the crowd of punks, so ill bring the heat bitch,
With so many waves goodbye...... this bitch got sea sick,
wow fire opener... bit played but ok.
When in the ring with the best, You bite their lines see,
So now when Smoke posts his verse...... he includes a bibliography,
ehh decent at best.
IJL's decent, Still dont have half the skill i do,
Claim your not on Feebs dick..... But didnt you retire too?
haha nice
Im being serious, Say your gay? No fair,
Yeah Rv is whack... Turns out half your crew came from there,
ok punch
Your not on my level, But people are too informed to care,
I admitt this cow comes raw...... but i prefer mine medium rare,
ehh you said he came raw.. you complimented him. weak.
Im hittin a nerve, You'll come hard, thats not wrong,
Cause when Smoke clicks.... Its usually Imperial at RM.com
solid closer.
Smoka:
Fuck this kids beliefs, just remember Smoke is dust, ya see?
So when this bitch bites the dust....it'll be me all over your teeth
weak, even when explained below
^That's about my fist you weak hoe, ya verse is merely a giggle
And Elwood has a purpose....without PO in the fucking middle
haha that was clever.
Quotables might cherish ya, but sadly...you know what's scarier?
That they know ya numbers are up...in every mens stall of ya area
ehh.. decent
Said he's got a bitch, that's cool....I know the truth you fuckin tool
Found out the bitch swung by his house...cuz he lives near the school
weak punch
Said he had good shows...sorry, but the yearly concerts had to stop
Cuz I've just knocked on Wood so much....he's RB's laughing Stock..
i hear it's played but what the hell it's still hot
Every hit missed whore, ..and Smoka is a win that you won't afford
Cuz like his verses....Elwood not only drops shit, but he's piss poor
nice wordplay but punch was just ok.
V/ Smoka for coming just a LITTLE bit harder.
-Hit my battle with Johnny Damen up or ill have my vote removed, thanks.-