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no bitin
no crew votes
no dr
due in thirty
10 lines
30 min
ayo make this an hr..i gotta make a run
nah i had time..keyed
this guy isnt on top, if he was it was a quick reign
and its natural i take him out, like whatever took rick james
i heard he thought out the box, so he wont be a damn hassle
he tried going against the "grain", and got beat wit a sand castle
i dont think his punchs connect, so now i'll provoke the nerd
cuz im keepin L'S away from my face, like im trynna stop smokin herb
kid you such a lame, dont think yur better i'll burn...
and take this win by storm,flood nd the rest of the metrological terms
i guess he came to enjoy the site, but imma prove this guy wrong
cuz i'll punch and move his body, like that 1 nina sky song
weak key...pz
g'luck
yo my lyrical sword ready for another killin
ima win this battle cause you know its lord willin
got a new nigga thinkin hes my only rival
but after this battle hell be runnin fo survival
he cant be my rival cause he aint my nemisis
so get your bitch to walk yo ass off my premisis
this battle is easy like gettin laid by your mom
cause the only rival you done have is in pokemon
so as the swordman comes in fo the final strike
you better run or youll get cut up with yo rhymes an mic.
u won nigga..........................................
what up nigga yo get into a battle.
yo uppin man vote on this its good shit
ayo uppin this shit
this aint good when folks dont vote
y0o hit this up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=140938
are you serious?...vote man^^^^ you cant just drop a link
vote man
wtf does it take?
.....
this guy isnt on top, if he was it was a quick reign
and its natural i take him out, like whatever took rick james
---no, predictable...
i heard he thought out the box, so he wont be a damn hassle
he tried going against the "grain", and got beat wit a sand castle
---pretty wack, forced this
i dont think his punchs connect, so now i'll provoke the nerd
cuz im keepin L'S away from my face, like im trynna stop smokin herb
---played, and not good
kid you such a lame, dont think yur better i'll burn...
and take this win by storm,flood nd the rest of the metrological terms
---decent
i guess he came to enjoy the site, but imma prove this guy wrong
cuz i'll punch and move his body, like that 1 nina sky song
---meh, not much
yo my lyrical sword ready for another killin
ima win this battle cause you know its lord willin
---so what?..this aint even a diss
got a new nigga thinkin hes my only rival
but after this battle hell be runnin fo survival
---boring, no creativity...no punch
he cant be my rival cause he aint my nemisis
so get your bitch to walk yo ass off my premisis
---no wit, no punch, no creativity, no good....just statements
this battle is easy like gettin laid by your mom
cause the only rival you done have is in pokemon
---fucking wack
so as the swordman comes in fo the final strike
you better run or youll get cut up with yo rhymes an mic.
---gay,
lyrical dude aint got no creativity or wit...AT ALL...learn
to throw a punch instead of boring threats and statements..
rival wins...with a less weak verse..
V.Rival
Easy vote here
Rival - Could have been better, but for a newbie not too bad. None of your punches hit hard, but they all hit and the sand castle thing was a bit amusing. You had a good flow going and some good ideas, just keep elevating and thinking of more creative punches. You have something here.
lyrical - You don't have something here. Sorry but your verse was very basic and bad. Extend your bars a bit and make them longer so they don't seem as basic and work on creative concepts for punches. Don't just say your killing him.. say how you are killing him. And stay away from mom jokes.
Vote - Rival
Yo Lyrical no offense but you could've did a lot better; you completely wasted like 4 lines. Rival good shit keep it up. Overall I no excitement.
^yeah i was thinking that same thing about Lyrical.. he could of done a lot better, ^but what are you voting for? you need 100 posts to post the poll... but ^he was correct, Lyrical had NO creativity what so ever... but Rival, his verse was alright, but he could of came harder and his structure could of been better, and the verse was just boring i didnt really "get into it" but i still think you took this battle compared to Lyrical... good job to the both of you though.................
V/ Rival...
RETURN THE FAVOR
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=140943
dont worry it gets better...this was 10 mins of crap
Vote - Rival
Reason:
...even it it is odd Savir. voted.....Rival took this battle fairly easily.....his opponent had weak vocabulary and punches...while Rival at least was able to make out a few decent lines.....therefore...he gets my vote..
v/ rival. lyrical wat the hell was that u was just sayin stuff the flow cood hav been harder better luck nex time.
V/ Rival,
Reasoning: Lyrical came to basic and plain, predictable and not good. RIVAL came iight, his lines werent good either, but atleast some tapped the other guy (cuz they didnt hit). Pretty obvious victory.
oh yea, go vote on my battle its in my sig