ite man,
donno who you are but,
10 lines,
30 mins to drop,
normal shit,
good luck man........................
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ite man,
donno who you are but,
10 lines,
30 mins to drop,
normal shit,
good luck man........................
checking in................................................ .............
checking in................................................ ..
lmfao,omg,
yo check my spit..this kid pre-writes his shit...he posted a reply in seconds,
even worse in bitch slapped..so go back to the training ground,
.......................and learn your lesson..........
fucking homo ill win this through votes..but i could just get you banned,
cause to be honest man you need a whole body..not just a fucking hand,
ill leave you exposed...your on the wrong track.so bad its the road,
piece of poor shit you spat..like your bitch spitting your load,
omg kid yoo put 2 verses out already...so take lyrics advice,
i cant believe this ill post his battles in here cause he aint got a clue,Quote:
Get you prewritten shit outta here and go to Cprogress' site
im the stricker ill score..and leave the blocking(banning) shit for you.
funniest battle evr.ill go get this wak bitches verses
also sum report him for pre-writting..................
defender
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Yo,
Ill spit a punch at your stomach to prove to you im sick
You will throw up the cum you had for lunch, now theres proof you do suck dick
Ill make you high and get red eye from this dope spit
ill walk over this bitch like he immitatin shit
even if you cut off my arms id still murk ya ass hands down
the only reason this bitch is funny is cuz he understands-a-clown
Ill rip you so badly, this defeate will force you to lay-low
Even if you had a career it would last as long as P-diddy and J-Low
ill spit and kill this fag and Native-Pride
You couldnt defeate me even if you had the booth on your-side
its more like you dont want this beef from me
coz it pure illness and will leave u in the casualty
defender
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bomb~blast
If your fake ass claim to eat Mc's I eat You as my dinner, bitch, and rawsprints as my breakfast//(status is i eat mc's and his crew is R.A.W.S.P.R.I.N.T.S)
Phenom, you cant spell it supposed to be a V, stepping up to me damn, you brave
3-0 is simple as spellin out abc, if i were you id fone the undertaker to start diggin ya grave//(i looked up Phenom on the internet and no meaning to it)
My verse will leave you as a cripple, instead of ya dick a gay will suck ya nipple, hoe
If i have to ill beat you again and again for an easy triple~ko//(his battle record says suc my dic)
Ill break your wrists to save you some emmbarsesment and ur excuse can be i cant hold mic and spit back
ill break your fist in 4diffrent places so you can not punch, brush your teeth if you wanna spit back because your mouth is full of plaque//
you couldnt beat me even if i had my two arms tied behing my back my mouth was gag (so i cnt speak and cnt put up the mic)
After reading your battle record, i know why you joined R.A.W S.P.R.I.N.T fag//(raw sprints his crew.. record sez suc my dic)
The next clown that wants to get murked is aka Kidd-Cappa
Step out the way punk, cuz kridds gun clap~ya//
uppin for a vote, after see'in my shit may aswell jus hand me the win
i'll wrap the microphone cord around ya throat till this mc stops breathing
rite lmfao............votes plz or just get him banned.......................................1st and um......lmfao........
sorry for freepostin lmfao, ill get him banned now!! lol. pz
LMAO at you usin my quote in ya verse....yeah...Umm do I need to vote cause your gonna get the DQ? Judge took this cause he had a dope verse pact wit punches and metas and great personals...I only read Defenders first verse and it was........prewritten lol..no creativity..stretched lines...weak punches
Vote=Judge
Drop an honest one here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116909
LMAO at you usin my quote in ya verse....yeah...Umm do I need to vote cause your gonna get the DQ? Judge took this cause he had a dope verse pact wit punches and metas and great personals...I only read Defenders first verse and it was........prewritten lol..no creativity..stretched lines...weak punches
Vote=Judge
^^^ cant agree more wit that...judge merked him wit a nice key otha cat pre wrote and had no effect on him and he dropped both verses within a minute.....he shud b gettin banned but oh well ma vote goes 2 judge
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woot.....................thx yall...............................2nd............ ..
lol the judge took this all the way even tho he prewrote lmao what a dick lol vote goes to J but i aint gonna poll it cuz he should be banned J can u return the favor in my battle against TillEyeDie thanx pz o yea J u had nyce flow structure wordplay punches and personals thats y u took this
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just poll........................cause ill get the win neway man...............................thx
iight i will but can u vote in mine too sry 2 freepost and thanx
Vote= Judge
Defender- Shit Was unorganized, Shit Was Whack, Weak Flow, Attempted To punch..Didnt Connect, Vocab Lacked, Wordplay Was OK..Tip, Fix Ya sTructure Cuz IT Was Horrible...:nono:
Judge- DOpe Shit, Wasted A Good Verse Though, Good You Come Hard On Each Battl,e Nice FLow, Nice Structure, Good pUnches, Liked Ya Personals, Wordplay Was Ok, And Vocab Was Decent, Nice Verse, Ya Punches Were Hard
Vote- Judge
Hit THis uP
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116302
omg...............................4th............. ................................lmfao............. .............
omg...............................4th............. ................................lmfao............. .............
ayt the judge took this easily, better punches,structure flow every category goes to judge and personals werent bad either
the judge takes this easily he packed tha verse full of personals and good punches
defender had ok punches but they wernt very creative and the structure was crap
vote-judge
peep these and leave links
vs rec-d
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940
vs touch to gold
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127
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Not even was defenders shit wack..
Bitten, prewrote, recycled or w/e aswell
Like 4 different styles blended into one wack whole.
..Bleh.
Judge took this.. landslide.
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The judge- came pretty good. the punches were intact and consistent. the flow was ok and the structure wasn't that bad either. you filled ur verse wit personals which is nice. didn't really have any multies but still, nice verse. 7.5/10
defender- those verses were almost not worth reading. i was annoyed with every line. ur punches weren't too good. ur structure and flow were off. i culdn't quite follow ur rhymes. and almost every line has been played, except you made them worst sumhow. lol. ok job. 3.5/10
vote- the judge
hit this one up plz 'Lost Soul vs Me'
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117419
thanx.
pz
Well, Judge came alot harder, was much wittier with his wordplay and definately merked this kid...
Defender did shit like this...
ill spit and kill this fag and Native-Pride
You couldnt defeate me even if you had the booth on your-side
Which is total huh?
I know ya refering to the recording booth...
But how does that pertain to The Judge and this battle?
And...
Ill rip you so badly, this defeate will force you to lay-low
Even if you had a career it would last as long as P-diddy and J-Low
How outdated and played is that?
The Judge came personally, stayed a bit too much on the "banning" shit...
But really, just merked the hell out of that played, out of place, and very elementary verse.
Peace
Pretty one sided..
Defender: Fix up your structure, some of your lines are stretched out and it took away from your flow of your verse...Your punches didnt really do anything....work on getting better punches and some better wordplay though.
Judge: Your verse was the better of the two....Had good structure.....the flow was nice in it....You had some nice punches in there....Had nice personals through out the verse...Liked the way you finished your battle verse with that closer, it was nice.
Overall: a one sided battle...vote goes to the judge...for having the better overall verse, just had better punches, personals....everything really.