ak-mixa vs. AceE

30 min.
10 lines or more
no crew votes
no hate/ dick riding...etc.


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alright with rules...
lets be quick...
g'luck...

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I'm ready for my rhymetastic initiation,
Name's AceE, but God calls me his greatest creation.

Stayin Strapped to a dildo is self claimed AK-Mixa,
I get it on with the Ashley and maryKate sista's.
Must be dreamin, not a real emcee in the state of Tennessee,
Do you care to disagree? Put down the country CD.

You just can't get no satisfaction,
Cuz pussy gives you an allergic reaction.
Against my skill, you're just a fraction,
Montreal's chances of winnin' the cup is like you gettin action.

I'm new to the site,
Soon to be the hype.
It's no contest, I'll devour you QuickTime,
Cuz I'm a RealPlayer, with a real rhyme!


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first try, whatever...just jokin...took so long cuz I got logged out, and needed new pass...

I cum down hard prolonging with words out my dick hole
nigga types suicidal bombings worse than Iraqi death tolls
dumbass dat couldn't spell his name if he was a real witch
lacks show and tell but no one gives a fuck about dis bitch
AceE done took da same name of other emcees on da board
dats why niggas here me rewinded and him skipped fast-foward
nigga isn't ready for my rhymes at all he's young and restless
steady taking his air away from elevation now he is breathless?
hoe can kiss my ass da best buy and da bye in da bird invested
should be an illegal crime to rap like AceE and not get arrested

explanations:
elevation- da higher ya go up da harder it is too breathe.

ye...nice rhymes...lets get some people to comment and vote on it...

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both really fondaled filler really bad here...
especially ace...he had no punches...
he had no personals...they all were weak...
ak i felt at least attempted punches & or personals
so for the very simple fact of this...ak wins...
ak takes struc...make yur shit like that for now on
ace had horrid struc...not feeling it at all...
you need to elavate and come with actually disses
that connect and effect and bring down yur oponent
incorperate components that deliver dirty contents...
but overall vote/ak mixa for being consistent...
hit my battles up...aight...peace out...

if i would vote it wud b for acee cos his verse just flowed easier but ak came close to it but i had to pause to get the lines flowing but seing as i cnt vote yet it dont matter but if i couild it wud b for acee

check some of my past battles out and both have not bin finished so u can vote!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129865
vs gills
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1430254
vs mc kiwi

One sided battle like fuck...

Ace - Man you should consider suicide. Your verse was really wack, punches sucked dick. And you gave props to yourself, wtf! That's just gay, don't fuckin' do it. Flow was ok, but you had a few stretched lines. Work on everything dawg, especially your structure. Elevate.

ak-mixa - Man I always enjoy readin' your battles. That was a good verse, I liked it. Structure was really good, flow was perfect. Punches hit him hard, they fucked him upside down. Everything else was good. Good use of personals too. Overall, it was really good, but your punches could've been better.

V/ak-mixa

Please return the favor:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129627

Peace

AceE you came in with some good flow.. structure was solid too. You had a good run on self glorification, cept battles are about punkin your opponent. You had good creativity and concepts were good. Punches and personals were there... couple of them hit ok but not all. Use of wordplay was pretty ill too. Vocab was O.K but it could use some work. All in all it was a hype drop...

Ak mixa had solid structure and flowed pretty well. He had a good use of vocabulary too. Creativity was ok but nothin special. Seemed like he tried to hard 2 land solid punches but nothing was really all that groundbreaking. Seemed like you had a lot of filler and no hard hitterz. lacked personals....

Ok battle

props 2 both
peace

Vote- AceE

uppin............................................v ote and I will return da favor.......................

It was a good battles both had a nice flow and both also had hot punchlines, but in the end ak-mixa didnt bring it hard enough, especially to be a veteran, and ace's punchlines were slightly better. Good shit though, but I gotta go with ace son. ~ScreamAtMeEarly~

V/Ace

if i could vote it would be for ak-mixa his had me laughing and the flow was def better then Ace neways.... punches were both good.....nice battle!

Mixa Took This His Punches Were Alot Better Compared To Acee.acee U Need To Get A Better Structure And Get Sum Punches That Hit
V/mixa

if i could vote i would give this to ______ because he had stronger punchlines, and better structure. he basically had a better overall verse.......v//ak-mixa

yo this one goes to mixa cuz his endin was 100 times better flow not as good but def had better punches
v/ak

AceE had decent rhymes and vocab, but alot of self-glory. Ak did too, but threw more punches, so my vote goes to ak.

v/ ak