You know the rules.
Dont break them
HOlla
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You know the rules.
Dont break them
HOlla
Aight yo
Look at "Flows" He sounds like a horny basterd//
Comeon man put up your best line,So go ahead and kill this nerd,
I told you B4 man dont be placin no commin and placin no bets//
Becuz my rhymes is going to confuse you you going to need a ciggeretts,
I can go on for days ,but when The battery keeps goin and goin//
But my rhymes keep transporting like niagra falls keep flowin,/
IM trying to tell you to calm down becuz I keep fuckin your mom with a freddy kruger sweater on,
But if they vote for me man remember its not my fault//
PLease man dont tell me you made when I fucked your sister and she turned into the incredible Hulk,
IM not going to ripp you and clean you up becuz you gey//
Even tho we both from the same place yo as disrespecting VA,
But hey man my its time for bed time and when its time to go its time to go//
I definitly feeling say leaving your record 2-1,
oops my bad I mess uped on some heres the remake
Aight yo
Look at "Flows" He sounds like a horny basterd//
Comeon man put up your best line,So go ahead and kill this nerd,
I told you B4 man dont be placin no commin and placin no bets//
Becuz my rhymes is going to confuse you you going to need some ciggeretts,
I can go on for days ,but when The battery keeps goin and goin//
But my rhymes keep transporting like niagra falls keep flowin,/
IM trying to tell you to calm down becuz I keep fuckin your mom with a freddy kruger sweater on,
But if they vote for me man remember its not my fault//
PLease man dont tell me you made when I fucked your sister and she turned into the incredible Hulk,
IM not going to ripp you and clean you up becuz you gey//
Even tho we both from the same place yo as disrespecting VA,
But hey man my its time for bed time and when its time to be done its time to be done//
I definitly feeling say leaving your record 2-1,
I definitly feeling *sad* leaving your record 2-1,
Oops I messed up again
Come on man ya rhymes is wack u cant be serious
You been smokin my shit ..its den got you delirious
You think you the hottest nigga out be fa real
NIgga i got skills im the 1 like faith hill
Im on them purple hill u puoppin them purple pills
You gettin real dizzy feeling like Eurkal feels
Cuz aint nobody next to I
What the hell u thinkin bout must be on that X like Ja
NIgga im from VA u know how i get down
Like the barrell on my .40 cal spin like a mary-go-round
Im still not feelin ya flows even if you puttin in more
I been runnin va so long my feet gettin soar nigga
Wow...
Punches-Super
Flow-inev
Multi-None
Personals-None
Meta-None
Opener-Super
Closer-None
Overal-Super
Wow this battle was really really bad, I am orry guys but come on now, keep your lines more even Super, you spit like a deranged person with a speech impediment.
Flows your stuff was cool but you really dident diss him at all, you basically concentrated on self glorification, please man, diss on your opponet.
Hit this up for me:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109090
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lol,alright nice try....Lol but anywayz.........uppin for votes.............uppin for votes....
Overall:Quote:
Originally Posted by Super Flows
You did horrible...but it was decent enough to beat Flows....i suggest you try harder more direct punches....drop the "//" and shorten your lines...
Overall:Quote:
Originally Posted by flowsinevitable
You had a better structure than Super Flows...but the rest needs working on badly...i suggest you make more direct hard punches and cocky remarks if you wish to get better.....
Vote - Super Flows
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uppin............uppin fo votes..........soI can make this kats record 0-1.......
what the hell is he talkin about.LOL lets be real.uppin fo votes..........uppin........uppin
uppin...........uppin....................uppin
Originally Posted by Super Flows
Look at "Flows" He sounds like a horny basterd//
Comeon man put up your best line,So go ahead and kill this nerd,
no, what was that lol
I told you B4 man dont be placin no commin and placin no bets//
Becuz my rhymes is going to confuse you you going to need some ciggeretts,
lol what? didnt make sense
I can go on for days ,but when The battery keeps goin and goin//
But my rhymes keep transporting like niagra falls keep flowin,/
filler, second was wack
IM trying to tell you to calm down becuz I keep fuckin your mom with a freddy kruger sweater on,
But if they vote for me man remember its not my fault//
PLease man dont tell me you made when I fucked your sister and she turned into the incredible Hulk,
lol...this was funny but still wack
IM not going to ripp you and clean you up becuz you gey//
Even tho we both from the same place yo as disrespecting VA,
personal......ok i guess
But hey man my its time for bed time and when its time to be done its time to be done//
I definitly feeling say leaving your record 2-1,
alrite personal........
