12-20 lines
No hate, no crew votes, no bullshit or d/r votes either
You drop first
This is my checkin
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12-20 lines
No hate, no crew votes, no bullshit or d/r votes either
You drop first
This is my checkin
Checking in and I'll drop a verse very soon dawg but betta not no show ( I know u won't)
Damn dog i thought you said quick? Im ready.. So spit
(verse)
Ayo, yo, yo, yo
So I flow, he goes low, and flies alone meaning he’s solo
His skills are sleeping, winding, and screaching, call him a yo-yo
I flow so, he has to “Out Come”, or he roasted young and done
The onll way this guy is shocking, is if he was using a stun gun
Don’t run.....I’ll merk ya gentle, so your genitals, look like rentals
You can merk me, I know........................But dreaming is all mental
Burt Rennolds isn’t as old as your rhymes, shit seems lost in time
Like you borrowed some shit from Run-DMC, and some Beastie Boys Lines
Pints and pints, blood not alcohol, so you fall, crash, and crawl
This guy’s style is as plain and flat, as a wood and plastered wall
So the “Out Come” is easy to see, well it is to everyone and me
But to this guy, he wins everything, but that’s as fake as world peace
Man this cats sexuality is like his Avvy, always changing
reps a cru of none talent and hes the daddy there banging
inbreed army, short for dynasty soldiers come duke really
you have no talent, aint godda lie me you wack honestly
You couldnt winnin usin se7en verses against half my lyrics
I know you dont belive in Heaven you dont have enough Spirit
Use you like Casinos, roll 7 twice, cant help double beating your ass
Seein him lose like Snake eyes, tryna get sickness by gainin a rash
Whats wrong man, Did you forget how to really spell Se7en?
I guess it all adds up than, like doublen 7 subtractin 3 an maken eleven
Your just a poor uneducated moakery of todays normal Society
I cut down on the heavie Debaukery. just to win you more lightly
Whats wrong dont like me? All these freash new ideas for you to bite
Of course you like me, aint that right G? just prayin ill Stop being right
Like Sloppy slaughter house Victem i make your verse Dy-nasty
Afraid, cuz this cats a sick one, makes the local whore look trashy
North Carolina, when your prolly just at home beggin to move
But it doesnt bother me, cuz like Pagens to christians your raren to lose
Rap doesnt care about some one wack and white thats found inbreed
Just a shame your crew decided to sacriffice some one so untalented
nice verse dawg, u got my respect as an MC, now let's get some Votes going on in here....................................VOTE PEOPLE VOTE, uppin x1
i liked 7 shit except for those two liek where he was talking bout his flow other then that his hsit was hot
VOTE PEOPLE VOTE, uppin x2................PLEASE VOTE PEOPLE< VOTE
I got to go with outcome on this one...
Breakdown...
Punches-Outcome..nice witty shit...lot's of hard hitting lines
wordplay-Outcome..got a lil too complex at times but still better
Meta's -Outcome I like the complexity here.
Structure-Tie..you both were solid
Sust. outcome..Line for Line Brain Bashing
Overall outcome
i like Outcome's verse better...If you are going to have lines with a low syllable count they better be witty because it is much easier too set up a good line with a longer line. I liked the wordplay involved...he got pretty sick with it...good shit.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113614
Seven just cause I voted against you don't mean you shouldn't vote as well. Just be honest.
nice battle ya'll, both came hot, but i liked outcomes verse a lil more, he had nice word play, some tight punches that connected strong.... se7en not bad, but i feel outcome came a lil harder this battle, props to both yall
vote Outcome
ill poll when i reach 100 posts
Up.
VOTE PEOPLE VOTE, uppin x3................PLEASE VOTE PEOPLE< VOTE
So I flow, he goes low, and flies alone meaning he’s solo
His skills are sleeping, winding, and screaching, call him a yo-yo
This had pretty good flow. good punch.
I flow so, he has to “Out Come”, or he roasted young and done
The onll way this guy is shocking, is if he was using a stun gun
Don’t run.....I’ll merk ya gentle, so your genitals, look like rentals
You can merk me, I know........................But dreaming is all mental
Kinda Weak, but Ok. Your Last Punch is played but it Makes Up.
