14 lines
no bullshit voting
you spit first
I'll spit the first time i come online and your verse is up.... its no feeding so i wont get an advantage cos im spitting 2nd.... good luck and have fun
14 lines
no bullshit voting
you spit first
I'll spit the first time i come online and your verse is up.... its no feeding so i wont get an advantage cos im spitting 2nd.... good luck and have fun
Background info: me an wogzta were in Lyrical Soldiers (L.S) a lil while back before it died.
You confessed you "sound stupid".. in front of ya crew,
now i'll do wots neccessary.. come half assed.. an still shit on you...
This 'insomniacs' ill?? Well laughter's the best med.. a cheap remedy,
but careful readin ur verse too much.. cos its gonna cause an O.D...
You fled in an 'Instant'.. a fake Soldier that didn't fit in,
im sure L.S did help your career.. now look.. they're both in the bin...
I kno ya style kid.. you only joined my crew for props,
an the second you were in the fam.. I was labeled an abusive pops...
See i could rape your rep.. fukkn drag queen.. even ur verse wears a dress,
sad thing is if i deleted this post you still wouldn't get 'Instant' success...
Kid you needa ask around.. everybody knows I'll smash this clown,
cos ya rhymes resemble ya wardrobe.. entire style is 'hand-me-downs'...
Face it wogzta.. your style's never gonna be mistaken for fresh,
you'd resurrect an bite your own played shit.. then try clickin "Refresh"...
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There's 14..
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Notes:
L.S = Lyrical Soldiers
Paki = Pakistani
Artificial = A.I in his sig
Even in the L.S, your battles were never crunchin-numbers
Your style "fell off" faster than a group bungee-jumpers
"This illness ain't catchin"... Cos there's none to speak of
But your a bacterium, lookin' for anything to "feed" off
I only have one loss, and that was post-L.S recovery from you
Your wackness made me sick... and that's why I left the crew
Madd Writer? For your ass, that reputation doesn't-exist
You couldn't "bite" me successfully if you were a "son-of-a-bitch"
My style is always packin' more heat than Paki-missle
But you wouldn't understand natural talent, your "artificial"
Your a little late to learn a valuable lesson, Illtalic...
That even if you bit Nas for "7" years you "Still" wouldn't be Illmatic
There's a reason I never sleep; I'm always perfectin-my-rhymes
Awaits? He can sense an "Instant" loss so he's always checkin-the-time
that's 14... good luck
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iight...
im bored at college... so a thought id break this down cuz no-one is voting on it... cant poll cuz wog is in my crew... and the sooner one of illtalic's battles closes... then a can battle him... pz
illtalic
You confessed you "sound stupid".. in front of ya crew,
now i'll do wots neccessary.. come half assed.. an still shit on you...
lol... pretty good... made me laugh... 7/10
This 'insomniacs' ill?? Well laughter's the best med.. a cheap remedy,
but careful readin ur verse too much.. cos its gonna cause an O.D...
hmm... wasnt feelin that bar... stretched abit... 5/10
You fled in an 'Instant'.. a fake Soldier that didn't fit in,
im sure L.S did help your career.. now look.. they're both in the bin...
whoa... good... hard hittin personals... liked this bar... 9/10
I kno ya style kid.. you only joined my crew for props,
an the second you were in the fam.. I was labeled an abusive pops...
? didnt understand... 5/10
See i could rape your rep.. fukkn drag queen.. even ur verse wears a dress,
sad thing is if i deleted this post you still wouldn't get 'Instant' success...
lol... good dissin on my crew... :|... was a good personal though... 7/10
Kid you needa ask around.. everybody knows I'll smash this clown,
cos ya rhymes resemble ya wardrobe.. entire style is 'hand-me-downs'...
lol... made me laugh again... 8/10
Face it wogzta.. your style's never gonna be mistaken for fresh,
you'd resurrect an bite your own played shit.. then try clickin "Refresh"...
pretty dope closer... maybe abit forced... but it was good... 8/10
overall... 49/70... some good personals in here... flow was on... structure was good... keep it up... pz
wogzta
Even in the L.S, your battles were never crunchin-numbers
Your style "fell off" faster than a group bungee-jumpers
played... but quite good... 6/10
"This illness ain't catchin"... Cos there's none to speak of
But your a bacterium, lookin' for anything to "feed" off
not bad... flow was abit wierd a think... 6/10
I only have one loss, and that was post-L.S recovery from you
Your wackness made me sick... and that's why I left the crew
hmm... not bad... not really a personal... 6/10
Madd Writer? For your ass, that reputation doesn't-exist
You couldn't "bite" me successfully if you were a "son-of-a-bitch"
decent... 7/10
My style is always packin' more heat than Paki-missle
But you wouldn't understand natural talent, your "artificial"
pretty cool... good second line... good punch... 8/10
Your a little late to learn a valuable lesson, Illtalic...
That even if you bit Nas for "7" years you "Still" wouldn't be Illmatic
decent punch... decent personal on the name... 7/10
There's a reason I never sleep; I'm always perfectin-my-rhymes
Awaits? He can sense an "Instant" loss so he's always checkin-the-time
self glorification first line... self glorification second line... not good... 4/10
overall... 44/70... your verse was consistant... until the closer... that ruined it... the rest was a decent verse... flow was on is most places... structure was jus normal... decent... keep it up... pz
v/ illtalic
his verse had the better punches... won on points... and it had the better flow and stayed more consistant through-out... pz
OUT
Last edited by Freeman; February 2nd, 2004 at 07:05 AM
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appreciate it
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thanks for the feedback.......................................... .................................................. .
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I have carefully compiled a vote but it may be considered hate.. I shall await the go ahead from that greasy fucking wog.. =)
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^ wtf??
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You can vote inspire, but if theres even one mention of my nationality in a negative viewpoint that could affect your vote, your going to IR... good day
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Originally Posted by wogzta
Notes:
L.S = Lyrical Soldiers
Paki = Pakistani
Artificial = A.I in his sig
Even in the L.S, your battles were never crunchin-numbers
Your style "fell off" faster than a group bungee-jumpers
heard this concept before
"This illness ain't catchin"... Cos there's none to speak of
But your a bacterium, lookin' for anything to "feed" off
I liked this one
I only have one loss, and that was post-L.S recovery from you
Your wackness made me sick... and that's why I left the crew
set up was blah, but I liked the ending
Madd Writer? For your ass, that reputation doesn't-exist
You couldn't "bite" me successfully if you were a "son-of-a-bitch"
the last line had a bad setup but okay finisher
My style is always packin' more heat than Paki-missle
But you wouldn't understand natural talent, your "artificial"
wack finish
Your a little late to learn a valuable lesson, Illtalic...
That even if you bit Nas for "7" years you "Still" wouldn't be Illmatic
didn't like this line, and I like nas
There's a reason I never sleep; I'm always perfectin-my-rhymes
Awaits? He can sense an "Instant" loss so he's always checkin-the-time
I liked your "instant" line etter than his for what it's worth
that's 14... good luck
I was going to vote for wogzta but the more I look at it, the more i feel that illtalic had more...: vote illtalic
i dont think your allowed to post other peoples explanations... remember, this is your opinion, not what someone else thought.. i need feedback, not the same reapeating breakdowns...
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