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20 mins due
10 lines
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iight im in son holl up i need to rite my shyt
i suggest you collect your bones,find ah grave and start digin it, your wack
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113956
His shit is prewritten i got the proof im feeding off that^^^^hahah
Yeah when i said 10 lines i guess you thought it was eighteen
How could i expect more from a retard thats fuckin 18......omg lol
Yeah see your soft like laxatation to your bowel movements
i suggest you take your shit back, start seekin some improvements
.....see I like pussy………… just not when it tries to push me
Wanna beat me?...write my name on your dick and light some inscents
its over….. cause dissin Deacons like dissin Christmas
A vet that every newby wishes for on his win list
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i need competition..your nice, but i mean someone with raw rhymes
next to me your just another 'small guy', check your font size!!!//
you get your geek ass, folded and detached, head sawed with an axe
you cant touch me//
the only time 'you left ur pc' was having you right hand molded in a cast
too self doubtfull..cuz i can read your mind like jean gray-in-the x-men//
just tape 'the bible to your sole' so you can have faith-in-your-step-kid
you like justin timeberlake?//
good cuz imma leave your head severed deacon//
make you eat your words so fast your sound waves come out covered-in-ink-leaking//
aint provin shit for-me-yo, your beatin newbies who already adore me bro
youve beaten ……iam at a level where iam beating four of you... //
you indicated I am pussy?..thats some baseless-harmfull disrespect..please!
i sex deep..ask your girl i even left traces-of-lava-on-her-bed-sheets!
son i slaughter-fakes leave you more fucked up than daughter dates//
you got 'mad flow up the ass?' i'll slash your anus and your water-breaks!
grip your expectations and put a two hold on your hopes..your soft
punches i told you to 'bulge-em' instead you packed for europe
you dafuture?...your present and past tense arent even correctly placed-up
shoudve took more time?...
you werent tryin to win!.. talk about aimin for wrong accolades bud
herr nigga iight nigga im out 0n3 uppin for votes
peace
i suggest you collect your bones,find ah grave and start digin it, your wack
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113956
His shit is prewritten i got the proof im feeding off that^^^^hahah
lmao...good punch/personal
Yeah when i said 10 lines i guess you thought it was eighteen
How could i expect more from a retard thats fuckin 18......omg lol
decent
Yeah see your soft like laxatation to your bowel movements
i suggest you take your shit back, start seekin some improvements
decent punch..coulda been flipped better
.....see I like pussy………… just not when it tries to push me
Wanna beat me?...write my name on your dick and light some inscents
lmao...the second part is tight
its over….. cause dissin Deacons like dissin Christmas
A vet that every newby wishes for on his win list
decent punch...only thing i didnt like about your verse
was it wasnt even...try to make them same size and it'll
be doper
i need competition..your nice, but i mean someone with raw rhymes
next to me your just another 'small guy', check your font size!!!//
stretched..aight punch
you get your geek ass, folded and detached, head sawed with an axe
you cant touch me//
the only time 'you left ur pc' was having you right hand molded in a cast
too self doubtfull..cuz i can read your mind like jean gray-in-the x-men//
all of this is so so...but stretched
just tape 'the bible to your sole' so you can have faith-in-your-step-kid
you like justin timeberlake?//
nice
good cuz imma leave your head severed deacon//
make you eat your words so fast your sound waves come out covered-in-ink-leaking//
so so not a personal
aint provin shit for-me-yo, your beatin newbies who already adore me bro
youve beaten ……iam at a level where iam beating four of you... //
blah
you indicated I am pussy?..thats some baseless-harmfull disrespect..please!
i sex deep..ask your girl i even left traces-of-lava-on-her-bed-sheets!
dont use dashes..it look newbish
son i slaughter-fakes leave you more fucked up than daughter dates//
you got 'mad flow up the ass?' i'll slash your anus and your water-breaks!
lol at the second part...but stretched
grip your expectations and put a two hold on your hopes..your soft
punches i told you to 'bulge-em' instead you packed for europe
decent nothing special
you dafuture?...your present and past tense arent even correctly placed-up
shoudve took more time?...
you werent tryin to win!.. talk about aimin for wrong accolades bud
not felling this one sorry
overall i gotta go with deacon...reason...
bones verse was dope but stretched like whoa
deacon just make your bars the same lenth
peep mine with ak mixa
Deacon won...
Bonez....you had a decent flow going except.....it didn't rhyme...at all almost.
I couldn't really understand what the hell you were trying to do. I like the punches...some of them..but they didn't hit because your flow was all off and all I seemed to get was about four good lines.
Deacon....You had a cool flow there..a lot of self glorification..but I say "what's wrong with that?"..I been downtalked for it a lot in the past...I like the punches..very cocky flow..suited to the type of competition you had..but more thatn anything..it RHYMED!
So...with you winning all the categories in my thoughts ...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113614
Deacon cuz of flow both were pretty niice tho keep uppin dat ishh
ThA Ce
ya like they said
vote- deacon
bone definately had his non rhymed words streched and this line
"the only time 'you left ur pc' was having you right hand molded in a cast
too self doubtfull..cuz i can read your mind like jean gray-in-the x-men//"
was your worst, u cant make fun of someone bout bein a nerd then turn around and quote the x-men, chummon
deacon, this rhyme definetly your best, was really good, but i might of heard it before from someone else i might be mistakin if so, real good line.
"Wanna beat me?...write my name on your dick and light some inscents"
that and your opener win this
both of you need ta work on rhymin shit wit a bigger vocab and make sense doin it,
like rhymin 18 with eighteen, dat aint coo, and other guy jus had a lot of bowl like that
vote- deacon
hit up my battle peace, drop a link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107529
makin sure u got that................................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111414
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109960 peep those people i already voted here
Poll fixed.
Deacon took this easy....despit his whack verse....he actually had a few decent punches and personals...the prewritten link had me laughin...Bone...your lines are mad stretched kid...Also no real good personals...and a lot of ya shit is played....Some of ya punches had no relevence either...like the text size one...Blah...Overall Deacon gets my vote for harder punches
Please drop an homest vote here...thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113978
uppin
up..please
I liked both of the styles
flow/ Deacon had a gud flow with nice rhymes and a gud wordplay; Bonez also had a gus flow but I din't felt the same thing as with deacon, I don't what it is but I think it's your structure bonez that got me confused, if your structure was betta you'd have a nice flow
punchlines/ Deacon had some hard punches and bonez....well......he had punches lets put it that way....I felt that deacon's punches ccame harder.....
personals/ They both need to work on their personals, especially bonez cuz his personals were to played while deacon actually gave sum thought bout his personals
multis/they both had a lot of multis goin on, that made the battle more interesting
Overall vote: Deacon cuz his flow and punches were a little bit betta (bonez keep up cuz you're gud, but you need more battles tho)