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House Rules
Good Luck
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10 lines
House Rules
Good Luck
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check, drop soon, I'll try to drop soon after that
Am gonna leave Brethen more exposed than Janet
Kid tried to elevate..
But his wackness had more gravity than this planet
Kid posts in the battle " house Rules" errr no thanks
Unlike in your house i aint into whips handcuffs and spanks
honestly man your a kid from you sig writing to you avatar
squashed Brethen painted him in gold than hanged him.......
only way he could even come close to being a star
Even if Brethen got dopness injected into every cell
Wackness cells like bad sins.. would send em all to hell
Because he cant cope .. with anything dope.. and hes desolving
Turned brethen into bacteria ..gave him a million years....
and he still could start evolving....
Ekis so far ahead of brethen ... speed of light wouldnt help
Brethens spits are nothing..
you could hold em..and they still wouln't be felt
Ill use a invisable Meta.... And compare hes skill
so much nothing... like in your verse the contence off -ill
comeon man post............................................
I'm trying to drop, but I keyed my verse, and my computer shut down so I gotta re-do it all. This time I'm writing it down. Damn, if you didn't drop 18 lines
oright oright...... becaoue that happened when i was doing a long ass feedback today ill forgive ya :)
Turned brethen into bacteria ..gave him a million years....
and he still couldn't start evolving....
one typo...
Eki's throwing a punch at nobody, when was this bitch accepted?
Your verse was ass backwards ... kinda like your shit is dyslexic,
Stabbing his chest in, with your inside out verse like manic depression,
You a walking diagnostic test, you teach me?! My standards are lessoned, (lessened)
Preist I have a confession, I never wrote a dope line, just 18 line suicide letters,
Who am I better than?!, I'm fake see, even my truest lines are headers,
Here's a peroid (.), I'll watch and see if you can flip a noise tight,
Eki failed at being wack, he couldn't even diss-a-point right,
You got an advantage on me?! Like having AIDS on Erkle's,
I'll have you sweating red more than gatorade commercials,
Why you alway got fags on ya mind, if anybodies gay your worse,
I slayed your verse, you sit and make a diss thread, just to obey-your-thirst,
You got the crowd like "wack, wack" the way your verse is so fowl, (foul, duck, wack)
Brethren's versatyle, need help, ^^^ haven't been to church in a while,
On stage with that garbage, like a crack head, quick to be givin the cane,
You livin a game, Fag's on your brain stem, why you got Spinal Bifida pain,
Eki, from Mike & Ike flipped his name to go solo, switched companies so what,
After I beat his ass with a 3 foot long bat, watch this 'fruit roll up'.
Am gonna leave Brethen more exposed than Janet
Kid tried to elevate..
But his wackness had more gravity than this planet
Played out first line..second was Ok
Kid posts in the battle " house Rules" errr no thanks
Unlike in your house i aint into whips handcuffs and spanks
kinda played..but ok
honestly man your a kid from you sig writing to you avatar
squashed Brethen painted him in gold than hanged him.......
only way he could even come close to being a star
stretched bar...kinda weak
Even if Brethen got dopness injected into every cell
Wackness cells like bad sins.. would send em all to hell
blah
Because he cant cope .. with anything dope.. and hes desolving
Turned brethen into bacteria ..gave him a million years....
and he still could start evolving....
nice
Ekis so far ahead of brethen ... speed of light wouldnt help
Brethens spits are nothing..
you could hold em..and they still wouln't be felt
played
Ill use a invisable Meta.... And compare hes skill
so much nothing... like in your verse the contence off -ill
ok
Eki's throwing a punch at nobody, when was this bitch accepted?
