flash |VS| :)

[Liquid Content]

no feeding
no hate/dr/crew votes
spit 20mins afta check in

10-15 lines

you spit first

[Liquid Content]

iight i called out anyone and you answerd so lets see what you got

[Under Dawg]

hahahahahaha.. wait man let me type some shit up homie

[Liquid Content]

iight i gotta spit first cause i dont got time to wait...so this is my check in and flow


i know that you or your boy dont need to be talkin trash
both you play your skin flutes so much you got milk mustashes
you call yourself the best but you aint numba 1 or even the best
there just aint no way you gonna be winning this rap contest
and the fact remains wen i pull out da glock,ya'll betta dash
ya motha should a left u wen she found u in da trash
You cant handle my metafives or duck my punch lines
Ill eat this cat up like big pun at lunch time
Fuck the vocab. before I burst like a bubble
You know if you start to mess with me there is gonna be trouble
My lyrics are like AIDS cuz they spread for sure
Don’t try 2 mess wit me cuz there wont be any cure
bash-n-hit, wouldn't make the cut if ya packed-a-switch
Ya lack-the-wits, my voice boomin like I'm clappin-clips
You wouldn't hold hot rhymes if you grabbed-my-lips

[Liquid Content]

and yeah i know that my structure is fucked up but i dont got time to waste...but im out...ill be back lata to see what happend...and people betta vote on this shit

[Under Dawg]

listen kid

everytime your voice gets SPOKE IN TRACKS, people just break out in OPEN LAUGHS,
your the biggest JOKE IN RAP
a verse of yours is bout as advanced as lyrics written by mc hammer after SMOKIN CRACK
your brain must have BROKE AN SMASHED,
or either as a child you got dropped on your MIND PLATE
cuz your logic just doesnt LINE STRAIGHT
you could obtain a higher IQ than yours by testing a PRIME APE
youll never FIND PAPES (dollars)
matter of fact youll always BE WACK
kid couldnt get a "buzz" of your raps by stickin your lyrics in a den of BEESWAX

you cant COMPETE, and you've never battled a respectable rapper and had them BEAT
your WEAK, your lyrics written on SHEETS are like "ice cream cones" cuz they melt when in the contact of HEAT

beating me is something you dont have a SAFE CHANCE IN
your should follow your avy and just stick to BREAK DANCING

[Liquid Content]

yo man you gonna spit anytime soon...i aint got much time!

[Under Dawg]

wtf? i just spit dumbass lol.. are you alright man.............................

[Under Dawg]

uppin for votes.. just drop your links and we will return the favor.

[Under Dawg]

upping............................................ ....

[Mentality]

aight yo wins this one for better punches multis and flow
the other guy had the better structure though

fix up ur structure and dont cap everything

but a good verse and for bnetter punches harder hitting punches and more direct punches...my vote goes to

v/

hit up my battles in the sig please
thanks

[Tactixx]

-took this one, his rhyme structure and punches were on,nice personals and flow
flash-your punches were kinda weak i didnt like the mustache line too much...the vocab was pretty basic...i've seen alot better from you man......good job...

vote: (smiley)

return some votes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113431

[C_Lo]

wud up yall been awhile since ive been on this site, but imll drop a vote on yalls battle, not bad both of u....... i was feelin verse a lil more than flash, dawg u need to work on the structure and punches

took this with better punches and flow, nice drop playa................ one

[Under Dawg]

dang man i should have made this open for anyone with anypost amount to be able to vote.. cuz if so i would be up 3 to 0 already.. uppin for more votes

[C_Lo]

my bad i aint gotta enuf posts to poll, when i get em ill poll my vote sorry bout that hollllllllaaaaaaaaa