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10-14 lines
blind spit
35 minutes to post upon check in
good luck
check in.
good luck man.....
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peace
check 1, check 2..................................
Ace of Aces...bitch that's redundant, like the concepts you're bringing..
Ironic how you include your name twice...
but don't have half a chance of winning!
Imprinting my foot on ya forehead...so atleast you're marked by skill
And i would cut you down in your prime...
shit, it was past when Rhyme Reapers were active still!
A wack crews blood spilled...these days RB's getting a bit outta hand
surprised you had the courage to come back...
after being pink slipped, massacred, and banned!
Always bland text ya spitting...shitty you returned, wish you were idle
You're wack, easy to read between the lines...
Each time you drop shit doesn't warrant a title!
But write novels, fine...hope ya satisfied with being an under-achiever
Slicing and leaving ya deceased...
'till you're justified for repping a Griever!
And i'm a true believer...in the ideas of fate and destiny, i swear...
But bitch, you were banned...
I thought I HAD woke up from the Nightmare!
heyyy, post man! and don't vote if you don't understand things...like my final fantasy reference. lol
Check it…
Meter has an avatar with an ‘eagle,’ cuz it’s about as ‘bald’ as his ability
Luckily rappin’ isnt the way to make babies cuz you wuld face infertility
'Subtract' a mind from you and you'd be placed with 'negative' thoughts
If losing were like bein hit by a car then you'd be tastin' pavement a lot
Your words are in 'disorder without sense’ and you aren't even ‘dyslexic’
I could place a bet against him on this battle and even he would accept it
Don’t neglect it, every diss about a being a noob is a personal about you
Face it son, you still wouldnt be a “Vet” if that were the name of ya crew
It wouldn’t make much a difference, if this battle turned into a “topical”
You can tell by the verses that the topic is: “How Meter Lossed- a-Poll”
Hmm, this wasnt that bad of a battle, both are pretty god emcees, here's my breakdown..
Ace of Aces ~
Meter has an avatar with an ‘eagle,’ cuz it’s about as ‘bald’ as his ability
Luckily rappin’ isnt the way to make babies cuz you wuld face infertility
LOL, first line was nice opener, 2nd was ok...nice start
'Subtract' a mind from you and you'd be placed with 'negative' thoughts
If losing were like bein hit by a car then you'd be tastin' pavement a lot
eh, good punch, i'll give it to ya thats its creative..
Your words are in 'disorder without sense’ and you aren't even ‘dyslexic’
I could place a bet against him on this battle and even he would accept it
not bad, good punch in second line
Don’t neglect it, every diss about a being a noob is a personal about you
Face it son, you still wouldnt be a “Vet” if that were the name of ya crew
wasnt feelin this one..dont mean it wasnt bad...
It wouldn’t make much a difference, if this battle turned into a “topical”
You can tell by the verses that the topic is: “How Meter Lossed- a-Poll”
..prolly the weakest bar in my opinion..last line picked it up a lil
6/10
Meters ~
Ace of Aces...bitch that's redundant, like the concepts you're bringing..
Ironic how you include your name twice...
but don't have half a chance of winning!
that was a badass opener lol
Imprinting my foot on ya forehead...so atleast you're marked by skill
And i would cut you down in your prime...
shit, it was past when Rhyme Reapers were active still!
the whole footprint line is so played out already, even though you worded it differently..but not a bad bar
A wack crews blood spilled...these days RB's getting a bit outta hand
surprised you had the courage to come back...
after being pink slipped, massacred, and banned!
good personal..kinda weak tho
Always bland text ya spitting...shitty you returned, wish you were idle
You're wack, easy to read between the lines...
Each time you drop shit doesn't warrant a title!
ehh..wasnt feelin this bar, although you had a good opening goin..just thought ya lost it in the end there..
But write novels, fine...hope ya satisfied with being an under-achiever
Slicing and leaving ya deceased...
'till you're justified for repping a Griever!
nice man
And i'm a true believer...in the ideas of fate and destiny, i swear...
But bitch, you were banned...
I thought I HAD woke up from the Nightmare!
I like how you flowed 'believer' from the last bar 'Griever' ... not bad punch
7.5/10
Reasons: Ace of Aces, you came pretty good man, however I think that Meters came a lil more creative. Both of you had nice openers and creativity..just saw more personals and punches in Meters, but not by much. A suggestion to both..get rid of the ' stuff, Ive gotten the same suggestions in other battles..makes it more clean I guess. Also, Meters, you almost over-used the "banned" thing a lil, but nice job to both.
Vote: Meters
Please hit up this battle, I took the time for you guys, thanks.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118894
well then... im gonna have to vote=meters, i liked his opening punch... started it off decent, felt tho that it sorta went downhill from there, most of the other punches didnt really hit very hard... but Ace, wasnt felling yours either sorta went the same way from the opener... so im going on humour, on this and a bit more creativity by meters
Vote doesn't count.
-Axe
Honestly,
I'm suprised by ace of spades....
(yes it's you don't deny it....your the only one wit them lil Final Fantasy Sigs:))
You didn't come really hard here....
Str8 from the start when u started wit the eagle i could tell u had writers block...
I mean look....It aint an eagle....:)
Meters,
You came ok. Not a huge fan of your style but i respect it,
You had some nice personal's an punches. Definitly brought more to the table here.
Flowed well.
