Arite... House rules...
Lets make this one a memorable battle.
I'll say... due by... Saturday Night . . .
I will probably drop earlier... I would drop right now but im off 2 work.. . peace homey.. good luck
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Arite... House rules...
Lets make this one a memorable battle.
I'll say... due by... Saturday Night . . .
I will probably drop earlier... I would drop right now but im off 2 work.. . peace homey.. good luck
just checkin in, I'll drop before saturday prolly too
Good Luck
Prepare 4 Impact
This battle gon' leave you feelin' alot like 50 after he got shot
word wounds that'll leave you wit more holes than a donut shop
You aint no top of the line rapper, an A&R wouldn't buy u stock
rec exec were to try 2 puchase me i'd be auctioned non-stop
I'm throwin' wild cards all around this wanna be G Wrightmak
It's a damn shame this kids 2 wack 2 ever make a tight track
Kids never felt real dollahs probably only change, or a light stack
funny thing is i tried 2 take it from him, he probly wouldn't fight back
You aint worth shit to our society cause your shit aint got a job
nobodys gonna give u a scholarship based on how well you rob
they aint gonna pay 4 some chump who can't see through the fog
you should try and bring back a trend such as skip rope or pogs
Hah... I'm not the type of rapper 2 degrade women, a sexist
I'd rather glorify the girls who choose 2 ride wit me in a lexus
Its ok 2 bob ur head 2 text cause my style is straight infectious
Try talkin shit & i'll slap u and ur man wit ma left hand, im ambidextrous
Y'all cats aint never wanna test sabotage, remember hes a damn villain
Don't fuck around wit him at all or you and ya man will soon be grillin
He let ailse phive get the better of him because he got banned & willin
jus keep a close eye cuz ill freeze myself in time so i can fuk ya grand children
I'll rap this shit up on you now with this final bar so dont be vauge
Wild out mother fuckers like you've just downed a couples kegs
Keep in mind that this thread wont be open for as long as ya moms legs
Please don't tell me im sick trix, Fuck bein' ill, im the cause of the plauge
Thats a wrap bigot
What was that? I saw your verse and God it was pathetic
I was on the floor, passed out laughing after i read it
"This guy needs a medic! His heart stopped beating and hes not breathing"
You know the only way they saved my life? they got me to stop reading
Simply put, this was a horrible waste of my time
You makin me sick, wit yo worthless disgraceful rhymes
It's funny, you wanted this battle to be a memory
no worries, it will be...as the worst merking in rb history
Kid, you should consider changin your name from sabotage
u gettin sabotaged,these punches hittin u with a endless barrage
My verse is a collage, all these rhymes put into 1 big image...
Can you see it? I'm not even tryin, this is just a scrimmage
I see you're from Toronto.....Lol, a canadien rapper
Thats funnier than the idea of Bow Wow maintain a rap career
Like the Raptors, you make the city of Toronto shameful
I feel these personals hittin you, and man, i know it's painful
These punches are fillin you with holes, imma send a couple to ya
Leave u screamin halelujia, cuz you'll see the light shinin through ya
Like Rosie O'donnel on water ski's son you are quickly sinkin
I feel bad for you, you lost befor u started...what were u thinkin?
Illunadick gave me a loss on my last battle due to "Excessive upping"
Only way that Hard ass mod gets wins is from is Excessive dick sucking
I guess the reason I'm here is to avenge that pointless loss
I'm not comin hard, like Randy Moss, I'm takin this one off
Lets get some votes
UPPIN for votes
upping this ish.
Uppin for some votes
Uppin #3
vote please...
