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No cheating..spit as soon as you can..but no prewrite bullshit..and no feedin..check in before you spit..or dont check in and just spit..since you're on right now and the last time you battled you key'ed up a verse do it again..so try to spit tonight.. :thumbup: goodluck..
checking in................................................ .
[Kyrogenix talking in his girlish voice:] umm yea...my name used to be Dixie Normous because my dick is enormous!
[T-West:] Yea-right-you-small~penised...internet-living-fuck!-lemme-end-dis-quick
God will punish those who lie since that's a form of sin...
imma help him on his mission and with Kyro...I begin!
Beating down Kyro was my urge, but to kill him is my plan
have him marked for death like he's a sacrifical lamb
Lookin at skill and record...I'm better, our visions don't lie
Nobody watched ya leave the execs...they gave me the other "I"!
KyroGenix sounds like a name dat'd make a teacher flatter'd...
sounds like a scientific term...too bad ya verse dont matter!
Kyro is drawin himself a line...that states that he cant win...
i would call ya stencil...
...but you ain't in the boundaries that I.Q lies in!
Kyro losin pace in this race, the winner always prevails…
He's trying to hammer my verse...but his punches dont nail...
Yea, I'm like Ja...both look like dogs and are always bitchin...
Would say ur shit...
...but since my verse own urs...i'd get charged for litterin!
oh my fuckin god..I posted this shit in elevated frontlines..and you come with that bullshit?:wtf:..okay..
It's funny, your real name's Tristen, but you're going by T West
And to show you my best,I'll stick a bell in your throat...
..just to ring your neck..
You beat me once,and then your ego swole up to heaven
I tried to calm you down,but by the looks of your pics...
..you're already big headed..
Begging to be a lethal lyricist, but Feeble told you to go to hell
You should thank him....
...he saved you from all them LLL's...
I admit..I was pissed, when I got your moms pregnant and shit..
And you were lucky to survive the abortion...
..but now I'm about to finish it..
You might as well stick to the net,you have no chance of gettin signed bro..
And it's sad..T west is living proof...
..that nothing good comes from Toronto..
Im really tryin' not to smack you..cause I was raised not to hit a chick..
But aw shit, with a name like Tristen..
..You make it hard to resist...
To see a wack rapper kids, turn to West for a perfect example..
And all bets down, you can bet your life on this battle..
...but it's not worth the gamble..
uppin
Kryogeneix-good personals awsome... came hard wit them
your punches were better and u had good flow/structure,
metas good... multis didnt see none...
T-West-Also no multis... i wusn't feeling your punches,
for elevated this was a weak verse,,, u shouldn't be expectiong,
easy wins in an elevated battle... come hard in elevated battles,
you didnt really have no personals in the verse really only had...
in the intro... it flowed n had good structure that's about it...
My V/Kryogenix... hit up my topical with rule in elevated
umm..some poll votes would surely be appreciated..uh huh..they sure would..so vote...!!!!
uppin for sum votes...............................
ummm..any votes?....
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uppin this shit for my crew fam...peace...
also..in my opinion..I think Kryo got this shit..he had a punch in every single bar...T WEST cam weak to be in elite..
uppin for voters who can poll
T West - nicest drop iv seen from u yet.. impressive.. very consistant.. used the personals to full advantage.. non-stop punches an a flow that altho wasnt amazin it still did the job an didnt fall off.. didnt like ya opener.. but the closer was witty.. nice metas thruout.. minimal played lines too.. props..
Kry - not ya best by a long shot.. opened weak.. an up until half way thru ya verse u stayed that way.. alot of played concepts an stretched lines made the punches lack any force.. u picked it up half way thru an ended wiv some dope lines.. if ud keyed like that fa the whole verse u woulda taken this.. but cos of the bad start an inconsistancy i felt u let yaself down..
VoTe = T-West
For a consistantly harder-hittin personal verse..
Could u drop a vote on this plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114168
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upin for more votes
T West=nice, could have been better i guess
Kyro=good come back, nice
my vote=T West
..bullshit ass vote..and T West..hw many times are you gonna get a mod to edit your verse?..first you asked Feeble Minded to edit..now you asking Token?...wtf?..you adding shit or what?...Quote:
Originally Posted by illtalic
uppin for some real damn votes..
lol, actually, the executive line was a personal...kinda funny how they dropped u to let me in...and i rejected der proposal. and stop ur fuckin swaying jackass. Feeble Minded never touched my verse, only Token did.
And the only thing token did, was change one word I put wrong...I accidentally put implaed instead of hammered and thats all token did. You lost this battle Kyrogenix...admit it.
Ask any respected battler here and they'll tell u that u lost.
good battle i thought here.....
t west - good structure....good flow....some OK punches...personals were eh...
wordplay was decent.....consostency & direct hits were scattered....vocab was ok....
but i dont think you came hard enough ...disses just lacked and punches were barely reaching....witt lacked as well ....but decent verse... 9/20
kyro - good strucutre....helped the flow alot.....good punches and personals....they hit pretty hard and came across direct to the point.....wordplay was pretty good too...
vocab and metas were also up tp par....a very decent verse by kyro ...much harder hitting....more witt ... and just a better overall verse
vote - kyro
please both you return the favor here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115394
lmao..are you serious?..why did Illunatic IM me on aim and told me to join because you left..dont lie..and you didnt replace me..do thats a fake personal..Daz was just on yuor dick and he didnt want me in the crew..so thats a fake personal...Quote:
Originally Posted by T West
and btw..Ambitious is a respected battler..he's also known as Meks..and who did he just vote for?...my point exactly..
lets get some real votes now..
and also..lmao @ you putting that you merked me in your sig...
