you go first whatever lines you want to spit ill do the same
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you go first whatever lines you want to spit ill do the same
checkin........................................... ..
how long it gonna take u yo
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my fault dawg, checkin, and no bitch i aint goin first, theres no feedin in this battle anyways, so go ahead and spit
oh my god. what a puss. u check in fuckig half hour ago, then delay all this time and make a puss excuse like " i aint going first"
fuck that, ill rape u
i'll merk you eternally, till all hell is gone,
u can't get hyper active. . in ya name u even spelled it wrong..
id a killed u at birth, you aint fit for mothers,
you'll just get crushed, as if by lovers..
then stepped on, your just a faggot thats vastly hating,
oh shit! looks like ur only reign. . . is evaporating. .
you have no room to talk, go hide and shit,
you love God so much. . in bitch slapped ur dickriding him . .
but you have little faith, your weak and fuck,
my punches are the only person that you'll keep in touch. .
eh fuck u bitch, ill wait however long to spit back at u, so shut ya fuckin trapt
this kat thinks hes bad callin me a pansy and a dick-rider
but u the newb....between u and me, ‘SKILLZ’ the divider
with these lyrics compacted to react and kill on impact......
there aint no way ur 'structured', 'vocabed'.....................
.....................'metaphorical' LACKED verse can come back
ur disses miss once, so they come back for a re-miss.......
pathetic, now keep an eye on ya monitor as I merk u dead bitch!
THIS said “this kids a vet in disguise,” theres no fuckin way
his lifes on the line & he STILL stands in the way with dismay
i wont give u a break kid, ill follow ya name and keep hatin
SHIT its funny watching u decay......................... ........
...........................after a long session of degradin(isnt it?)
the 'disses re-miss' line means, he talked stupid shit before the battle then he comes back in the battle to talk more stupid shit.
Vote - Hyper
Reasons: had better metaphors...which is the only thing this battle really boiled down to.....both had pretty even punches....and even structure..only thing i really honestly didnt like was the caps and quotes by Hyper...other than that he had a better overall verse....only thing i actually like by Keep was his opener...other than that i suggest you steer away from gay lines...other than that you have potential
Metaphors - Hyper
Punches - Tie
Personals - Tie
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well then....
... keep hating... i liked your opener... could have been worded better tho, to get the most outta it... your punches were ok... nothing quotable... personals werent too good.... structure mainly was decent....
hyper... i thought you showed a bit more consistancy here.... it was a smoother verse, punches pretty much equal to the others... but you carried them a bit better... again the personals could use work... research more into the opponent.... the wordplay was better tho....
...all in all due to better consistancy.... vote/hyper
aight uppin(1).....................................
Keep Hating- You had an okay verse. Your structure was pretty good. Your punches were overall pretty decent too. I thought your personals wern't that good tho, but decent enough. Your new so you just need to elevate more..but it was good for a newb tho.
Hyper- i thought your verse was just better. Punches hit hard i thought you manily did good on the punches. Your personals were okay, but could use a little work on them. Your wordplay was better. So overall you get my vote for better punches and better wordplay.
Vote- Hyper
i will poll my vote once you hit my battle up(honest vote)...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124561
Vote Hyper.....
Yo Hyper's verse was just so more complex an came a lot more raw... metas were on point an threw good punches... um looked like there were a couple personals.. but none of em really stood out to me.. still a great verse.. looks like you gave it a real effort....
Um... Hating... not tha greatest verse but you came alrite... it wasnt much to it really.. just some simple rhymes.. keep elevatin.. but nice try.. u just need to come harder.. and improve in tha main categories... punches.. structure.. an personals...
If either of u ever need somethin get at me thanx...
Vote Hyper Active
vote on my battle wit Sk!llz please.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124752
vote: hyper actyve
keep hatin- ur verse was aight. ur punches were aight....nothin special. ur personels were OK too even though the one about spellin his name wrong was kinda weak. ur structure was decent. to be new nucca u did aight.
hyper- ur verse was good. u threw good punches and u had some ood metas up in der too. ur personels were aight also. but overall u voted for u because ur verse had metas in it.
VOTE FOR DA BATTLE IN MAH SIG!!!\/ \/ \/ \/ \/
Uppin(2).............if yall didnt poll please poll, then ill be sure to hit ur battle up thanks
uppin(3)...........lets go people, if u vote an honest one here, ill be sure to do the same for yall
uppin(4).............one more peeps, hit this up and then ill be sure to hit yalls up.........peace
My Assessment
Keep: your spit was decent but ur punches wernt that hard and sum dissess lacked creativity and u didnt have any meta's so work on that your flow decent got choppy but overall you did ok.
HYPER: you did ok ive seen better lol but anyway your punches hit about the same but your metaphors clinched this so overall you did about the same flow wise and structure and personals but ur meta's helped pull this for you.
Overall: This was a decent battle and wasnt that evenly matched but wasnt that farfetched so this was an aight match-up.
My VOTE: HYPER-ACTYVE - please return favour in my battle against...... This.......