10-12 lines n explained votes..
Malice
NuE Sk!llZ
10-12 lines n explained votes..
chekkin in.. u spittin first?
Lets do a blind spit n start keyin it up now.. Hows dat sound¿?
cool.. ill be done in a few... good luck...
Live Freestyle: 12:22 PM
Your not bringin' the heat, your punches swingin' to me and only let off a light breeze..
Malice is elementary like nike's, my lines leave you pale faced more then white t's..
If your hot on rb i'm known to bring a slight freeze, dat will bounce me to stardom..
There's no sunny days when battlin' me, I'll leave your world darker then harlem..
People say hell is earth, so takin' your soul is a favor, because heaven's up fam..
I'll give this too you freely, like helpin' out the needy, handin' em a seven up can..
This kids blowin' hot air, i'm puttin heat in his lungs more then smokin' ciggarettes..
And Malice takin it serious like theres a money prize, this is just the internet..
If this is what you call rappin' and battlin then yoe haven't met a real nigga yet..
I can critisize Malice on this site, your a netcee who hasn't reached a bigger set..
Even if jigga let, you on his album, you sell wid a name like yours, whats Malice..
I can hear it now, Malice is to wack to release, i'll give you respect as much i give the police..
yo my bad this took so long.. i got carried away wit somethin else but here ya go........
Im GIFTED IN MY PROFESSONIAL EXSISTENCE while you 'Promotin ya verse' is like sellin TICKETS TO THE SPECIAL OLYMPICS!!!...
Im on top of em COLLAPSIN TILL THIS LITTLE BITCHES NECK HURTS cause ya punches are more ABSENT THEN YA AUDIO RECORD!!...
My FLOWS EXTORTIN, MURKIN ROUNDS EXPLOAD IN PORTIONS DISPERSEIN SOUND 'killin 'kids' wit punch lines' like PRO-ABORTION CIRCUS CLOWNS!!...
Im HITTIN RIOT KILLS blazed tracks STRICKIN FIRE DRILLS im DIPICTED IN VILE THRILLS sick in da head slippin Anorexic BITCHES DIET PILLS...
My INNOCCENT TACTICS 'rebuttal ya verse' and INTERCEPT'S 'BACK-FLIPS'(backflips) to crack ya spine onto an INDIRECT AXIS with SPLINTER WRECKED AXES! cause da only time he`s a WINNER WHO PACKS SHIT is bein a thug behind his INTERNET ACCESS...
I`ve TAKEN THE MAIN STEPS, to start RIPPIN THESE BITCHES got techs? im EQUIPED WIT THE QUICKEST and i kno that your 'scared to stand up to me' aint the only reason he SITS WHEN HE PISSES...
You got a WHACK WIT, that won`t LIVE TO SCORE I`ll have you shed more blood on ur "home" than the CIVIL WAR...
Get SMOKED IN MASS HPYE ill rip ya THROAT WIT GRAPHITE cause ur idea of 'gangster' is playin Star Wars wit a BROKEN FLASHLIGHT!...
hmm somethin different.. lets get some votez...
lines were wayyyyy stretched in this battle......so im not quoting shit...i'll just state the obvious....
NuE: you have a little bit shorter verse....but you had absolutely no connecting hard punches....or good up to date metaphors...all you have was multis and vocabulary...which doesnt carry you too far in a battle....suggestion: try shortening your bars and using better punches....
Malice: your bars were way too stretched.....you had punches within your verse...but nothing too stand out-ish.....update your metaphors a bit and throw harder punches with more compact bars....other than that nothing too shabby...except get rid of the CAPS in your lines also....
BreakDown
Punches - Malice
Personals - NuE...at least he mentioned his name
Creativity - Malice
Metaphors - Malice
RhymeScheme - Malice
Overall - Malice wins pretty easily....just for having better metaphors.....open was decent...although i've seen it before....but Nue Skillz didnt really throw a punch in his verse.....80% of it was just rhyming.....
Vote - Malice
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reasons:
Malice- u got this man. Ya verse was way stretched though, thats not goo when every line un ya verse is stretched. Ya vocab was good, wordplay was alittle off at times, structure-too damn long, ya metas was good, punches good, and personals was pretty good. U had an aight verse overall, enough to do it though.
Nue Skills- u had an aight verse as well, i just think malice came alittle harder. he made up for them long ass lines through his disses. U had aight vocab, better structure than malice, and maybe a tab better in the wordplay, well not really, they were both about the same. Everything else like vocab, metas, punches, and personals were all aight.
Vote- Malice
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peace
thanx for tha votez but u think u could hit up tha poll so it counts... thanx again.....
i aint hitten ya poll up till u give an honest one on y battle with keep hatin, the links on my voting post
uppin 2........ hti this up an i get back at urs.. thanx
uppin 3......................tryin to get this ova with
uppin this please vote 4
BreakDown
Punches - Malice
Personals - NuE.. dissing the name atleast
Creativity - Malice
Metaphors - Malice
RhymeScheme - Malice
Overall - Malice wins for a better verse
Malice Good punches hit quite hard but had no personals.. flow was good and some nice multis..nice creativity...
NuE.. didnt have that good of a verse.. the only thing you beat him on was Personals because you said his name... poor punches they were weak or didnt connect at all..
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My Assessment
Nue Sk!llz: man your punches were way off and personals pretty weak i liked ya multies and you had a decent vocab going but try to work that skill into good punches and personals as they are key factors to win battles, your flow was aight and your structure was decent and you need to try to have wow! attacks, but keep at it.
Malice: Ok spit but your lines were too stretched and work on makeing punches with less words and make them at the end of lines not the middle meta's need work and try to have multies if u had some that i didnt see then try to make em clear and stop with the CAPITOLS its not gonna help. but keep at it and elevation is iminant.
Overall: Both did good in some areas and weak in others but not consistant and thats wat both need to work on but keep at this.
My VOTE: Malice
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