10 lines
you have to check in
due in an hour
bllind spit
this my check in
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10 lines
you have to check in
due in an hour
bllind spit
this my check in
hey listen up mixa slash to the ak
you better pray cuz today yo ass gonna get slay
ill teach you to be like me i know you wanna
you must be on maruhwanna if you think ill help this prime donna
ill teach you to be too dope just read
agreed oops sorry for the mislead cyz you little brain will never succeed
ehy are you so dumb you dont you understand
u need to stop playin with yo dick like a gutiar band
i had a doubt but fuck this im out
shouldnt you leave and shout while you get punched in the mouth
checkin in................I already keyed my verse.............jus ain't checked in....
*yo here ma verse*
Homer Simpson says you too dope in being a fabrication
I rap equivalent to da Spider-man comics series amazing
12 yr. old dat ain't reached puberty to get on me erect
and your balls in ya abdomen and haven't dropped yet
boi is thinking dat giving accupuncture to me is felt pain
he floatin bloody in menstrual cycles washed in red rain
reading Dr. Seeus and Nursery rhymes can't help ya rap
ya mom always tuck ya in bed and makes you take naps
do what kids do....jus play your game of hide n' go seek
now niggas gonna be counting ya loss like sheep in sleep
i cant vote
alka just about every lined was played
ok vocab
no personals
2 dope
gay ass rhyme
no vocab
no personals
fucked structure
if i could my vote would go to ak
i cant vote but i think ak-mixa got the better verse
if i could vote it would goto ak
both lacked in their scheme but ak made an attempt at multies and made better use of his vocab then 2dope
my vote: ak-mixa
SOrry for free post jsut chkin my font colors
:thumbup:
^^help this site out and drop votes for other's.
dont be a HYPOCRYTE asking for Honest Votes
then not dropping HONEST votes.
Im just trying to get people to VOTE more Often.
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aight. here it is.
Multies:none
Personal’s:none worth mentioning
Punches:ak mixa
Flow:ak mixa
Eye Opener’s:none
Vocab & Complexity:ak mixa
POLL Vote___ak mixa
I thought ak mixa had a much better ryme schem by far. Punches were much greater aswell. too dope. you need to elevate. make your bars longer and match them, making them the same size and shit. use more multies and try to make your lines to the point where you think it's funny..dissin the other person.that might help you alot.
RETURN THE FUCKING FAVOR PLEASE. THERE ARE TO MANY
HYPOCRYTES ON R.B! I TOOK THE TIME, PLEASE DROP A VOTE
MINE TOO. I HATE SLEEPERS. LoL.
Me_____VERSES_____INFINIT SKILLZ
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115148
Me____VERSES______D’CYPLE
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...68#post1206468
Me_____VERSES_____UBEN. SONNED
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...32#post1206532
Me______VERSES_____SUNSHINE
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115900
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^^^^^ uppin.............^^^^^i'll hit you up soon, thanks.................................
These were my favorite lines from AK. Too dope had poor flow and weak punches, but i liked the allusion to Dr.Seuss that AK used. MY VOTE:AK.Quote:
Originally Posted by ak-mixa
Hit these: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=113308
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
first one didn't show up as a link. HIT THIS:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=113308
uppin............................................. ......^^^^^^^ got ya Dirty Endzone......
Punches: AK, no punches from Dope
Wordplay: Neither, no wordplay
Multis: Neither, all 1 syllables
Personals: Neither, Dope tried, but they were wack as fuck
Opener: AK, started off better
Closer: AK, finished much much better
Vote - AK mixa
Too Dope, you need to actually throw punches to win a battle... AK, you need to elevate your punches a bit...
reading Dr. Seeus and Nursery rhymes can't help ya rap
Best line from Ak-mixa
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uppin............................................. .................................................. .............
Ok Break Down:
Too Dope:
Your verse wasn’t dope your verse was very basic. Need punches
Punches, punches to win a battle and personals help remember that.
Ak Mixa:
Nice start some ok punches came at him straight forward.
Easy read because your structure was on point.
Mines sometimes isn’t lmao. Good enough to win this one.
Too Dope stay elevating on punches. Twist your lines have a double meaning
And come funny think your flows out before dropping. No hate just take the advice.
Vote= Ak Mixa better battle verse.
Peace
my vote has to go to ak cuz his rhyme were better and his flowed better
breakdown
flow:ak
structure:ak even tough it was kinda weak
multis:no one you guys gotta try harder
personals:ak
punches:ak cuz he atleast tried toodpes punches were so bad and pointless they were they equivalent of a shiatsu massage
overall:ak
you both gave good effort but ak came out ontop
and since i took the time to vote on your battle vote on mine
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
both verses sucked
too dope...... was that a battle verse or just a key in
ak-mixa...... i saw a punch or two in there, and u had good vocab
punches-ak, oviously, i already stated dope had none
vocab- again too dope had no vocab past a kindergarden readin level
multies- ~~~~~~
laughability- dope cuz his sucked so much, too bad it dont count
so my vote goes to ak, even though both verses were terrible
uppin............................................. ...................1 more poll vote................
aqight my vote goes to ak mixa
he had the better verse and the better punches
just work on personals and ull b ok
the other came came elementary and had nothing standing out to me
ok battle but my vote goes to ak mixa
yo hit up the battles in my sig and then i will come back and poll vote my vote
peace