Your verse was ass backwards ... kinda like your shit is dyslexic,
decent
Stabbing his chest in, with your inside out verse like manic depression,
You a walking diagnostic test, you teach me?! My standards are lessoned, (lessened)
good
Preist I have a confession, I never wrote a dope line, just 18 line suicide letters,
Who am I better than?!, I'm fake see, even my truest lines are headers,
weak and stretched
Here's a peroid (.), I'll watch and see if you can flip a noise tight,
Eki failed at being wack, he couldn't even diss-a-point right,
just ok
You got an advantage on me?! Like having AIDS on Erkle's,
I'll have you sweating red more than gatorade commercials,
ok...kinda weak tho
Why you alway got fags on ya mind, if anybodies gay your worse,
I slayed your verse, you sit and make a diss thread, just to obey-your-thirst,
played
You got the crowd like "wack, wack" the way your verse is so fowl, (foul, duck, wack)
Brethren's versatyle, need help, ^^^ haven't been to church in a while,
ok...kinda weak/played
On stage with that garbage, like a crack head, quick to be givin the cane,
You livin a game, Fag's on your brain stem, why you got Spinal Bifida pain,
wasn't feelin it
Eki, from Mike & Ike flipped his name to go solo, switched companies so what,
After I beat his ass with a 3 foot long bat, watch this 'fruit roll up'.
ok closer
This was a close battle...but I gotta give this to Breth...Eki came with too many played lines..Like the whole Janet Jackson nipple thing is so played out already
PLease drop an honest vote here...I took the time for yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114158
.......................upin.......................
Eki - didnt like the opener.. incredibly old already.. flowed well tho thru out.. pretty personal an some nice metas made for effective punches.. fell off a couple of times wiv some played lines tho..
Brethren - u also had alot of general disses.. not enuff personals thru out really.. but u had more than Eki an urs were more effective.. cos they were pretty creative an witty.. strangely the "wack wack" line caused a chuckle.. but in retrospect it was weak.. u did enuff to edge this battle tho..
VoTe = Brethren
Drop a vote on this plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112698
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ok uppin #1 .
Follow the link i left plz..
I will calm down buddy, I'm at school. I'll do it later
Im calm..
vte-Brethren-
He had more personals and he didnt come as played out as the other cat, he also had better flow
Anyways could one of yous vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113709
Peace
uppin #2 (I think) .
Uppin #3, wanna help me up this Eki??? .
eki
Am gonna leave Brethen more exposed than Janet
Kid tried to elevate..
But his wackness had more gravity than this planet
nice opener, ouch
Kid posts in the battle " house Rules" errr no thanks
Unlike in your house i aint into whips handcuffs and spanks
blah...
honestly man your a kid from you sig writing to you avatar
squashed Brethen painted him in gold than hanged him.......
only way he could even come close to being a star
flow changed up here... eh punch was weak
Even if Brethen got dopness injected into every cell
Wackness cells like bad sins.. would send em all to hell
blah....
Because he cant cope .. with anything dope.. and hes desolving
Turned brethen into bacteria ..gave him a million years....
and he still could start evolving....
nice... changed flow up again with good punch behind it
Ekis so far ahead of brethen ... speed of light wouldnt help
Brethens spits are nothing..
you could hold em..and they still wouln't be felt
haha good punch
Ill use a invisable Meta.... And compare hes skill
nice try... but no dice on the invisible meta... you mean you couldn't thinka 1 lol
All in all a decent verse though...
and
Brethren-
Eki's throwing a punch at nobody, when was this bitch accepted?
Your verse was ass backwards ... kinda like your shit is dyslexic,
eh...
Stabbing his chest in, with your inside out verse like manic depression,
You a walking diagnostic test, you teach me?! My standards are lessoned, (lessened)
wordplay ok...I guess
Preist I have a confession, I never wrote a dope line, just 18 line suicide letters,
Who am I better than?!, I'm fake see, even my truest lines are headers,
what?
Here's a peroid (.), I'll watch and see if you can flip a noise tight,
Eki failed at being wack, he couldn't even diss-a-point right,
DOPE
You got an advantage on me?! Like having AIDS on Erkle's,
I'll have you sweating red more than gatorade commercials,
nice, haven't heard that one lol
Why you alway got fags on ya mind, if anybodies gay your worse,
I slayed your verse, you sit and make a diss thread, just to obey-your-thirst,
blah...
You got the crowd like "wack, wack" the way your verse is so fowl, (foul, duck, wack)
Brethren's versatyle, need help, ^^^ haven't been to church in a while,
set up was witty, then what happened?
