hope u kno rules, blindspit, drop in 30, goodluck
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hope u kno rules, blindspit, drop in 30, goodluck
aight this is my check...............keyin now................
10-20 bars, can you do that dude? you'll be like on-air countdown people and just "stop at 2"/ cuz i'll make u "lose your life" like u "dropped ur cereal", have the mods arrest me, kill a cop, then drop the serial/ underrated gets penetrated like defense that didnt make it, my words make u lose you breath like rooms that arent ventilated/ you'll want a rematch, i'll take u every four hours like advil, make ur ass dissapointed, like mail came with mad bills/ JC's like runaway trains cuz I "blaze tracks," ur like milli vanilla cuz u plainly "make acts"/ get ur ass slammed, watch u leave for the gas station, then walk in f88k u mom til her chords need a fast tapin/ ur like the homeless naked, "got nothing to put on," when ur with guys u make like recievers and "go long"/ promote wrong and deplace ur face in 10 different places until theres not a f88kin person to be underrated/ u rip mics like women rip farts, not often, and this fag plays with as much balls as does ken lofton/ i spit awesome and break u down like vintage motors, u wack asshole im sicker than little kids after a roller coaster/
kid reminiscent of orbitals of the planets...way he revolves around a sonnin...
ask your boy kaos I got lyrical fitness .....you?... fat ass ain't even runnin...
Thinks I'm at his level....hmmm wait aren't you that tiny dot beneath me?...
Get the Armies of China to amass at the read sea...still wouldn't defeat me....
Tell you what you can have the alphabet just forfeit gimme the V Due.....
now all you spit is _erbals I left you 25 letters JBC the best you could do? ....
makes sense to me..New to Rb...challenge the most slept on MC.....
Yet you couldn't couldn't elevate...get air time ..with a spot on the BBC...
Good thing you got friends in high places...quit actin like you know the Biz...
hope i know the rules..funny kids when you don't even know what a blindspit is..
uppin this XX111 for votes drop links and we'll hit you back no dickryding read both the verses pz.
dont sleep, uppin............................................. ................
kid reminiscent of orbitals of the planets...way he revolves around a sonnin...
ask your boy kaos I got lyrical fitness .....you?... fat ass ain't even runnin...
^^nice
Thinks I'm at his level....hmmm wait aren't you that tiny dot beneath me?...
Get the Armies of China to amass at the read sea...still wouldn't defeat me....
^^good
Tell you what you can have the alphabet just forfeit gimme the V Due.....
now all you spit is _erbals I left you 25 letters JBC the best you could do? ....
^^needs a little work
makes sense to me..New to Rb...challenge the most slept on MC.....
Yet you couldn't couldn't elevate...get air time ..with a spot on the BBC...
^^nice
Good thing you got friends in high places...quit actin like you know the Biz...
hope i know the rules..funny kids when you don't even know what a blindspit is..
^^good rhymes
vote theunderrated
10-20 bars, can you do that dude? you'll be like on-air countdown people and just "stop at 2"/ cuz i'll make u "lose your life" like u "dropped ur cereal", have the mods arrest me, kill a cop, then drop the serial/ underrated gets penetrated like defense that didnt make it, my words make u lose you breath like rooms that arent ventilated/ you'll want a rematch, i'll take u every four hours like advil, make ur ass dissapointed, like mail came with mad bills/ JC's like runaway trains cuz I "blaze tracks," ur like milli vanilla cuz u plainly "make acts"/ get ur ass slammed, watch u leave for the gas station, then walk in f88k u mom til her chords need a fast tapin/ ur like the homeless naked, "got nothing to put on," when ur with guys u make like recievers and "go long"/ promote wrong and deplace ur face in 10 different places until theres not a f88kin person to be underrated/ u rip mics like women rip farts, not often, and this fag plays with as much balls as does ken lofton/ i spit awesome and break u down like vintage motors, u wack asshole im sicker than little kids after a roller coaster/
^^^ not good needs work on every thing
vote theunderrated
Not enough posts to poll but, here's what I thought.......
The UnderRated took this....I thought he showed more creativity and came a little stronger with his punches and personals...JCB, not bad on the punches....but you came a little simple and played at times...try to elevate...yer structure also needs work...it seemed to flow okay, but was a pain to read... My Vote> The UnderRated ( better punches,creativity,structure,and a decent personal)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114144
i voted for u THEUNDERRATED plz vore for LYRICALLYABUSIVE
ite this battle had alot of nice concepts but,
overall there was 1 clear winner- underated,
jcb your shit was exactly bad but to be honest,
most of your stuff sounded like filler with,
no real punches that hit hard with lak of ,
personals, this is were the underated took this,
he had alot better hard ounches,
and a nicer structure jcb came streched quite alot,
wich affected his flow,
nice battle tho keep it up,
plz hit this up now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114455 thx alot..........
