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Take al the time u need
Peace
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10 lines
U spit first
Take al the time u need
Peace
Checkin in...thoguth this was gonan be blind
so o well I'll spit today...
your aka Is Thorn so I'll give you a Tip Prick,
ya callin' out chicks wit pics...
...when you can look down and find no dick,
your record that you flauntin' shows your half as bad as It gets,
got called out by a newb...
got scared of his nice sig n left,
Tryed to battle Noah's ark and realized it Floats yo sink,
I'll anmit you did good against A few kats...
but C'mon you had to go'n get merked by SomeThing
When you originally set this Up it said (obviously ILL),
Well It woulda been Ok...
......If you bit off a verse from Born to Kill,
I'll just finish this merk here take you outta the rap game,
Cauz Trog I shut the door on your skill...
and Dr. spock wants back His last name.
I wasn't scared of his name, I said his Avatar matched my name
Anyways, you pissed me off
Check In
yur already forshadowin being burned, your visions are firey
the book in SyaNidals signatures is just his conscience diary
ya flow can still be fat.......simply boost your artery conditions
stop ur heart n' throw u the kiss of death like Hershey addictions
Im white plus im trashing u, its like Alabama hoastin wrestlemania
U've lost ya mind like too much lead, well u are frum Pensil Vania
U suck, should I perscribe u glasses? what is it u fail to see?
like every action figure in mint condition....S cant toy with me
when I set up our first battle, it was useless namin it Obviously ILL
cuz I knew ur name still wouldnt get around....like a broken wind mill
Vote-Trogdor
This battle was pretty close, but Trogdor was more consistent in his punches and directly hit his opponent. SyaNidal had some good line's but some of his line's lacked dramatically causing him to lose this battle. And I never seen that style before SyaNidal how your verse was sort of written like a Haiku with the A, B, A, B stanza. The line's "nice sig and left" and "looked down and found no dick" wasn't effective and looked like two filler's personally. But I was definetly feeling the Somthing line and the give back his name line. Pretty Good. Trogdor, on the other hand, used more effective punches besides the attempted wordplay that didnt fall to good with me from my perspective because it look like a stretch. His punches weren't spectacular, but enough to beat SyaNidal, keep writing you two.
Polled.
-Axe
first off click the link n read it...Quote:
Originally Posted by Trogdor
it says scared of his SIG!
and nice vote swaying good job sir...
Uppin!
I dont see anything dude
I thought you were talkin about Jobus's avater, cuz I told him they matched in a thread. I'm not vote swayin, just confused.
Uppin
kk its all good click the link lol I said SIg...the guns in the kids sig...
and you didnt accept his battle you sshould get it if u click..
vote-syanidal
reason:
syanidal- u had a good verse all the way through. Ur flow was good, along with structure and wordplay. U had good vocab, good punches, and great personals. All through the battle u didnt lead up once. So good verse, and great job on this one.
Trodjor- This verse just seemed like it didnt cut it for this battle. U did have a good verse as well but it didnt equal to the other kats. U had aigh flow, structure, and wordplay. Goog vocab, metas, and personal. and also punches. From past verses, i think u could have came alittle harder. But not a bad verse overall.
vote- syanidal
if u dont mmind hit ma battle up then ill poll vote, peace
heres da link, http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124712
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Hmm.....
Syanidal - Your verse was a bit difficult to read with the structure it was writin in, but once I read it throu, I caught the flow. The verse was solid with good punches throughout. They hit harder than Trogdor's.....which brings me to......
Trogdor - That wrestlemania, pennsylvania line wasn't working, like alot of other lines. I didn't feel punches, as they felt more like filler. You opened up good, but everything fell from that point.
Vote - Syanidal
uppin...
cmon vote vote vote...
Uppinizzle ........
Hit up my battle with Da Kid please^
Honestly while we wait
Lets get some vets.............................................. ....................