^^^prolly ur two best lines......attempted personal.......no punch though.....overall ur verse wasnt to good......y do u guys battle with so many damn lines.....it gets so boring to read......ur structure was good.....flow was decent......a few metas here and there......wordplay was ok.....a few of ur punches connected.....if u had put a flip on ur personals they might have been good, but they turned out bad.....Quote:
Originally Posted by sabotage
^^^prolly ur best two lines......had a meta......punch was ok......overall ur verse was aight.....structure was pretty good....flow fell off a little bit......there were some pretty good metas......wordplay was ok......some of ur punches connected......ok personals.....Quote:
Originally Posted by wrightmk17
Overall -
sabotage had a better flow and structure....wrightmak had more metas.....and his punches connected more.....so basing off of that, punches and metas r more important than structure and flow so wrightmak gets my vote....
VOTE - WRIGHTMAK17
Upping #4
just vote god dammit, drop a link if you want
pretty close battle we got here...goodluck to both
Close battle, but I think Sab took it by just a hair...
That hair being that Wright took his last 4 lines and dissed ILL for some reason.
Also, I think Sab used multi's better, making that long ass rhyme a bit easier to read, so I give em flow as well as direction...
Nothing quotable from either...
Maybe Sab's "scholarship" line...
Just more of a focused and easier to read attack by Sab.
Peace
Vote- Wrightmak
Sab- you came nice, with flawless structure.
nice flow along with that. some of your
punches hit, some were way off. you should
have had way more personals. your wordplay
was ok, but your creativity was missing. you
had ok consistency.
Wright- Nice verse man, surprised. the
lines that daedal quoted were the nicest
from you. you had nice structure, can be better
dont space out the bars
like this ok? nice wordplay, nice creativity, ok
consistency
vote- wright
i'll hit this up after you vote honestly and explained
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129769
hella close battle here.
Vote- Wrightmak
Sab- you came nice, with flawless structure.
nice flow along with that. some of your
punches hit, some were way off. your wordplay
was ok. good creativit. you
had ok consistency.
Wright- Nice verse,. the
lines that daedal quoted were the nicest
from you. you had nice structure, can be better
dont space out the bars
but overall, i felt Sabs verse more...
vote- Sabotage
pz
^my bad there. lol. i didn't mean to say vote-Wrightmak at the top of my post.
YOU GUYS WERE RUNNING TOGETHER....THE WHOLE RACE
THIS WAS A PRETTY GOOD ONE...
Sabotage- you came nice, with flawless structure.nice flow along with that. some of yourpunches hit, some were way off. your wordplay was ok. good creativit. you had ok consistency. Sab used multi's better... GOOD
Wright- Nice verse. the lines that daedal quoted were the nicestfrom you. you had nice structure, can be better dont space out the bars. though you had some downfalls.
BUT overall, SABOTAGE VERSE HAD TOUCHED ME MORE
VOTE---SABOTAGE
Upping
vote- Sabotage
reason:
Sabotage- i really didnt think this was a close battle. I red urs, then i went to wright's, and i could just tell the difference in skill level. But u had a good structure. Wordplay was good, and flow was good, wordplay helped alot. Punches werent bad, u had some good ones, but then u had some aight ones. Some fillere here and there, but u gotta have some filler on suck a long battle. Ur vocab was nice, and personals were good.
Wright- U had some good punches as well. U had aight structure, stretched lined here and there, but its all good. Vocab was nice, same as sabotage. Personals, u had some straight personals. FLow was good, it was off alittle at points. Punches, werent that bad. I like ya 7th and 8th lines were my fav., but i just think sabotage took this in flow, and structure.
Vote- sabotage
yo sabotage wanna hit up one of my battles since i hit urs up thanks.
heres the link: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130465
wow this battle got me confused as fuck...
10 lines people...10 lines!...any more lines...
i start seeing shit thats not there...so...
S takes struc...which in contrast takes flow...
WM17 had his shit everywhere...im not even,
trying to read a book my man...so...id say...
WM17 had decent shit...but fondaled filler with,
punchlines which fucked up overall diss value...
S had decent punches but they wasnt all that great
but he takes vocab which gave him a lot of points...
and i felt S took personals...eventhough they were bland
after reviewing this battle several times i felt WM17 won
but now it dawned on me that S edged a win out of his ass!
hit my battles up...