My vote Meter's no hate :)
Upping, upping, like whoa.........................
ill vote on this battle if u vote on my battle cuz im tired of voting and no one
returnin the favor iight so vote on my battle and ill vote on this ...okay thank u
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119302
I forgot how gay front lines is. Upping again.. : \ ....
Sheesh. You know you want to vote on this!!.........
Upping number four, .up, up...............................
damn i thaught this was a heated battle,
meters shit man youve elavted loads not as good a,
drop as your lll.jr match up but didnt need it man,
dope punches opener was whoa man...flow was there,
fell of abit but still ok wordplay lil non exsistent but a dope verse man,
ace expected more man no real hard punches and,
shit wordplay your structure was good but not a good vers,
in my opinion meters man plz hiut this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119659 thx alot......
MY VERDICT
This was an aight battle but nothing special could of been betta.
Meters: You had an ok spit but i didnt like your structure or ryhmes tecneque it was a little off for me and didnt flow very well remember this is a text battle so your cant write words down that have to be pronounced different to rhyme it has to technically rhyme but overall i found your attacks good but no punches that stood out and looked kinda played. 5/10
my favourite line:
"But write novels, fine...hope ya satisfied with being an under-achiever
Slicing and leaving ya deceased...
'till you're justified for repping a Griever!"
Ace: you did quite well , your flow was decent and easy to read and enjoyable that way plus good punches and not many personals but still good attacks on him your structure was good but you should of done atleast 2 more lines just to clinch and finish him off but still you did better in my perspective. 7/10
my favourite line:
"Meter has an avatar with an ‘eagle,’ cuz it’s about as ‘bald’ as his ability
Luckily rappin’ isnt the way to make babies cuz you wuld face infertility"
Whooops so sorry my vote goes to : ACE OF ACES
^ never vote on one of my battles. Ever. Again.
And last upping! Wot wot.
lovely battle. thanx for voting peepz. uppin.
peace
Good Battle I Thought..
Meters: You had a nice verse...I liked the opener of it, it was real nice....your verse has good flow to it though it did get off for me at a few spots....your structure threw me off at first but I caught on to it, didnt quite like the structure of it though...but you did have some nice punches in there.
Ace Of Aces: Nice verse as well...you also had a nice opener to start off your verse, it was pretty nice...had some nice punches in there, I liked the 2nd bar it was pretty nice....I liked the closer of it, it seemed alright, decent way to close it...the flow was pretty good in your verse, kinda got off for me a bit as well...structure was easy to follow.
Overall: A good close battle...both of you came good in this I thought, it was a nice battle...Meters you had a good verse and so did you Ace...Close call, but I think Im gonna give it to Ace for having just a bit better punches through out his verse, both did have some good multies but Im giving it to Ace. Props to both though.
^thanx for the vote. uppin this for some more.
please vote.
thanx.
peace
This was a heavy match up and i'm not lying. Punches were thrown all over the place. This here was a slugfeast but there can oly be one winner.
Meters took it for me.
The opening line was too much and set the tone for what was to come.
The structure was good and it seemed to me that his shit was more creative.
Your style was easy to read but not too simple.
Ace you fought well man but verse seemed a little stretched and after a while I wanted to hurry up and finnish reading,regardless of this the wordplay was good and yo weren't just talking shit.
This was tight but.......
vote.......meters
:huh:
Are you all just dumb...
...Or ... IDK?
Ace of Aces...bitch that's redundant, like the concepts you're bringing..
Ironic how you include your name twice...
but don't have half a chance of winning!
LOL!
Meters came way better...
...Ace was using all these multi's that had no effect whatsoever.
Meter has an avatar with an ‘eagle,’ cuz it’s about as ‘bald’ as his ability
Luckily rappin’ isnt the way to make babies cuz you wuld face infertility
That's worth quoting??? Nah, didn't think so.
Meters won this for much better punches, wittiness, personals, and better wording.
V/Meters
ok the way i see it,
Meters: u had a good verse mayne, the flow, the vocab, the wordplay, and the ryhmes was good. I like the way ya write ya verses, lik the aba ryhmes scheme shit, but the only thing that kind abugged me was the way u used the little things about Ace, in little ways. Like some of the disses were just a tab weak against him, ur closer was the most weak out of the few u had.
Ace of Aces- I liked ur verse alot as well, i like ihow u went in depth with ya disses, which meaned ya lines were stretched, but i dont find nothing wrong with using stretched lines. ya wordplay, ya vocab, and ryhmes was all nice. Its hard trying to make stretched lines actually sound right, and u did that, u made them sound right, and for that u got my vote.
vote: Ace of Aces
can one of yall hit the battle up between me and cannabarz, thanks.
meters-ya came pretty strong i could tell, u had sum mad played lines, and sum of them didnt even rhyme, i didnt see any good punches or personals, flow and structure was ok overall good verse
aces of ages-i can tell u came with ur A game too, i saw sum played lines in ur verse as well, u had sum good punches and personals good flow and structure was good
overall this was a close battle but i was feeling ur verse better that metters so
VOTE aces
Punches - Meters
wordplay - Meters
creativity - Meters
structure - Meters
Overall - Meters
his punches and wordplay is better...I don't like how he switched his style but it was still dominated by him .. not one sided tho .. Just came better.
vote on this battle in return.
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Vote dq'd, for some reason the automatic post editor is not working
-ILLunatic
After counting up the votes, Meters wins.