Trogdor.........Versus..........YO YO YO

[Trogdor]

10 lines
I spit first
Hit this up honestly

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124845


Peace It

[YO YO YO]

check check check innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

[YO YO YO]

hurry up man im nearly done

[YO YO YO]

i am gona spit in 2 mins be quick

[YO YO YO]

Ma Lines belong on front..white boy ere im a make u black u gonna get burnt!
Trigdor belong in the farm so plz hold ur grunt... u cant jump and complete dis stunt!
I imagine u as the nxt vanilla ice on tv!
U another bitch so change ur name to bonnie!
Imagine u in a magazine o wait they would rename it a FAGazine!
The article 4 u would be renamed more "unseen of the new mr bean"
Trogdor u have a name which name which belongs on planet mars
Your soft like rubber and i aint talkin bout the ones in your moms drawers!
U spit 1st..ever since birth on earth..ma spits r runnin like pipes that r burst
lil bitch..u always hide..u mite as well put a bra on your pc screen since u love hiding!

[YO YO YO]

soz it got a bit scretched..wen the hell r u gonna spit

[Trogdor]

I wont make fun of your zero and ten record.......its bad enough Im facin u
you could say Im almost transparent....cuz your lines will pass right through
his sig says he's a Legend Killer......I guess the kinda one with out a defeat
stupid kid, u'd turn up the air condition if you were asked to hide the heat
elivate, get in shape....go to boot camp like Jenny Jones guests on her show
hardly raisin attention, always comin cheaper than Detroit Piston commercials
u have a lot to learn, but u can still leave, pretend this is a college lecture
this submarine hasnt even sunk yet.............so Im far frum under pressure
when u spit u simply blow, Yo's rhymes stick to his own face like gum bubbles
now one of us is bound to come ugly.......like spottin pairs of lesbian couples


And i have a feeling it will be you


Bye

[Trogdor]

up........nice spit

IM still waitin for an honest vote dude on this battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124845

[Rippar]

YO YO YO, that was a poor start. Your punchlines didn't were quite weak, and you used quite a lot of filler.
Some of your lines were quite lame such as:
FAGazine!, unseen of the new mr bean, etc.
You should try not to use filler an make your rhymes a bit more complex.

Trogdor, you had some hard hitting punchlines
Good start, dissin his record (gd personals), although could have been better
gd comeback about the "tv" lines
strong ending.

Vote: Trogdor

[lyricallyabbusiv]

whoa whoa whoa...merkingz..

yoyoyo got riped...
yoyoyo- ya shit waas weak....all fillers....no decent landing pucnehs..ur flow waz iight...ya sturcutre was off...n ya punches laked cretivity

trogdor- ur shit was tite...punches were good..u had da better structure...ya flow waz ok...n ya punches were nice...they were creative and thought ou...next tiem battle sum1 wit a slitely better record..lol...cuz u merked em!..

vote- trogdor...easily....

yoyoyo- elevate dawg...

[YO YO YO]

upinnnnnnn

[Trogdor]

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[Da Kid]

yo yo yo- u got murked homie. ur opener was wack and didnt even rhyme. ur punchlines were weak and corny as hell. u had a wack ass personel and just to let u know....ur mama jokes well punches never work. ur lines were streched and messed up ur flow and structure.

trogdor- ur verse was aight. liked ur opener about that dude record, good personel. ur punches hit hard and were pretty creative. ur structure and flow moved along good and u get mah vote formurkin this weak mc.

vote- trogdor

ayo vote for da battle in mah sig

[ILLunatic]

^Vote polled

[Trogdor]

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