On stage with that garbage, like a crack head, quick to be givin the cane,
You livin a game, Fag's on your brain stem, why you got Spinal Bifida pain,
nah....
Eki, from Mike & Ike flipped his name to go solo, switched companies so what,
After I beat his ass with a 3 foot long bat, watch this 'fruit roll up'.
shitty closer.
I have to give this to Eki... his structure was better, he was more consistant. But Brethren you tight too.... it was hella close
pz
yo return the favor and drop an honest vote here:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114933
or here
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115255
3-1 uppin #4........................................
uppin............................................. .....................
Winnner = Brethen
Eki- ok verse, wasnt Nothing Special, You Came Weak.. Your Flow Was There, But Both Of You Had Played Things. Your Punches Hit And Missed, When Hit, Not Hard. Your Vocab Was Ok, And Your Wordplay Was Nice. Opener Was Whack, And Closer Was Ok. Overall Verse- 7/10
Brethen- OK Verse, Same As His, Nothing Special. Your Flow Was Nice, And Your Structure Was..Ok.....Like I Said, U Had Played Things And He Did Too, your Punches HIt Harder Then His, And Your Vocab Was Ok. Wordplay Was Nice Also, I Liked The Opener And I LIke The Closer. Very Tuff Battle, Close. Overall Verse- 7.5/10
Vote- Brethen
Hit This Up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115637
Okay final uppin, number 5 for all you turkey's. 4-1
Hit this up honestly both of you
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...41#post1208341
Eki
Am gonna leave Brethen more exposed than Janet
Kid tried to elevate..
But his wackness had more gravity than this planet
^^Good line but a little played
Kid posts in the battle " house Rules" errr no thanks
Unlike in your house i aint into whips handcuffs and spanks
^^LOL...i liked that
honestly man your a kid from you sig writing to you avatar
squashed Brethen painted him in gold than hanged him.......
only way he could even come close to being a star
^^^blah..didn't rhyme
Even if Brethen got dopness injected into every cell
Wackness cells like bad sins.. would send em all to hell
^^should have been worded different
Because he cant cope .. with anything dope.. and hes desolving
Turned brethen into bacteria ..gave him a million years....
and he still could start evolving....
^^pretty good
Ekis so far ahead of brethen ... speed of light wouldnt help
Brethens spits are nothing..
you could hold em..and they still wouln't be felt
^^LOL best line of your verse
Ill use a invisable Meta.... And compare hes skill
^^^....???
Breth
Eki's throwing a punch at nobody, when was this bitch accepted?
Your verse was ass backwards ... kinda like your shit is dyslexic,
^^LOL...enjoyed that opening
Stabbing his chest in, with your inside out verse like manic depression,
You a walking diagnostic test, you teach me?! My standards are lessoned, (lessened)
^^Good
Preist I have a confession, I never wrote a dope line, just 18 line suicide letters,
Who am I better than?!, I'm fake see, even my truest lines are headers,
^^That was good could'a hit harder if worded different though i think
Here's a peroid (.), I'll watch and see if you can flip a noise tight,
Eki failed at being wack, he couldn't even diss-a-point right,
^^not bad
You got an advantage on me?! Like having AIDS on Erkle's,
I'll have you sweating red more than gatorade commercials,
^^lol that was funny
Why you alway got fags on ya mind, if anybodies gay your worse,
I slayed your verse, you sit and make a diss thread, just to obey-your-thirst,
^^meh
You got the crowd like "wack, wack" the way your verse is so fowl, (foul, duck, wack)
Brethren's versatyle, need help, ^^^ haven't been to church in a while,
^^blah word that different and could be hard hittin
On stage with that garbage, like a crack head, quick to be givin the cane,
You livin a game, Fag's on your brain stem, why you got Spinal Bifida pain,
^^LOL good line
Eki, from Mike & Ike flipped his name to go solo, switched companies so what,
After I beat his ass with a 3 foot long bat, watch this 'fruit roll up'.
^^lol that was a good closer
Over all breth took this with wittier punches and more consitant punches. eki this wasn't one of your better verses..but still a good read. but breth just better...good read from both peace