Cannabarz .v. (.iLL.)

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Here is a present for everyone presently in pressence//
And a tip..next time wash ur hair with Herbal Essence//*
You're the ugly proof that there was life on mars//
I re-read ya shit.. and I suggest ya Cann-ya-barz//**
You're 'new to RB' .. so that makes you a rappin youngster//
Last time I "posted" near garbage, i was puttin flyers on dumpsters//

So...

Whatever my sick spits hit, its usually drastic shit//
This plastic bitch, couldnt 'compare' in a matching outfit//
And if you even bother to reply, i'll sigh and wonder why//
how you try to become a rap star overnight//

Explanations..for those that need it
*making a diss on her pic in her sig
**aka "can your barz" (as in get rid of em).. her name is Cannabarz

Pe@ce

aiiight .. i hope they still remember

got ya victory dropped-in-the-mud an' stepped-wit-a-boot
afta this battle, ill's records gunna 'tie' like a gentlemens-suit!
Fuck a body-guard, after this .. your 'thread-in-the-stealh'
An when the mention '.iLL.', it's in the sense of 'medical help'
all ya wackness, is blowin white' like Oragami 'doin-an-orgi'!
and fuk battlin an givin an 'L' when ya names 'doin-it-for-me!
"brrraatt" ... ya loosin it homey, like ya 'seein-a-hummer'
victories goin down the drain, shoulda thought of 'bein-a-plummer!'
Your punches are missin more points, than 'manic discussions'
Fuckin 'holdin ya pride', ya chest hangin out like 'janet-and-justin!'
you not-iLL, nor-skilled your punches are like 'runnin-with-agents'..
now can gotta' tell the doc he missed 'one-of-his-patients' ! ..

lol .. word fam .. holla bak .

DAMN ILL U SUCK .....LOL.....J/P

FAV LINE FROM ILL:

Quote:

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I re-read ya shit.. and I suggest ya Cann-ya-barz//**
You're 'new to RB' .. so that makes you a rappin youngster//
Last time I "posted" near garbage, i was puttin flyers on dumpsters//

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FAV LINE FORM CANNAN:

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Fuck a body-guard, after this .. your 'thread-in-the-stealh'
An when the mention '.iLL.', it's in the sense of 'medical help'
all ya wackness, is blowin white' like Oragami 'doin-an-orgi'!
and fuk battlin an givin an 'L' when ya names 'doin-it-for-me!

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BREAKDOWN:
MULTIES:TIE
FLOW:CAN
ENJOY:CAN
PUCHLINES:CAM
OVERALL VOTE AND POLL VOTE:CANN

Um..
Please
Put
In votes
Now

Thanks! lol

Gotta throw to Ill...

Cann came with a couple of played lines that really hurt him in a battle this close...

Anything "Janet/nipple/exposed" is already played to death, if ya didn't spit it the week after Super Bowl, ya spit it too late.

Ill was pretty witty...
I like funny.

The "dumpster" and "matching outfit" lines sealed this for me.

Funny, and at the same time, effective.

But still real close, this was not near a shaming of any kind.

Peace

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will vote honestly for urs, vote honestly here!!!

victories goin down the drain, shoulda thought of 'bein-a-plummer!'

i really like dat line so my vote is goin to cann

mods plz dq that shit..2 line explanation?

yo yo yo..you need to explain your shit man, read the voting rules.

Rewind-
ill- u had sum great lines let me recap dem

You're the ugly proof that there was life on mars//
I re-read ya shit.. and I suggest ya Cann-ya-barz//**

dat was funny

but canz took ya
he had better lines
victories goin down the drain, shoulda thought of 'bein-a-plummer!'
Your punches are missin more points, than 'manic discussions'
Fuckin 'holdin ya pride', ya chest hangin out like 'janet-and-justin!'
you not-iLL, nor-skilled your punches are like 'runnin-with-agents'..
now can gotta' tell the doc he missed 'one-of-his-patients' ! ..

i dont care dq my vote if u want..but i think canz did take dis one

Ill

weak verse....
spit more of the lines in your sig and you'd be ill....
you were very corny in here....sorry :)

Cannabarz

Nice wordplay on the opening bar.(no one gets it ofcourse)
Overall pretty good, alot more creative. not feeling that bar-style-shit-though.