First off your intro Twest was gay.. this is text, why the fuck are you even attemping to have intros and with captions to tell us what kind of voice.. Lmao man..
God will punish those who lie since that's a form of sin...
imma help him on his mission and with Kyro...I begin!
you really could have worked this better. you could have made better connections through the lines and added a better punch, era i mean added A punch
Beating down Kyro was my urge, but to kill him is my plan
have him marked for death like he's a sacrifical lamb
weak really, it follows connection through your lines but it isnt much really
Lookin at skill and record...I'm better, our visions don't lie
Nobody watched ya leave the execs...they gave me the other "I"!
there isnt any real punch truthfully you lack direction in your punchs but the metaphors are alright i suppose
KyroGenix sounds like a name dat'd make a teacher flatter'd...
sounds like a scientific term...too bad ya verse dont matter!
good bar really i liked it, over all it flowed well with the other (connection wise)
Kyro is drawin himself a line...that states that he cant win...
i would call ya stencil...
...but you ain't in the boundaries that I.Q lies in!
this was an alright bar but the follow through could have been put better with the sets.
Kyro losin pace in this race, the winner always prevails…
He's trying to hammer my verse...but his punches dont nail...
basic with your follow through really. the set was just weak and lacked good metaphor really
Yea, I'm like Ja...both look like dogs and are always bitchin...
Would say ur shit...
...but since my verse own urs...i'd get charged for litterin!
um.. what? im sorry but this bar lacked sence to me as far as anythign with connection went. you needed to work on the connection man really.
Your verse lacked direction as wel as punchs, it was a basic verse with basic things in it, IE metaphors punchs vocabulary structure etc etc.. chopping your over drawn bars in half trying to add more room so they dont make your ish look any more ill. sorry for the harshness but its true.
Unfortunatly this skill thinks so.. sorry kid im just pissed at FL and your my target. really your verse was decent but nothing specil.
you Kry dont take the lords name in vien, except the votes quit bitch... this is text and its sad to even see you getting mad at the fact some oneelse votes against you.. really.
It's funny, your real name's Tristen, but you're going by T West
And to show you my best,I'll stick a bell in your throat...
..just to ring your neck..
see this is what im talking about. Rapbattles ruined the bar.... Eh over all if these are personals then there alright. the follow through has been done.. on this board before.. its basic and really lacks punchs.
You beat me once,and then your ego swole up to heaven
I tried to calm you down,but by the looks of your pics...
..you're already big headed..
again, this is what im talking about.. over drawn bars.. damn.. thats just sad.
i understand its to help people try and read it better.. i hope.. but its just over drawn plain and simple. and you lack inners with it which makes it MUCH worse... the punchs here are alright. but the set was filler ish
Begging to be a lethal lyricist, but Feeble told you to go to hell
You should thank him....
...he saved you from all them LLL's...
you didnt need LLL really it makes it wack and forces an explanation on the reader. good personal attempt
I admit..I was pissed, when I got your moms pregnant and shit..
And you were lucky to survive the abortion...
..but now I'm about to finish it..
weak.. very, ive heard this concept before like a few years ago. you lacked punchs.
You might as well stick to the net,you have no chance of gettin signed bro..
And it's sad..T west is living proof...
..that nothing good comes from Toronto..
alright personal i suppose. the punch here was good, but wasnt that strong at all
Im really tryin' not to smack you..cause I was raised not to hit a chick..
But aw shit, with a name like Tristen..
..You make it hard to resist...
weak and very much a played concept in general
To see a wack rapper kids, turn to West for a perfect example..
And all bets down, you can bet your life on this battle..
...but it's not worth the gamble..
eh weak ending could have been better, the punch wasnt muchat all and really lacked strength
over all you started decent adn really fell off Kry kinda liek that tourny dog (what happened with that huh?) i though you could have used alot better metaphors in general along with a better structure and rhyme scheme that isnt over drawn an seemingly played.this was sort of generic.
vote-t west
i suppose the style was a little more creative, although lacking alot more personals in this battle he took it with a better style and more metaphors with a little betterpunchs but not by much. but really the matter line took it for him
Drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114834
Opener-Kryo
Punches-Kryo(more and better personals)
Metas-Tie(Both had some pretty good metas)
Multis-Tie(not to many from either)
Structure/Flow-T West(Flowed smoother than Kryo)
Wordplay-Kryo(Flipped his words more Than T West)
Closer-Kryo
Even though Kryo took more of the subjects of the battle it was still pretty close. If T West had some better puncehs he might have had a better chance but i give it to Kryo
VOTE_KRYO
OPEN BATTLE(DA KID vs. KO WARNING'S)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116477
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