Underrated clearly and undoubtedly took dis battle to a whole new level you could say......I mean JCB your verse wasn't dat good at all but it jus needs to take out unneccessary words and focus on da direct punche...........added wordplay.......and some creativity and you'll be straight nigga......Underrated had an overall better and more creative approaching verse with a lethal dissing concept.......dat kept hitting hard at JCB..............both of ya'll rappers keep elevating in ya battles especially JCB, no hate..............good battle.......
vote=Underrated
*vote on ma battle*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111414
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113062
jcb ... need to seperate ya bars like this homey ...
10-20 bars, can you do that dude?
you'll be like on-air countdown people and just "stop at 2"/
cuz i'll make u "lose your life" like u "dropped ur cereal",
have the mods arrest me, kill a cop, then drop the serial/
^ see ... like that.....u had good metas and some ok wordplay ... punches & personals were ehhhh......not too shabby....but you do need to elevate your punches and if you type ur verse like i showed u ur flow will improve as well.......but u easily got the idea....10/20
Under .... good..... easy win 4 u.....punches were all that was needed....wordplay and metas were eh...ok......ur struct was kinda streteched....but ur flow was still decent.....all in all a good verse cause of ur creativity/originality & punches...
you basically did all u had to to win... 13/20
vote- under... and yea.... im not center sight kid ...
^word to the fact that you are not center.......i only said i wanted centers vote removed....he chose to Dq you...thanx to all who voted....ak mixa i have already voted on both of those battles homey....and to the other guy i will not simply vote for you because you voted for me but i will take the time and drop an honest vote on that shit.....thanx again to all who voted drop links ....i am a strong advocater of shit not getting slept on pz out y'all....
alright uppin this for the third time lets get it closed guys .....thanx for taking the time drop your link and i will do what i can ...pz
I'll up this for the fourth time...its been open now for like 2 weeks leave links and i will hit you back....with a honest vote pz.....
This is how I saw the battle
TheUnderated/ your flow was tight, gud rhymes, nice wordplay, decent voc; your punches came thru hard with lot of creativity; you had sum nice personals in there; your structure was aight; couple of multis in your verse which were gud......
JCB/ your flow was ok, nice voc, wordplay a little off; your punches didn't came so hard as TU and they were mostly played; More personals, that's all I goota say....oh....and work on your direct punches, your structure was so-so
Overall vote/ TU (I poll this whan i hit 100+ posts, aight) Meanwhile just drop an honest vote on my battles in my sig, thx
underrated took this one due to his flow creativity, structure and personals..... His verse wasnt played and i like that.... JCB had a nice verse but too basic and played out... not bad just elevate dawg......
vote underrated (ill poll when i reach 100)
can yall return the favor plz
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...60#post1212160
The underrated took this easy JCB seems like he wasnt even trying, and if he was i feel soory for him, underrated butter rhymes, nothing amazing but better than jcb, decent battle
iight..
De..
kid reminiscent of orbitals of the planets...way he revolves around a sonnin...
ask your boy kaos I got lyrical fitness .....you?... fat ass ain't even runnin...
Lol.. Made me laugh..
Thinks I'm at his level....hmmm wait aren't you that tiny dot beneath me?...
Get the Armies of China to amass at the read sea...still wouldn't defeat me....
Could of been better..
Tell you what you can have the alphabet just forfeit gimme the V Due.....
now all you spit is _erbals I left you 25 letters JBC the best you could do? ....
Haha.. Nice personal.. Wordplay.. So on..
makes sense to me..New to Rb...challenge the most slept on MC.....
Yet you couldn't couldn't elevate...get air time ..with a spot on the BBC...
[]First line sucked.. Second was iight..[/b]
Good thing you got friends in high places...quit actin like you know the Biz...
hope i know the rules..funny kids when you don't even know what a blindspit is..
Not bad..
Some nice punches.. One was quoteable.. The good one, you know.. Lol.. 6/10
Im not gona seperate his shit up for him.. Bad structure and stretched lines fucked up the flow.. You had some iight multi's.. Punches lacked.. Hmm.. Bad verse..
Get a structure going, please..
v/ De..
Vote on this.. Only one more vote needed..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117113
Thanks..
Pz..
please hit this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119362
aight here we go....
underrated-
straight punches, you came wit more creaticity as said but your structure was wayy off.
dem- your verse was basic and had some simplistic shit in it n thats all i really saw.
booth y'all had some good shit though
peace