Cannabarz takes this easy,
Any vet knows it.
Problem is, they don't vote anymore.....:)

no hate to either vote Canna

true that ..... .................................................. .................................................. ...........don't know what happened to cats like Mu Ling Ha, beetle, Lyric ali .. and all that .. anyways, upping.

Ill: You had a good way of starting, wasn't feeling your structure, stop using all the "//"
your flow wasn't as good as canna's was, you tied with personals, but u were definitely more creative.

Canna:Good structure and flow overall, but i your verse didn't do anything for me except for "victories goin down the drain, shoulda thought of 'bein-a-plummer!', and that's still kinda played, i also wasn't feeling your starter or closers. So let's add this up. Good personals.

Flow-Can
Structure-Can
Personals-Tie
Starter-Ill
Creativity-Ill
Punches-Ill
Closer-Ill

i pleed for you to vote on all three of my battles, the first 2 have been going on for 2 months, and the second has been going on for a week, but do your best to vote on all of them, you made a deal that you'd vote, so at least vote on 2 of them

lol where the hell have u ever heard a line even close to that? lol .. it's aiight tho, 2-2 tie . fam ..

can took this with more creative punchlines it was a close battle throughout but i felt like can came harder with mulites, personals and disses that hit ill hard

ill just came straight up weak you could use alot of improvement

drop a vote in this battle can http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...47#post1262547

upping .................................................. ........

This was pretty good, but...

ill: I liked your verse, but you coulda come harder. However, I liked what you had to say, had me ROFL and all. But it was kinda basic, and your personals were kinda off. By the way, I don't think he's a newbie at all... just FYI. Anyway, keep elevatin'.

Cannabarz²: You didn't have as much humor as him, but you had crazy metas and good multies, which served also as punches. Work on making your punches more personal, a common difficulty here cause nobody reveals anything in their profiles. Anyway, good battle. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: Cannabarz²

*Vote on my battles and I'll return the favor later.*

whats that one word im lookin for...........

OH YEA!









motherfuckin uppin :thumbup:


:laugh: ...please?

this is a close one if i may say so myself.

ill- came pretty good. nice punches here and there. you're best ones were your first two bars. you kinda lost it towards the end. i'd say your closer was the weakest. maybe if you worded it better you coulda had it. your structure could've been fixed and your flow was good.

cannabarz- came pretty nice. every line was a punch. nice consistency there. the structure was near flawless as well as the flow. really good in those aspects. he had a better personal but this battle was pretty even. but...

vote- cannabarz...came more consistent, his lines connected, ill. kinda lost it after the middle. props to both.

peace

^ thanks for votes ppl..dont sleep here plzzzzz

Uppin-3

Good drops by both of you but .Ill. had this.. barely i didnt think by the looks of it ill would have won but when i broke down the verses i think he really did win. his punches were freakin alsome but the hit hard.. as well as his personals too.. cann dis good also but i could tell he didnt come as hard as ill on this one.. really i think that ill almost took every category.. exept structure. but they were closely matched..

v/ill

ILLS VERSE WAS OFF THE HOOK, THERE WAS ONLY 1 LINE I DIDNT LIKE WHICH WAS THE 1ST 1
GOOD USE OF MULTIES, CLEVER PUNCHES ESPECIALLY LINES 3,4,5,6
VERY ORIGINAL STUFF

CANA--B'S VERSE SOUNDED LIKE IT WAS JUST THROWN TOGETHER AND DIDNT FLOW WELL AND HIS PUCHES WERE TOO BASIC,......... UR NOT CRAP BUT ILL IS A LOT BETTER TRY AND USE PERSONALS NEXT TIME

PEEP THESE
vs rec-d
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940

vs touch to gold
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127

vs impendance
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116219

^ ouch sounded lik a d/r... cuz i saw this even through out really but...

canabarz- you had some what the complextiy and came with nice structure and nice flow. i was feeling your lines n they seemed more elevated wit complexity as a sum what rising heavyweight.

.ILL.- your verse i admit was aight and had some creativity that stood out oand sum nice punches and wordplay with personals. work on yea structure

but my b\vote goes to -Ill for this one

good battle, olla at this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120283