10 lines,
25 mins max,
normal shit....good luck.......
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10 lines,
25 mins max,
normal shit....good luck.......
checking in...........................................good luck...............
yo I'ma need more time than that man... I'm at work. At least an hour or so. Confirm OK and I will check in
ite 1 thing to no...is he got accepted for elite then thrown of,
Look at this little herb..thinks i'm a newb so he came wak like this,
but to be honest man...ive seen broken toilets better.......
..........................at takeing the piss............
serveing this faggot like i was his assistent...in a shop,
concentrate on yourself cause your balls would be a better thing to drop,
your simular to a one leged hurdels race...the way your tripping,
even your own foot is desperate to give your ass a kicking,
looking at the executives roster it looks like your a shit talent scout,
cause ill merk this bitch..faster than elite accepting him,
..............................and throwing him out......
you'de probally write ur whole verse in BOLD so it could have,
......................twice the potential............,
because you no judge causes more upsets in this place than womens pre-mensrial.
......................
just hurry up and drop man...............................40 mins max from now.................gd luck.........
omg....................not anotha no show?...........just drop your shit man...................................
He wonders why he wins battles... but never gets Our Respect
Look at your verse... You bite structure like a Plaigerist Architect
You can't Compose ya self... You're style makes me laugh
wrote ya shit on two Grid-lined papers... to make a Pair a Graph
you be the Judge... I'm the Jury handin you Death Sentences
Feel the Tension in the courtroom... while the Bench Pressin Him
Like Iraq in War... you brag but really got a Limited Arsenal
Thought he could battle me and Win... usin a Cheap Personal
Leave you Lyin' down on the Floor... since you think you Rug-ged
I then Permanantly Rest Your Case... Like I buried ya Luggage
holla
up up uppin...........................................
Look at this little herb..thinks i'm a newb so he came wak like this,
but to be honest man...ive seen broken toilets better.......
..........................at takeing the piss............
no creativity there
serveing this faggot like i was his assistent...in a shop,
concentrate on yourself cause your balls would be a better thing to drop,
lame first line, aight second
your simular to a one leged hurdels race...the way your tripping,
even your own foot is desperate to give your ass a kicking,
played
looking at the executives roster it looks like your a shit talent scout,
cause ill merk this bitch..faster than elite accepting him,
..............................and throwing him out......
ok...
you'de probally write ur whole verse in BOLD so it could have,
......................twice the potential............,
because you no judge causes more upsets in this place than womens pre-mensrial.
not good enuf for a close
He wonders why he wins battles... but never gets Our Respect
Look at your verse... You bite structure like a Plaigerist Architect
Aight, nice play
You can't Compose ya self... You're style makes me laugh
wrote ya shit on two Grid-lined papers... to make a Pair a Graph
again nice play
you be the Judge... I'm the Jury handin you Death Sentences
Feel the Tension in the courtroom... while the Bench Pressin Him
aight
Like Iraq in War... you brag but really got a Limited Arsenal
Thought he could battle me and Win... usin a Cheap Personal
second line was kinda filler
Leave you Lyin' down on the Floor... since you think you Rug-ged
I then Permanantly Rest Your Case... Like I buried ya Luggage
again, nice play, nice
Spit took this, jus cuz he had better word play that made his punches and personals hit.
Vote - Spit
Hit up my battles, aight?
uppin............................................. ........
Better structure...
Better directed punches.
Better personals.
That "elite/thrown out"
Was about the only good, hard punch that Judge had.
Everything else seemed forced...kinda funny (the "foot/ass kicking" line)
But it wasn't hard and coulda been used for anyone.
I dunno...
Good battle
But Spit clearly merked this kid with all those personals...
Then I liked how he closed the last two bars with wit and wordplay.
Peace
uppin3............................................ ........
Uppin 4................................................. .....
1................................................. ...........................................took your time man
The Judge-
You Totally Messed Up The Structure.. Really.. And Connect Your Set Up With A Punch It Packs a Harder Hit.. Makes Them Look Better Really Not As Good As Spit But U Did Good No Hate Man
Spit-
U Killed It With Personals.. Great Job Really Good Structure You Had A Much Better Verse Then The Judge But Eh He Did Do Go So You Gotta Hand IT To Him I Prolly Didnt Get A Couple Personals Because He Changed Something.. Hey U Still Won
V/Spit
Hit MInez Up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115156
Judge - structure made it hard to catch a flow.. the lines were stretched so the punches were losin force.. u opened pretty weak.. the meta wasnt very creative an it was too general.. not enuff personals thru out ya verse.. i expected more from u .:K:.
Spit - solid.. witty.. creative.. personal.. a great verse.. nice use of personals.. flipped em into hard-hittin punches consistantly.. the metas were spot on makin for original concepts.. flow was there too.. had all the ingredients..
VoTe = Spitacular
Drop a vote on at least one of these plz.. i'll be back if u dont!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112698
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114168
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111096
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yo judge.... I told you I was at work. Right now we are short staffed (like your crotch!) and I am doing three jobs at a large corporation. It is AMAZING I am able to do what I do on RB.... no lie. But in all fairness, YES EVERYONE, Judge dropped waaay before me... like a whole 50 minutes!
Will ya follow at least one open link plz Spit.. thanx.
gd battle........
The Judge - descent verse....nice punches....gd werdplay....flow was on....opener was nice.......finisher was nice but..it was more of prasin yaself rather than dissin ya opponent....decsent overall verse
$pitacular - nice verse.....i liked this a lot....gd werdplay and very nice punches......the way u flipp'd his style was nice....nice werdplay as well.......finisha was dope..very witty..i liked tha werdplay in it....took me a few seconds to get that 1 but it was nice......an overall good verse
v/ $pitacular
Like Iraq in War... you brag but really got a Limited Arsenal
Thought he could battle me and Win... usin a Cheap Personal
Leave you Lyin' down on the Floor... since you think you Rug-ged
I then Permanantly Rest Your Case... Like I buried ya Luggage
that killed it..
spit won this one easily
the other guys structure was whack..
and his verse only consisted of one personal which, personaly he could of flipped a bit better..
easy victory...
Peace
-1-
V-Spit
Spit gets this with better structure.. and harder more thought of punches. Spit kept on going at him.. and i didnt like Judges attempts with fillers.. i dunno... I didnt feel your verse at all man. You treid with the personal but ahh nah.... Hmm Spit it was oright from you some funny shit
Like Iraq in War... you brag but really got a Limited Arsenal
Thought he could battle me and Win... usin a Cheap Personal
^ i liekd that for some reason :) i know Iraqi lines are a bit played but it was stil nice
vote split