this is to join the Squad up CRew...
10 lines...
no d/r
no cheatin
no feedin
no crew votes
aight...good luck...
u go FIRST
| < L | f F
Genocide21
this is to join the Squad up CRew...
10 lines...
no d/r
no cheatin
no feedin
no crew votes
aight...good luck...
u go FIRST
When I spit u'll black out, but ur rhymes? i'll catch 'em when they get tossed
He didn't put "21" in his name for nothin', thats just how many times he lost
Im 2 years younger than u & i could merk you, u should be ashamed of urself
Call the ambulance boy, coz this is gona be a fuckin heart attack to ur health
Know what? I'll "POOOF"* you off the map into oblivion, just like a fuckin' viper
Your on the Geno Side of rap, which I conquered while you were still in diapers
I'll eat thru ur flesh, all the pain'll result in u screamin to death
I'll hold ur head, grab ur neck, blow u up and u'll disappear, u and ur vest
How come everytime I see your mom her legs are always stretched?
Go do sumthin' bitch, wait ill throw u a bone, fetch dog fetch
aight.let me drop mines.....
yo check it...
Walk into this battle.I can sense ur FEAR AND DEFEAT.
Ready for action.Spit my ten lines without any BEAT.
U stand ova me.Bull Shit.I'll push u ova the CLIFF.
Tell da Cops,his name is Clifford,but we call him |< L | f F.
He had some troubles in his life so he committed SUICIDE.
Actually he had a fear of battling me. the great one GENOCIDE.
No clue it was a HOMICIDE,told the cops i respected 'em TOO.
Knew i killed this guy,plus be the ruler of the Squad up CREW.
Stepped up to me, but never suceeded, now join the others in HELL.
Ur jus like the Roman Empire that was defeated and FELL.
Ugh mine was totally wack.... Anyway can we get some votes?
Uppin' #1
kliff i say hes in man he came hotter than you to get into the crew i am voting to let him in now wayne has to dude
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Uppin' dis shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!
uppin this one time.............................................. .........................................
we don't have a crew...so crew votes can count..................OUT
Kliff-ur punches needed some help.maybe since Geno is in ur crew.he can help you out.
also ur structure was good.flow was good.i thought that your verse was kind of decent.It wasn't that good...especially ur punches.OKAY yea ur personals that just didn't work.u had multis.
Geno-u had some punches that were better than Kliff.Structure was decent.Flow was also decent.Personals was okay.I guess.I thought that ur verse was decent.It had better punches.IT WAS OKAY.
if i could vote i would vote--GENo
pretty wack from both...but it was apparent that Kliff
took this...for the simple reason that he had the only
punch/personal in the whole battle....
lol..that right there put em' over the top...When I spit u'll black out, but ur rhymes? i'll catch 'em when they get tossed
He didn't put "21" in his name for nothin', thats just how many times he lost
cuz basically Genocide's verse didnt have a single diss,
it was pure filler...
he tried throwing a personal into the mix,
though the results were well.....ugly
that got a laugh...but only because it was so badU stand ova me.Bull Shit.I'll push u ova the CLIFF.
Tell da Cops,his name is Clifford,but we call him |< L | f F.
rhyming cliff w/ Kliff...rofl
Genocide, you should put some serious work into yer
punches/personals...and try n dig a little deeper
as far as creativity...cuz good structure was just about
the only thing you had going for you here...
and the same goes for you Kliff...
you pretty much followed suit,
with most of yer verse being filler...
but yer opener alone saved you...
next time concentrate more on yer punches/personals
and try n elevate..
regardless..
v/ Kliff
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shit sorry to double post...but,
i forgot the link...hit this up since i took
the time to respond to yours..
pz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129696
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Uppin' #3.... ^^yeah ur right... this battle was totally wack... this is prolly the wackest verse ive ever written, and genocide's wackest verse... coz i know he can do MUCH better.... well ill vote on ur battle
peace
you were both horrible
kliff-I can't believe at my battle you called my lines streched and said they didn't flow, cause yours flowed horribly, punches were weak, metas were weak, barely rhymed, didn't really diss him well, you used a two years age difference as a diss, it was really weak, closer was the only thing that didn't really suck
geno- you sucked too, your closer wasn't as not bad, your flow was better, you didn't have any good personals, no metas, no punches, your made me laugh
both of you suck, but i'm voting kliff
Uppin' #4.... can sum1 vote?????????????????????????
This battle sucked.
Kliff had some weak disses, but his structure was nine... you had basically no punches, but at least you had some multies in there and you played on his age and name in the first two line which was decent personals..
Geno's verse sucked... your structure was really bad (stop the full stop thing) and your lines got stretched... you had only one ok line which was playing on his name, but you cant rhyme cliff with kliff... it's the same thing, so that was kinda wack...
Both of you need to elevate heaps, just keep practicing and go read some tutorials or ask for help in the extreme elevation forum... you need to get more creative and use better punches...
vote = Kliff
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