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uppin
iight hot battle from both thought both came pretty hard but i gotta give this one to syanidal
syanidal:
nice verse the verse was alittle weird so i had to read it slow, but then i saw the flow, and i caught the personal's and puches, personal's were iight but alittle shaky, flow, was good , stucture needs work little hard to read , punchlines okay punches seen you've do better .overrall thought you killed trogdor nice verse but needs to elevate on the stucture
trogdor: okay.. verse but didnt come as hard as i would have expected you to..
stucture was better then syanidal ill give you that, but your punches werent hitten hard , your flow was desent but syanidal's flow was off the hook, your personal's were igiht but the wrestlimania and pennsivaina line wasnt really feelin that thought you could have put it in a better way ...
overrall thought your verse lacked alittle bit but was an okay verse
VOTE Syanidal
please return the favor in this battle and ill drop my poll vote thank you
http://69.56.255.82/forum/showthread.php?t=126222
iight this battle was pretty much even
Syanidal-you came okay.....seen you come harder before but didnt this time for some reason..............your structure was weak.............flow was a lil chopppy and could have been better..........punches hit the spot and did the job..............personals was off the hook.........you came pretty nyce wit the personals but erything else it seemed like you really didnt care......15.5/20
Trogdor-you came kinda halfassed compared to some of your other battles.....your structure was better then syanidal............flow was okay not choppy at all.........punches was good but they could have been bettter...........personals was goood but you came kinda half assed wit them............15/20
verry close battle..........
v/syanidal
Trogdor........pm me later when you get on and see this shit cause i need to discuss some shit wit chu......pc
vote: Trogdor by a narrow margin - SyaNidal's link blunder hurt him...Quote:
First off your links were messed up - the second one is the same as the first - and thus they are all one behind where you wanted them...your aka Is Thorn so I'll give you a Tip Prick,
ya callin' out chicks wit pics...
...when you can look down and find no dick,
Very nice setup - not that good with the execution - .4
your record that you flauntin' shows your half as bad as It gets,
got called out by a newb...
got scared of his nice sig n left,
worded oddly - but kinda funny - .55
Tryed to battle Noah's ark and realized it Floats yo sink,
I'll anmit you did good against A few kats...
but C'mon you had to go'n get merked by SomeThing
setup was like "ehh?" punch was decent though - .45
When you originally set this Up it said (obviously ILL),
Well It woulda been Ok...
......If you bit off a verse from Born to Kill,
punch was stretched here - decent insult though - .4
I'll just finish this merk here take you outta the rap game,
Cauz Trog I shut the door on your skill...
and Dr. spock wants back His last name.
Personal - and kinda funny - .7
Overall - 5.0
yur already forshadowin being burned, your visions are firey
the book in SyaNidals signatures is just his conscience diary
personal but punch was weak - .35
ya flow can still be fat.......simply boost your artery conditions
stop ur heart n' throw u the kiss of death like Hershey addictions
some wordplay but not that hard hitting again - .35
Im white plus im trashing u, its like Alabama hoastin wrestlemania
U've lost ya mind like too much lead, well u are frum Pensil Vania
personal, wordplay, decent punch - .55
U suck, should I perscribe u glasses? what is it u fail to see?
like every action figure in mint condition....S cant toy with me
thought this was kinda clever - .7
when I set up our first battle, it was useless namin it Obviously ILL
cuz I knew ur name still wouldnt get around....like a broken wind mill
kinda funny - good simile - .7
Overall - 5.3
yo homeboy's, better make way for this beotch,
I gotcha momma's number and I aint scared to... fuck her.
ya, dog
man get the hell outa here and stop freeposting
id say this was a close battle but punches and overall
wittyness wins shit manne, so i have to say syanidal
he steped up to the plate and pulled this win with kerizma
TD had an ok verse but it was to simple at points and needs
a lil more creativness in some areas and shit like that etc.
personals was pretty close so id say it was a tie and flow
was kinda close to but syanidal could of came better
plus TD fead which isnt good by some people so it effects
personaly i dont care about feeding as long as its not in
the rules and shit like that but if it is its wrong and a no no
but vote/Syanidal for overall better punches, hit my battles