ok
10 lines
blindspit
30 mins to spit after checkin in
dont be late
normal rulz
YO YO YO
JONESY_UK
ok
10 lines
blindspit
30 mins to spit after checkin in
dont be late
normal rulz
check check check check check innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
ok checkin in............just post within 20 mins from now.................
dont worry i got bout 4 more lines to do den im done and ill be spittin
Jonesy...u probally a fatty...dats still doesnt mean u spit heavy!
U dont spit yo.....u just love to swallow!
Jonesy u cant beat me in ur dreamland..heavy boy go join a rock band!
U dont spit u drool...just like u do afta missin da ice cream man!
I heard betta mutha fucka.....u words dont cum rite cuz u always chewin on a letter
Bad all the way to the bone...i have the throne..u just gettin thrown out my zone
Your lyrics should be " i ate all the pies the pizzas and the fries"
Open your eyes and realise that im the future franchise
It aint no mystery....dat u now history....im gettin the votes in dis rap city
U behave..u were brave...diggin ur own grave...bye bye arent u gonna wave!
i aint done 12 lines its just gone on to da nxt line wid 1 word each
ight
YO YO YO check dis newbie, ill spit a greenie on this joke
I read yours posts they say 106 and you still aint got 1 vote.
You not a rapper cos Mc’s aint d/r’s and they aint haters
So Take this application form fill it in, return to KFC cos they need some waiters.
You getting votes against you like bin laden would, if he ran for US president
You wouldn’t get respect if you gave a million dollars to every US resident.
Verses you drop are so clean and holy, a vicar could use um in a church ceremony.
In fact become a priest, a sad lonely cunt, and live your life obeying the ten commandment’s
Your loses make you ‘’WEEK’, cos I see your battle record is wins 0 loses 7.
No worries, cos once I kill you in this battle GOD knows you’re a bible basher, he has a place for you in heaven
ok votes plz
nice drop jonesy........ummm can somebody start votin..........
not bad from both really, ya flows were off though I tried getting em to a beat but neither flowed.
Ya wordplay was good but jonesy was better, he had harder hits aswell so ima vote for him....
keep it up and check yo battle call outs cuz I want next....peace!
ok man could u poll your vote,.............................
uppin x1...............please dont sleep on this
more votes needed in ere.............................
ok uppin x2............dont sleep on this, i will drop an honest vote on yours if you vote on this..........
kinda weak..
Yoyoyo - I'm seeing a re-occuring thing with you.. you always come pretty weak. And everything u say is usually always pretty lame. I don't what to tell you.. u aren't taking advice and feedback. You need better punches, flow, structure, creativity.. everything
Jonesy- wasn't terrible.. but wasn't great.. you had an ok punch here and there which yoyo did not. You're flow was off at times.. structure needs help.. need some better ideas and need to word ur lines alot better to make them hit better. Overall ok.. keep getting better
vote- jones
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extremely weak battle. i almost thought this was two vets purposely dropping weak and fucking around, lol. but yall are still elevating so ... i guess it was ok battle.
but jonesy gets my vote, for more direct punches, and making his verse in a much better structure that i could understand...keep battling guys. vote on other peoples battles. yo yo yo lost this because some of his lines didn't rhyme, and some were extremely weak punches like that ice cream thing.
vote jones
Weak Shit!
Yo Yo Yo - Punches were shit.. No, actually it was diariah. Shit was so soft, and runny. I couldnt' wait for it to end. Everything was just.. Blah! Enough said.
Jonesy_UK - Punches were soft, but hit harder than other kids. Flow was also better, structure made him look stupid, even though it could use work. You need to elevate, but.. you still got this won..
^That was your best bar.. Compeletely WACK!Originally Posted by YO YO YO
^Best line, but you really need to elevate.. Other kid.. just, needs to quit
V/Jonesy_UK
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