blind spit
10-12 lines
due 30-mins after checkin
no crew votes etc. etc.
good luck timeless
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blind spit
10-12 lines
due 30-mins after checkin
no crew votes etc. etc.
good luck timeless
that was my check in^^^
checkin in........................................
heres my spit
yo fuck this bitch ass wannabe emcee
trien to be like everyone u see on tv
eminem, dr dre, 50, and jay-z
when the person u should wanabe like is me
u should be my apprentice, my helper, my golf caddy
man id to embarassed to even say im ur daddy
look at his battle record then look at mine
but ur gonna lose this one, ur all out of 'time'
u say ur a poet with words, dont make any sence
what am i sayin your brain has a few dents
i looked at ur other battle and there pure shit
its finally the end of this blind spit
Ok lets go again....
Another shit herb, who will never be smokein. Even tho he’s brand new
You’re a joke to rb, coz cleaning ships, is the only time ya maid a crew
Sickspitta’s like a voiceless mcees when spittin, he’s only shootin blanks
A tougher fact, anal sex with army boys, is the only time u going up a rank
Lol ya a fake ass white boy, your from Columbus, u must be the only ones
I spit ace, and flow like the runs, so I’m putting an end to your case, like sex with guns
You should just stand back ,and leave the battling to men, or you’ll get hurt
Your like a stuck up girl with a rich daddy, coz your defiantly getting merked
Another newb on a rap site, wahts that? ya should get your shit and leave
ohh and G the only time you should wrap, I s birthdays and christmas eve
Ya pore's spread and let the sweat give away ya fuckin emmotional status
So spitta I’ll leave you stuck with this loss, like I was throwin' a cactus
ok nice battle uppin for votes.........
hott verse by timeless...
time- had good punches and personals
the flow was on point and it made the verse easy to read.......structure was good and the opener and closer was good
good verse.....keep gettin better
sik- really didnt do nothin for me...had a newbish verse
no punches or personals
flow was bad and the strtcuture was pretty bad
no flow made it hard to understand...elevate and get better
v/timeless
sig......links......VOTE!
thanks, ill vote on yours very soon!! afta i finish my driving theory test in bout 30 minz!!
uppin.............................................
yo fuck this bitch ass wannabe emcee
trien to be like everyone u see on tv
weak...no real punch...too generalized
eminem, dr dre, 50, and jay-z
when the person u should wanabe like is me
No punch...first line is filler and second isn't a diss...refrain from talking bout yourself in ya verse...focus on dissin ya opponent
u should be my apprentice, my helper, my golf caddy
man id to embarassed to even say im ur daddy
whack!
look at his battle record then look at mine
but ur gonna lose this one, ur all out of 'time'
whack attempt at a personal
u say ur a poet with words, dont make any sence
what am i sayin your brain has a few dents
weak
i looked at ur other battle and there pure shit
its finally the end of this blind spit
weak
Another shit herb, who will never be smokein. Even tho he’s brand new
You’re a joke to rb, coz cleaning ships, is the only time ya maid a crew
meh...ok...lil stretched
Sickspitta’s like a voiceless mcees when spittin, he’s only shootin blanks
A tougher fact, anal sex with army boys, is the only time u going up a rank
whack....1st line is mad played...and SEX/GAY JOKES ARE A NO NO!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lol ya a fake ass white boy, your from Columbus, u must be the only ones
I spit ace, and flow like the runs, so I’m putting an end to your case, like sex with guns
stretched...ok
You should just stand back ,and leave the battling to men, or you’ll get hurt
Your like a stuck up girl with a rich daddy, coz your defiantly getting merked
weak
Another newb on a rap site, wahts that? ya should get your shit and leave
ohh and G the only time you should wrap, I s birthdays and christmas eve
mad played
Ya pore's spread and let the sweat give away ya fuckin emmotional status
So spitta I’ll leave you stuck with this loss, like I was throwin' a cactus
pretty good
Vote=Timeless for a verse more consistent with punches and personals and also a harder hitting verse
I normally break down my votes, line for line, but no need in this battle. This was slaughter. Sik was way too basic. He had one decent attempt at a punche. Besides that, he got merked. Time had way mor/better punches. So Timeless gets my vote for better punches.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic
Oh, and please drop honest votes here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119048
Oh god..
