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Your a wackness fanatic and arnt punch resitstent but cant reduce da habbit,
Terrorisin your rhyme wid no flow as dis battle mirros da fox vs Rabbit,
Your lyrics are exaused from dopeness like da ink neva left ur pen you claim unlogically,
1,000 plus posts but u still call out newb's like ur laim Biologically,
Kautious hidden his battle rec from da public coz da losin cloume is trebble figers,
Hes wack cant drop a verb or kill his rhyme but he's a wonab reble nigga,
He needs dis win to see dat 1 in his winnin' colume but he can only hulosinate,
Fake to a state the world can see, he jacked over his rhyme but couldnt jackulate,
Kautious is da RB's kickbag and is still getin' smashed by herb rhyme consistenly,
Words from his mouth are week and MC's kilin' him wid there weekest shit lyrically
Okay! okay! Im…
Seized to belive im sorry for battling wack n weak new-bies like you…
Taking his name from 8-mile~ thought his “future” was to rap to! …|
But you fake bitch… n I can see ‘write’ through yea-thoughts…
Got this battle locked like mods…
and he caught killin him self being his own artery clots… |
Hex is a hazard to no one like false conjecture to forecasts…
U disappear fast…
Im sum what at heavy state on a kill em ‘die-it’ rate eating light weight food mass…|
You’ll Never last… leave this bitch in tha dark like light switching currency …
His life’s on the net… and im sure cut it off like surgery…
Claiming to his providers he’s in real connection of emergency… |
N like movie serial killa’s I would murda ya scripts wit determined disturbancy…
tha first bar was in reffrence to when "opsilite future" "miki phifer" was rapping in the under ground garage
"But a "hex" on you.. snap that neck on you"
i think thats how it goes.. lol i havn't seen that shit for a year
Aight..
HeXen ~ This was an alright verse. You had nice vocab, your flow was fine, and structure was set up alright too. However, the punches were where I thought were weak. Dont get me wrong, you had some good ones, but comparing the 2 verses, you came weaker in my opinion. Once again, I emphasize on vocab, you did a nice job with that. Saw a few multis, which were ok, i guess overall, I look mostly at personals and punches..you had a few good ones, but most kinda blah.
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Kautious ~ Ok, you loaded up on the punches here, and you had some catchy lines. Your verse was just overall more complete and well put together. Got some laughs outta the 8-mile thing, and liked the creativity you added in, and lots of wordplay...you just came harder. Only thing I'd suggest, and I'm only sayin this becuz I've been told to do the same, is to not space out your bars..I did that when I first got here, and got structure hits for it...just a tip for both of ya actually, but directed towards K.Quote:
Originally Posted by HeXen
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Nice battle to both, but K gets my vote..peace.Quote:
Originally Posted by Kautious
vote-Kautious
uppin 1
lol vote K had better flow nice ishness on double P's..........
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Hex had long bars and wasnt witty enough and thats not good.......
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.......................................i mean K gets a 7/10......................
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other kid gets 6/10 so you kno who wins just by that ish.............
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vote/K for having better everything and for injoyment.............
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....................hit this up dont forget aight dogg...............................
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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119681
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uppin 2 :D
uppin on the votes
im a holla atchya battles when i get back on
Tsk Tsk Tsk Kautious..
Cant believe you still battle in front lines..and not atleast elevated..you been here long enough..
Haxen you came a lil weak i was feeling you verse in the beinning but i felt off a lil bit in the middle but ur punchlines was ok and ur personals
Kautious - for you the same you came a lil soft too and i wasn't feel you and u need to work on your wordplay and ur personals dawg
My vote goes to Hexen
return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120819
aight
hex - ur verse wasnt bad, you had some good punches and a few personals, ur lines were long but atleast a good punch come out of it. ya flow was ok and structure wasnt very good but wasnt bad
k - i thought u verse was ok but u didnt get enough good personals in there, your flow was good though, but u didnt have very good wordplay. structure wasnt set out as well as it could of been..
vote / hex
plz plz vote on my battle i need to get it closed
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119611
In my opinion this was a very close battle but neither verses were all that good. Hexen you seemed to put more thought in to each line before you confirmed it was gonna be posted. YOu need to work on your diction though... just seemed like you were putting words in places that you weren't quite sure they would fit, but you did it anyways just to progress.
Kautious I enjoyed your wordplay because it is quite unique but some of the words you used made little sense IMO, you had some decent structure along with hexen... it almost seemed like u used hex's structure as a basis for yours. I found you were doing the same thing hex was with the wording thing . . . just sticking words in places for the fact that you just wanted 2 use them.. didn't have adequate or.. potent filler...
