u kno tha rules check in now
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u kno tha rules check in now
check in, hurry up and check in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^^^^^^^i had a battle wit em.....he read mah verse...den no show........make em spit first......juss warnin ya
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il take ya advice, hurry up and spit dickhead
I just got done a battle. Give me a few minutes. If you want you can spit first
no we both start keying up now and see whos up first, just dont no-show
I ain't read that bitch's verse but if he's chillin here wit you,
Than I guess the rumor's true, you both get lyrically abused,
I'll give it to ya straight, ya suck and you gonna die,
And the only thing about you that's destructive is your lies,
You'll never get rid of me, I'll always be your enemy,
You're still stuck on your first line while I be writin to infinity,
Try and spit back but use some clever punchlines,
Don't choke up in the front lines, your flow's a joke bitch you want mines?
Now that I think about it you should have spit your rap first,
Cause by the time I post this shit you'll be leavin in a black hearse
Black n' blued ya face, RB's staff laughed as you felt blows,
after i shot at your feet and aquired you some new shell toes!!
I'll yell flows into ya ear, if you try to bitch and tell.
Till your drums burst, which requires the question does this ring a bell?!
you cant fight with this speech, even if you were writing for weeks.
dont do a no-show in this battle like lyricallyabbusive, but we know you you are homo, your right up ya street..
thats why i blaze bitch gays, how could Enygma always stay afraid?
Even if Enygma was an experienced graduate he couldnt make the grade!
or worst yet even tryna to surface the level, of murderin devils..
He's with a purse purchasing pebble's, while im lurkin with rebels!!
ayt spit now
ayt lets get some votes on this*******************
What up.............just waitin for a comeback..........oh, lyricallyabuive, just so you know I got called in to work. If you want a rematch I'll be waitin for ya
uppin 1 time********************************************** ******
Can we get some mutha fuckin votes up in here? What the FUCK?
hmm, uppin number 2, this shud be a easy battle 2 decide who won so please take tha time to do it
uppin number 3************************************
flow/structure- enygma
he just kept his lines cleaner and shorter.... destructive had a line "dont do a no-show in this battle like lyricallyabbusive, but we know you you are homo, your right up ya street..".....and i was like GOD DAMN!!!....that's one stretched ass line
multis/rhyme scheme- destructive
enygma had only one multi and it was only 2 syllables... destructive was concistant with them everywhere but the middle of his verse and he had several multis that were more than two syllables
punches/personals- destructive
enygma didn't have any, destructive had a few tight ones... therefore destructive gets this catagory
creativity/wordplay- destructive
i didn't see any thought process behind enygmas verse... a whoe vere of filler... and i thought destructives line about makin the grade was pretty nice
overall- destructive
it looks like enygma expected destructive to roll over for him or something cuz it seems he lacked effort, i haven't seen any of his other stuff but i'm assuming he can do better
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
ayt uppin number 4********************************
uppin number 5 and still not 1 fucking vote********
uppin********************************************* ****
eny:I'll give it to ya straight, ya suck and you gonna die,
And the only thing about you that's destructive is your lies,
You'll never get rid of me, I'll always be your enemy,
You're still stuck on your first line while I be writin to infinity,
destructive:
I'll yell flows into ya ear, if you try to bitch and tell.
Till your drums burst, which requires the question does this ring a bell?!
you cant fight with this speech, even if you were writing for weeks.
dont do a no-show in this battle like lyricallyabbusive, but we know you you are homo, your right up ya street..
breakdown:
flow:dest
multies:dest
structure:eny
enjoy reading:dest
overrall vote goes to : DESTRUCTIVE
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR IN THIS SITE AND ILL DROP MY POLL VOTE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119199