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you know the rules.
check in due in fifteen
verses due in 30
dude you said you will spit first......i will spit right after you
actually i wont be able to spit for a while i just got called in to work, and since im delayin i will spit first if you want me to but i will when i get off
1)How you gone call yaself lyrical, wit ya pussy ass crew
2)When ya rhymes are like Hugh Hephner, Old and Overused
3)You need something in ya veins, for those lyrics to go after
4)I know what you need, you need some Lyrical Viagra
5)How you gone diss Tha Phoenix, cause it seem to be funny
6)That ya rhymes are like ya dick, short and stubby
7)After ya first loss, you cursed God in Bed
8)He got angry, now all we call you is DICKHEAD
9)How you gonna be cocky, like you bust words off the head
10) When you talk out ya ass so much, I smell shit on ya breath.
Alright Im Checkin In...............................
His only win is from a noshow "ill" so he thinks hes skilled.
He cant be real, because this rucca still has plea's to fulfill.
This guy responded my callout, "Someone who can hack it"
I just read your verse man and trust me you dont have it
When it comes to pheonix, his wack keystyle and his bold strategics
fuck this fool beter think ya leave it, fuck with me ill you'll parapelegic
Come on now dog this win you didnt have to see, its a tragidy
Your just like dont laugh at me, and im like bow to your majesy
Look above i bet you wish that i did stop with just those six lines
did you see the signs, your lines will never be anything like mine
Dope spit Stubbs...
props
Phoenix you gotta set your structure up better
also, try and get a good flow goin cause your lines dont really add up to anything
because ever line was starting a different statment.
Maybe get a specific topic to rhyme about your opponent rather than goin all over the place.
Stubbs: Great flow, nice structure and good rhyming.
This'll be a K.O. no doubt
V/Stubby............
all i can say is that man phonenix you really like spittin bout dicks......props to stubby his flow was way better...work on structure phoneix and poor punches man....sweet rhymes stubby and better punches then phoneix
V/Stubby
stubby took this one easily... pheonix is a played out rapper... only way he will get wins is from no shows... ever... stubby you put more in2 this battle than ive ever seen from you. good stuff.. you should battle in elite now... i think u may just have what it takes.. besides feed is better... nice punches stub... personals are your specialty too! keep it up holmes... peep my battles
Vote - Stubby
Way too many phallical references in Phoenix's verse. Punches were generic or nonsensical. Stubby was much better all around, so Stubby should win. Also, I don't think anyone from the lyrical violators crew should vote on this battle.
Help me close this battle: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135604
dude all they did was put in their feedback they didnt poll vote they just text voted and thats just givin their opinion
Phoenix:
How you gone call yaself lyrical, wit ya pussy ass crew
When ya rhymes are like Hugh Hephner, Old and Overused
-ok opener, nothing special, didnt hit that hard
You need something in ya veins, for those lyrics to go after
I know what you need, you need some Lyrical Viagra
-a little played, i just used the viagra line the other day
How you gone diss Tha Phoenix, cause it seem to be funny
That ya rhymes are like ya dick, short and stubby
-stubby/named after dick is played too
After ya first loss, you cursed God in Bed
He got angry, now all we call you is DICKHEAD
-wack
How you gonna be cocky, like you bust words off the head
When you talk out ya ass so much, I smell shit on ya breath
-weak punch/closer
Stubby:
His only win is from a noshow "ill" so he thinks hes skilled.
He cant be real, because this rucca still has plea's to fulfill
-ok opener
This guy responded my callout, "Someone who can hack it"
I just read your verse man and trust me you dont have it
-nice punch
When it comes to pheonix, his wack keystyle and his bold strategics
fuck this fool beter think ya leave it, fuck with me ill you'll parapelegic
-weak punch
Come on now dog this win you didnt have to see, its a tragidy
Your just like dont laugh at me, and im like bow to your majesy
-weak bar again
Look above i bet you wish that i did stop with just those six lines
did you see the signs, your lines will never be anything like mine
-ok closer, did good with the set up and punch
Weak battle, Phoenix you came weak and played, Structure was a little screwed too, work on that... Stubby you had better punchs and they werent played, structure was pretty good, and you came with better vocab.
V/ Stubby
P.S. Stubby tell your dick riders a.k.a. Ralk and OTH to stop dropping a crew opinion and swaying the vote.
P.S. hey stubby also tell 3-6nielsons bitch ass to shut tha fuck up cuz he's gay lol. thanx man
uppin 2 on this shit//////////////////////////////
i can't vote or anything, but stubby had it hands down.
Phoenix- wtf was that, you can't even rhyme, the structure was weak, and u had no good punches. it needs a lot of work.
stubby-u had all around better rhymes and structure. as far as punches go... This guy responded my callout, "Someone who can hack it"
I just read your verse man and trust me you dont have it
that was tight, good punch.
v/stubby
If i could vote i would pick STUBBY.
Phoenix some of your lines were g@y junk
pretty much a one sided battle here.... phoenix, i didnt like the way you did your verses, with the numbering... should have just set it out normally... thought you had a couple of played punches in there and not very strong ones at that.. id keep working on it... get more original punches going...
stubby... yeah thought your verse was better... the opener was a bit weak... i thought your second bar was stronger, the paraplegic line needed worded differently.... the stagedy punch, seemed a bit wierdly worded... your closer was ok, saw what you were saying, but it didnt hit very hard....
''' all in all stubby gets this, his punches connected more and that 'callout line' took it for me...
....v/stubby
damn it seems like everyone liked that line about the callout lol, yeah i agree that was a pretty good line lol, anyways uppin 3 on this
Ayo, the callout line
ways the one dat made you win
if in other battles you have them callouts
it will be KO
Vote - STUBBY...
first off pheonix your structure = WACK!....odnt use it ever again....and actually use sum meta's....use personals....blah elevate on everything cuz, dog, that was horrible....STUBBY u came alright.....u had maybe 2 decent punches...nothin too special but u easily killed him....keep elevatin....ur almost there....
wasnt a great battle..
stubby-lines were alright, not reallyand decent punches or personals, some were okbut nothin real hard, flow was decent and so was your structure, work on better punches next time that hit hard.
phoenix - ok now you need to elevate man, your verse was pretty poor, not really and good punches or personals at all, just alot of played and weak lines, flow wasnt bad and structure was pretty good, just work on hard hittin personals and punches and use wordplay and be creative.
v/ stubby