You both need 2 work on your flow and diction but other than that I see not too many other noteworthy flaws.
lol phix if been gone for about a month or so so im ju sgetting back at itQuote:
Tsk Tsk Tsk Kautious..
Cant believe you still battle in front lines..and not atleast elevated..you been here long enough..
im a batle in elvated and drop suthin on ya'll
and what the fuck i used his verse as a base for structure??
nah man thats my style and make a vote not a freepost please
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yo uppin.....
Hex-
Your a wackness fanatic and arnt punch resitstent but cant reduce da habbit,
Terrorisin your rhyme wid no flow as dis battle mirros da fox vs Rabbit,
If I could understand what you were trying to say I might think the opener was ok... but it was so disjointed it kinda throws the whole verse off
Your lyrics are exaused from dopeness like da ink neva left ur pen you claim unlogically,
1,000 plus posts but u still call out newb's like ur laim Biologically,
wtf was this? this was the worst rhyming punch I've ever seen. talk about unnecessary syables and making no sense... I got what you were trying to say with the vet punch but it wasn't a punch man... it was retarded.
Kautious hidden his battle rec from da public coz da losin cloume is trebble figers,
Hes wack cant drop a verb or kill his rhyme but he's a wonab reble nigga,
He needs dis win to see dat 1 in his winnin' colume but he can only hulosinate,
Fake to a state the world can see, he jacked over his rhyme but couldnt jackulate,
lol... this was horrible. the lines don't make sense or link. You threw misspelled words together and tried to make a verse that didn't work. And what the hell does jackulate mean. Cuz I've never heard that term used to decribe 'ejaculate'... maybe if a three year old said it...
I'm not gonna finish the verse out, it was horrible man. learn to spell and make sense.
Kautious-
Okay! okay! Im…
Seized to belive im sorry for battling wack n weak new-bies like you…
Taking his name from 8-mile~ thought his “future” was to rap to! …|
k... but where's the punch?
But you fake bitch… n I can see ‘write’ through yea-thoughts…
Got this battle locked like mods…
and he caught killin him self being his own artery clots… |
concept kinda works... mods line is okay
Hex is a hazard to no one like false conjecture to forecasts…
U disappear fast…
Im sum what at heavy state on a kill em ‘die-it’ rate eating light weight food mass…|
not really...
You’ll Never last… leave this bitch in tha dark like light switching currency …
His life’s on the net… and im sure cut it off like surgery…
Claiming to his providers he’s in real connection of emergency… |
N like movie serial killa’s I would murda ya scripts wit determined disturbancy…
forced rhymes nothing too impressive here.
your style is a bit different, it's not great but not horrible, you gotta do what works for you. But the verse was better than Hex's because you had the only punch of the battle and well.... in was almost in english??
vote- Kautious
uppin for votes 3# i think
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This is how I saw the battle
Kautious: you had a gud flow with nice wordplay and variation in your verse, you had a gud vocabulairy;you had sum ok punches that came thru hard; i would like to see more personals, you had sum but not so much; your structure was aight
HeXen: you had an ok flow with sum gud rhymes but you didn't have a lot of variation in your verse and your voc. was kinda off; your punches didn't came so hard as Kautious but they were aight; you hardly had punches and they were played, you need to work on this; your structure was aight; your nice but not gud, still need to elevate
Vote: Kautious, return the favur man, check my battle in my signature, thx.............
uppin this n thx for voting i'll reply tonight
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Yo I got to give this to Kautious he came thought withe punches that was connecting
just right and the personals took over the battle both of you can work on
yall structure the flow was ok also but
My vote go to K
return the favor
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122456
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last uppin i think
im a half to rep this in my sig lmao this shit ain't dun yet!
hexen, wtf was that
that shit made no sense, the punches were forced rhymes
you had no similes, no creativity, work on that
you tried to use good vocab but it was garbage and didnt make sense
and also no personasl
so my vote goes to kautiousm cause he some decent punches, like his opener
he had wordplay with this line:" Im sum what at heavy state on a kill em ‘die-it’ rate eating light weight food mass…|"
better flow, so better all around
v/k for haing more creativity and hainvg more understanble punches
Kautious
your flow was pretty good. and you had some nice wordplay
vocab was also good.some ok punches, could of been better tho..not enough personals tho, overall not a bad verse
HeXen
your flow was kinda ok, but you didnt come very creative and you didnt have very good punches or personals, none of your punches really hit your opponent, work on them, structure wasnt great either and ya need better vocab.
v/ K for a better verse..
return the favour on my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134016