Like you borrowed some shit from Run-DMC, and some Beastie Boys Lines
Pints and pints, blood not alcohol, so you fall, crash, and crawl
This guy’s style is as plain and flat, as a wood and plastered wall
So the “Out Come” is easy to see, well it is to everyone and me
But to this guy, he wins everything, but that’s as fake as world peace
The beastie Boy Line was your Best Line. Funny as Shit. good flow and Finsh.
the world peace line was ok.
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Man this cats sexuality is like his Avvy, always changing
reps a cru of none talent and hes the daddy there banging
The opener was Nice. finisher was Ok. could have been alot better.
Like Sloppy slaughter house Victem i make your verse Dy-nasty
Afraid, cuz this cats a sick one, makes the local whore look trashy
Clever. personal. cant argue. pretty nice. finisher's Not bad.
Rap doesnt care about some one wack and white thats found inbreed
Just a shame your crew decided to sacriffice some one so untalented
This Line is Kinda Wierd. the end doesnt sound like it has a hooking ryme which can make a line sound Right, but it does sound right. Hard diss too.
Over-all.. both of you had good verses.. Outcome simply took this with a Vetren attitude in his Verse.
Vote-OutCome.
Sorry, i dont think i can POLL vote yet.
close one but i would have to say out come got this one if i could vote he had better punches and a nice structuer........7 your shit was prety good i was feelin some of the lines but u fell of acouple of time thats what made this real close....good battle by both MC
im going for outcome in this one...
outcome.:nice smooth flow and good hard hittin punches which conected..good opener and closer:.
se7en.:alrite flow it was a bit patchy though,punches were just as hard but a couple of them missed the target,you also had a good opener and closer...
Vote.::.outcome he had more punches and a smoother flow
Good battle though no hate!....
Please .:hit this up for me in return,itook the time on your battle:.
O ijus realsied ididnt drop the link sorri ididnt do that on purpose.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113483
thanx alot.......
Alright upping for votes. Thanks rascal ill peep that later.
up.
Se7en~ you came with played lines again....nothing too creative....and more useless multis that didn't fit in as punches/metas/multis....Overall jus an ok verse....try and be more original in your rhymes....Seems like you jus threw words in there somwtimes jus so it would rhyme....
OutCome~ Stay away form sex/gay jokes as they are all mad played...Otherwise you threw somwe pretty decent personals and punches....try and shorten your lines a bit so they aren't so stretched.....metas were ok...but coulda been more creative...a good verse
Outcome wins this for a harder hitting verse...more of his punches/personals/metas landed
Please drop an honest vote here guys...it would be much appreciated http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113550
up.....
this was a very weak battle.. seven you had some pretty basic and played out disses.. i dint see much skill in your rhyme.. you had some weak disses like that beasty boys line.. and your wordplay was seriously lacking.. try and include some more creative disses and improve your wordplay next time
outcome- your verse was weak also.. however i feel like you had some pretty ok personals i liked how you talked bout his crew and all that.. seriously your wordplay was better than sevens
vote- outcome
yo hit this battle up man its been up for a couple days now and it needs votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113409
Last up 3-0 two more folks...
Page three, godda up.
yoo outcome got this for a lot of reasons
he had better flow and structure
his punches hit harder
personals were there
and verse was good
seven had no good personals
punches were so so
flow and structure was ok
but outcome gets it for better punches and opersoanmls
v/outcome\
hit that battle up
flow-7
punches-out
creativity-out
consistancy-out
personals-out
7 u have a good flow.. but u choose weird ways to word your lines.. the first 2 bars, the way u were using the flow yo goes low shit it rhymed but it wasnt heading anywhere u know what im saying, ur flow has to say something to hit your opponent.. u had some kool disses not a bad verse, just work on intertwining the punches and the flow.. out had a somewhat simple flow at times.. but the punches and personals were there to make up for it, and also more consistancy, so he edged this match.. vote-out return an honest vote plz.. i already had one cat vote to spite me cuz i voted honest on his battle, im not saying u would but shit like makes battling not fun.. no hate or beef
this battles hot and gettin slept
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114402