Too basic to even compare to Timeless' verse..
Outdone in every category..
Time, your lines where stretched, hoe.. :)..
v/ Time..
Pz..
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic
boooooo. 4-0 to 2-0!! anyway uppin.......................
uppin.............................................
Repay the vote on my battle, please..
Im sure I voted on this.. :)..
I will vote on this battle if you vote on the battles here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119117
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118816
I will return a honest vote if you give me one
peace
Time - nice punches, flow, structure, and vocab was nice, good drop, u came hard and i feel it got u the win id say 17/20
Sik - ur verse was a lil newbish, no punches, flow was descent, but really had no personals, so thats why im going with Time on this one no hate dawg.. 13/20
vote Timeless
can yall return the fav. ill poll when i reach 100
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...60#post1212160
Punches: Time, pretty weak punches but much better than sick's
Wordplay: Time, although played as fuck, wrap is wordplay
Multis: Neither, both had only 1 syllables
Personals: Neither, no personals
Opener: Tie, both were weak
Closer: Tie, both finished weak
Vote - Timeless
Very weak battle, I've seen a lot better from timeless, and sikspitta is just overall weak. You need to actually make punches sikspitta, and timeless, your punches were off a fuck. Try harder or something.
Ya pore's spread and let the sweat give away ya fuckin emmotional status
^^^ Rhymed nicely, good vocab, is all I can say
uppin.............................................
very weak battle thought that timeless could have done much better with his opener and his finisher, he could of tried to ass better punchlines , and add multies.
silk spit ya verse was all weak u didnt have punchlines at least time less put puchlines,
u didnt have good mutlies 1 syllable mutlies that weak,
line from timeless:
PRETTY WEAKQuote:
Sickspitta’s like a voiceless mcees when spittin, he’s only shootin blanks
A tougher fact, anal sex with army boys, is the only time u going up a rank
Lol ya a fake ass white boy, your from Columbus, u must be the only ones
I spit ace, and flow like the runs, so I’m putting an end to your case, like sex with guns
You should just stand back ,and leave the battling to men, or you’ll get hurt
line from slikspit:
VERY VERY WEAKQuote:
should be my apprentice, my helper, my golf caddy
man id to embarassed to even say im ur daddy
look at his battle record then look at mine
but ur gonna lose this one, ur all out of 'time'
Punches: Time, pretty weak(but okay)
Wordplay: Time
Multis: Neither,
Personals: Neither, no personals
Opener: Tie, both werent good
Closer: Tie, both thought could have been better
vote- timeless
please return the favor in one of my battles please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119199
can u return the favor in this battle thread please :) thank u ^^^
aight this was a weak battle, sik that was a weak verse with no punches at all, you need to put more personals in it and get better wordplay.
time- some punches in the rhyme, some good lines, but you played a few. you need more personals in, you didnt get any in.
v/ time
ok drop an honest vote on mine plz
uppin.....................................come on 1 more vote!!!
time less can u vote on this battle please so i can get it closed out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118714
uppin............................................. ...
come on 1 more vote needed!!! be cool and vote. please. this is gettin major slept on!!!!
Well Timeless killed the kid.
sikspita- that was a typical newbish verse, nothing at all in it. But if you stick around you will get better. Dont talk about yourself, and think outside the box. Try get some multis in there and yeh :) ELEVATE
Timeless- ah not bad. Some shit was nice. Good opener and Closer. Your lines were a bit strached taking away from the connection of the punches. But you showed plenty to win this by a landslide.
V\Timeless