Overal.......
u did bad, dont use // in ur bars and even ur flow
Quote:
Originally Posted by flowsinevitable
Come on man ya rhymes is wack u cant be serious
You been smokin my shit ..its den got you delirious
fillers
You think you the hottest nigga out be fa real
NIgga i got skills im the 1 like faith hill
alrite......
Im on them purple hill u puoppin them purple pills
You gettin real dizzy feeling like Eurkal feels
what?
Cuz aint nobody next to I
What the hell u thinkin bout must be on that X like Ja
sorry no
NIgga im from VA u know how i get down
Like the barrell on my .40 cal spin like a mary-go-round
alrite
Im still not feelin ya flows even if you puttin in more
I been runnin va so long my feet gettin soar nigga
wack
Superflow only lost in structure...........everything was on his side, flow coulda been beter tho
Vote: Super
Please hi tup 1 of my battels!
uppin fo votes.........you know I beat this kat.
Yo this is my last uppin#5......uppin.......uppin fo votes......
dang yo we died out becuz we made it to that 2 page
alright...vote super.....
why?
well...he had like summin to read, sum sort of basis of battle...
minimal punches an personals but the other guy was very very bad....
flowsin...dawg put sum meat in ya verse....an dont make it so mother goos'ish...
no hate to either one...jus say it how i see it....
vote- super....pc-1
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aight so he got me this time but come on people this niggas verses and rhymes is wack..half the shit dont even make sense...wut is u like 12? i mean come on..he got me but we can always battle again..so i can show u some real talent
ok 1st of all im not 12 and if I was 12 seemed like I killed you becuz yo votes is 0.Im not trying to hate on you so just leave me alone and keep saying uppin........but dont forget to not uppin more than 5 times becuz I want to show I can beat you.Also we can battle again and I will still murk you.SO Holla when you can.BUt for now I have to wait for this thread to be dont becuz I have 3 threads oppen.Holla
man this battle wasnt even close man i liked super flows the whole thing man maybe we should battle sometime man set it up and then ill post but far as this battle goes man super slows take this by far personals and punches keep it up and yall work at it
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alright thats fine I'll explain a little better....
vote- super..
Better overall....Flowsinevitable came very basic....
In the end Super came slightly better....but not by much...
His was more a battle verse....
Flowsin's sounded like a nursery ryhme...very plain n simple...
Super's punches....the few, hit harder than Flows....
Not much to go on here...
Both elevate....
Flowin...bring more verse out...
and Super...restructure an reword the way u say things..
no hate...now repoll my vote pc-1
votew super flows
not a very creative battle but he got this
thanks to harder punches wich also
stayed alot more consistent...your flow
fell of a little but not bad work on your structure
as it looked abit uneaven...unlike flows wich
was good with flow and structure but
it wasnt really a battle verse to be honest
it had no hard punches or shit...keep it up
MAKE SURE YOU HIT THIS UP NOW
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124997
thx.
Vote Both
Because you both came whack as hell I'll give you both a vote..
Da you cant vote for both of us you can only vote for one of us.Is you a newb or something
aight super wack u runnin ya mouf set up the battle and we'll do this again
aight yo..........................................
Still waitin for an honest peep for my vote............ppl should help eachother out in the fairest way
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124965
yo if you make an honest vote in this battle ill make an honest vote in yours.Holla
alrite i cant vote since i dont have enough posts
but if i did:
vote/super flows
man da other guys one was a bit basic
and super had better punches
...........
wow, this was horrible........
really bad from both.....
but Super Flows gets this...
Flowsinevitable...terrible verse
decent structure and flow,
but you had no punches or personals...
your drop was all filler...
go to the help center asap..
work on everything and try 2 elevate
Super yer verse was pretty bad too..
you should work on yer structure,
you came stretched and it fuck up
the flow..plus u should be more direct
still though u get this cuz,
you actually attempted punches
and you had a few weak personals...
be more creative and work on yer
punches and personals...
v/ Super Flows